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Reviewer: SaraiR88 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
WOW. I read all 3 of your stories completely in less than 24hours! I am hooked. I cannot wait until you write more chapters to "while you were gone" as well as "the list" I cannot wait!
Reviewer: Marliarna (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
I really love your work. You've taken Bella from a starry-eyed adolescent to a grown woman with a backbone and a mind of her own.
I also love that they can hear each other. I wanted that to happen at the end of BD, but SM faded to black way too soon. I've always wondered what making love would be like for them if they were able to share their thoughts/feel what the other is feeling. Probably the best damn orgasm in the history of the universe. *Sigh.*
Reviewer: mnabbott (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
late spring is the best for the Northern Lights, as the summer is mostly light outside and such. I kind of love that Edward's all, "marriage, meh"
Reviewer: dm1995 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
This chapter is well written, a little rushed, but still good...
What's your novel's name?
Reviewer: harmonyrenesmee1 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Freaking Fantastic chicka - I'm speehless.
Reviewer: harmonyrenesmee1 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Competely love it - but Embry is the one that was Jacob's friend for years. Not Jared.
On to the next chapter =D.
God your writing is amazing.
Reviewer: deliriumswake (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
i'm sitting on the edge of my seat, dying to know what comes next!
your writing is beautiful. you are an inspiration. thanks so much.
Reviewer: deliriumswake (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
i've been debating this scenario since first reading the books. thank you for finally eploring this option for me.
i love your writing. keep it up!
Reviewer: cvap100 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Wonderful!!! You are an extremely gifted writer. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: cvap100 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Great job really!! This story is so unique. You have done well. I love how you included Tanya and Elelazar in it. I have read straight through this story of yours as well. : ) You are truely gifted. I hope you did well in your contest. This spin is so cool. I love the turn of events and how cool it was when Bella stood up to Tanya. I like this stronger Bella.
Michelle
Reviewer: northernlight (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Well The northernlights keep a special place in my heart, I love that they are a part of your story they are a truely amazing sight, I have seen them many times in Northern Ontario where I live.
I love that Bella can here Edward too it is great that she is so powerful, I can't wait to see what Jake brings to the table. as I suspect Nessie is not going to make an entrance.
Keep up the good work you rock Lady It feels like you have been in my head.
Reviewer: twilightzone (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
I just LOVE this story! You are an excellent writer! The date was so romantic. I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
I am on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to read more... you are amazing. :)
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
First off those pics are amazing. Beautiful! I would love to see the lights in person myself. I guess that's something for me to add to my bucket list too! LOL
Okay I have to say that that proposal is absolutely the best one I have read in any of the fics that I have read (and I have read a lot hehe). That was the most heartfelt, raw, beautiful and honest proposal ever. I love how he laid it all out on the line and that he bared his soul in that way. But I think what I love most is Bella's reaction. It was not anything like the way she responded in Eclipse (which still bugs the shit out of me) She was mature and reacted in a way that someone should react when they are in love and want to spend their life with that person. She isn't ready right now, understandably, but she makes it clear to Edward that she loves him and that she will be ready. Taking the gesture and understanding the symbolic nature of the fact that this is his mothers ring, asking if she can wear it around her neck until she is ready was perfect. I love that this allowed him to know that she was willing and wanted this as well but she just wasn't ready yet. It was beautiful. Wonderful chapter.
Oh I can't believe Jake is there! Why would he follow them to Alaska? Oh I can't wait to see what this is all about!!! That is going to be epic!!!
Reviewer: rosy1015 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
OMG im so loving your story... please post new chapters....
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
omg you have no idea how much i love this story! was soo happy when i looked and saw that you had updated it! can't wait to see what happens next! update soon pleeeaaassseee!
=D
Reviewer: Exactly_My_Brand_of_H (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
I love this. It's so different from most of the 'Bella gets bitten while Edward is gone in New Moon' stories. Your characterization of Bella is perfect and well written. I really like getting to see important scenes in both Edward and Bella's points of view. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: Noa (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Loved it...more please!
Reviewer: Shell_Linkin (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Fantastic! I got absolutely no work done today but oh well. I love your writing and how well you capture the characters. I'm as addicted to this as I am the list.
BTW I understand why Bella turned Edward down, but holy crow is she insane?! Lol.
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
I absolutely adore this story..From the very beginning this has been one of my favorite stories on this site. You have really captured the joy and fun they are havng just being together. Even though there are admittedly problems to work out you always somehow show their abiding happiness they have in each other.
I hope you have other stories on this site and in your head.
Reviewer: tookool2c (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Just keep writing, just keep writing, just keep writing writing writing....what do you do - you write write write....lol
I sang that for you in my Dory from nemo voice, So plz, keep writing!
Reviewer: tookool2c (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
I love it! It's a very interesting story, and I feel like it's real...you know, like this could really happen to her.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
I lived in Alaska a few years and the Northern lights where beautiful. You picked a beautiful date for the two of them to got on.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
I love this story!I just am getting caught up.Post soon.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for my 1000th review!
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
i had to say it was a romantic date and proposal.And it was also so funny the scene with the scrabble.But WHAT?WHAT?WHAT?DID JAKOB SAW THEM HAVING SEX OR SOMETHING?WHAT?YOU GAVE ME A HEART ATTACK.PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME IF HE SAW THEM BECAUSE I'LL JUST DIE FROM ANXIETY.good job anyways.
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