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Reviewer: emilij (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I have really enjoyed your story. You have kept the characters true to their personalities from the Twilight series, and I think that must take a lot of talent. I can't wait to read your next chapters!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
The whole "us" epiphany and how he heard it, but still wanted her to say it out loud - so beautiful.
Freaking Tanya... I don't usually find her so annoying in AUs... usually just the AHs... but I just want to smack her around. But I did love her "newborn" mutter:-)
Reviewer: Jessi (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Wonderful story!
I stumbled over here from reading your other story, the list. You're a wonderful writer and please update soon!
I'd be so very grateful *bats eyelashes*
Reviewer: EmeraldsTwistedSister (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Completely enjoying your story, thank you.
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
I really enjoyed this chapter not sure when I'll get to read the next chapter but I hope it is soon.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: jess25 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
OMG I need another chapter sooo bad
Reviewer: jess25 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Oh my what an awesome chapter
Reviewer: jess25 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I love the story so far cant seem to pull myself away to review soory good concept and very addicting I love it
Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
The visual of Bella letting all of her hurt and anger go was great!! Looking forward to next chapter! :)
Reviewer: holnico (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I love this chapter. He needs to pop the question already, they have known each other for almost two years now so come on. Also love the Tanya anle she is definitely persitent, and hope to see more of her tricks, it makes the story both funny and intriguing.Update soon, I will be monitoring for new updates.
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
oh.wowwowowowowow.it's really beautiful.The dating thing with Edward it's so perfect.They never leally had that.It's so amazing i can't wait for your next chapter.Please write one or more soon.please.
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Grrr--Tanya strikes again! But this time, Bella made sure Tanya understood what was hers. Loved that Rosalie stepped in and told her to back down, too. Hopefully she gets it now, that Edward is taken for eternity.
Can't wait for their date! Hopefully they won't have any um, interruptions this time.
Great update!
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
I was touched when Carlisle welcomed Bella into the family. Nice job.
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
Liking the story so far. Think Edward should grovel more. Keep writing!
Reviewer: melsie69 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
LOVED this chapter. Loved fierce, possessive Bella. Though I was kinds wishing she would toss Tanya out of the house (literally). Looking forward to the date.
Reviewer: Sawatari_Makoto (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I love this story!! I hope the next chapter comes soon! I'm so glad Bella and Edward are happy again :)
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Fantastic = ) Yours is the kind of story I can read over and over and over again. I hope this is a nice, long story! Thank you - it seriously is incredible! Keep the chapters comin!! = D
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Loving the twist with B's shield so E & J can hear/feel her and the possibility that she could eventually access their powers as well. I was hoping for a Tanya throw down but you were much more tasteful than I'd have been - hopefully she gets hers eventually.
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Thanks for the juicy goodness since I can never get enough of that! This is really a great read and I'm checking your profile for more info on the original publication you spoke of before. Keep us posted if we can read your stuff elsewhere. Looking forward to Victoria as well-
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
OOOOHH, so many unanswered questions, so many possibilities! I'm really into this, so thanks-
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
So far this is fabulous!! I am a Twilight freak who can't get enough in any form and this is just all new and intriguing - Thanks!
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
I love the new concept and have read right through without leaving a single review - sorry!! I just want to keep going to see what happens! Thanks for the quality writing since I can't stand to read crap--
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
This story is truly amazing, you are a very talented writter.
Brie,
Live, Love, Twilight, and Don't Forget the Sparkle
Reviewer: Taigh (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Mine! *glomps Edward*
Reviewer: tabs (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
i desperately want to see tanya taken down a peg! i couldnt believe the nerve of her... and right in front of not only bella but her whole family! it was the ultimate in disrespect. the cullens need to make it clear to her that she is not welcome in their house again if she does a repeat performance! it would be interesting to know what happened at the house after edward and bella left. i dont know whos POV i want to hear it from though! i guess i just want to know that tanya didnt get away with it without someone acknowledging how rude and bitchy she was being.
p.s. youre awesome!!! :)
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