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Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
I can't wait and I hope Bella does more damage than Victoria and that Edward comes for support somehow. This was a great chapter!!
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
GREAT chapter!!!! I look forward to the next. I really want to see Bella tear into Victoria. Of course I know Edward wants a piece of her too, but Bella really needs to sink her teeth into her as well. Hope you update soon.
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
AH! Now that is a cliffhanger... yeah. This installment was pure greatness. I love the incident with Tanya... ugh she is so infuriating! There really WAS a lot to this chapter, wasn't there?! Well, I'm glad that Charlie is getting better. Oh I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next update! =D =D
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
:O why is she going on her own? she promised Roslaie that Rose could help! ah! so can't wait for more after this fab chapter - awesomeness on a stick
Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Oh my! Can I just say that I loved the scene between Bella and Tanya? I was so hoping Bella would take her down and call her out! That was awesome! I love how possessive of Edward Bella is feeling!!! She's a force to be reckoned with now!!!
This story is very compelling...I had to go back and reread the last couple of chapters to refresh my mind on what was going on. I had kind of forgotten about Victoria with everything else going on. I'm guess that Bella is going to be making Victoria pay dearly for hurting Charlie. Love the story...keep up the great work! :o)
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
wow ud soon
Reviewer: redsnapdragon (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Ooh, great update, love the Bella-beatdown of Tanya. I feel we haven't seen the last of her, she and Victoria have something in common, both would like to see Bella dead. Even if Bella can keep Edward out of her head, won't Alice see her furture plans? Hope to read more soon, keep it up and thanks!
Reviewer: Lenore (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Ugh! Hurry! It's getting so good!
Reviewer: annienow (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Great chapter. I thought it was cool that Bella could hear everyones thoughts and get a sense of what Edward has to deal with. I really hope she is smarter this time and doesn't keep meeting Victoria to herself.
Reviewer: lovestwilight (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
Great story. Keep it up. You are a great writer.
Reviewer: erinbatt (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Worth the wait! Can't wait to see a great showdown between Vic and Bella!
Did Edward hear her before she made a point to lock down that shield...? His breath caught as he stepped out onto the verandah....huh...?
LOVE IT!
Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
That Tanya... Tsk.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
I love when Bella lets loose on Tanya! Awesome!
Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Great Story! I hope we dont have to wait too long for the next installment!!
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Why do I get the feeling Tanya is in cahoots with Victoria?
Can't wait till the next installment......
Reviewer: x_theaddiction (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
love it, canttt wait. ausome story.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Great chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
ha finally some one wrote a tanya beating worth reading nicely done
Reviewer: purplespiderscalling (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Hurry up and write more and there will be cookies!!!!!!
Well, pretend internet cookies, but cookies just the same...
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
So full of stuff again!! Awesome!
Is Bella really going to try to fight with Victoria on her own?? Typical Bella!
Reviewer: X_Team_Edward_X (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Well that was a suprise! It kind of has a similarity to Twilight when she runs to James to save her mother.
I like it. It's a good idea.
Reviewer: crazycoffeemom (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
ok i cant wait to see what bella does with victoria but i want to know what the others thought of her fight with tanya lol that was awesome and i want to know what tanya was thinking when she smirked and left. what was she thinking when she saw the crest. cant wait to see.
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Laura u have no idea how much i love u and your stories,this keeps getting better and better,poor Charlie though.
LOVED the Tanya beat down!!!! bitch deserved,never liked her in the books,i love this action packed story.
Hope u feel better soon!!!u got a big fan here.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
I THINK IT IS JUST STUPID OF BELLA TO MEET WITH VICTORIA ALONE......DOES SHE EVEN THINK SHE COULD BE KILLED???? AND LEAVE EDWARD ALONE..................WITH TANYA ??????? SO MESSED UP..... TANYA REALLY DESERVES TO BE KILLED OFF IN A FIGHT OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!!!SNOOPING IN THEIR DRAWERS????
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
I completely enjoyed the throwdown with Tanya. What a bitch! She totally deserved it. Victoria seems like she's asking for it, too, with her invitation. Should be interesting to hear what happens!
And hopefully Charlie will make a full recovery...poor guy.
xoxo Sarah
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