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Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
i love that tanya got hers!! love it!
Reviewer: BeCullen1 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Another great chapter. Good job and please update again soon.
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Great chapter, I love how you incorporated not only the dreams from the series but also how Bella learns to manipulate her shield, with your own personal twist.
Can't wait to see how the confrontation goes down. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Melooza (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
I just finished everything and I can't wait for more. Well done!!!
Reviewer: RobertLover (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
WOW!!!!This story is fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapters. Edward is gona be so pissed that Bella is keeping that note from him. I am on the edge of my seat now waiting for the next update. Awesome writing. Laura you are so talented and I absolutely love "The List" too!!!!
Reviewer: lowbatterysound (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Not sure if you're continuing this story (I just found this site and all of your stories a couple weeks ago) but I have to tell you how awesome your writing skills are. You've successfully thrown me into a roller coaster of emotions and caused me to lose myself in the story, just as any good author would. So, thank you, for giving me a short break in the day in which I can relish in my Twilight obsession. In a previous chapter, one heartwrenching seen that I loved was when Bella said goodbye to the trees. Also, thank you for having Bella take charge and be the strong girl we all want her to be. Keep writing, please! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! Yes, this story is still in progress. Ch. 15 was submitted to the validating beta several days ago and should be posted soon. After that, I suspect there will be another 2 chapters (17 total).
Reviewer: Misstiggy (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
I read through the whole lot before reviewing, I thought it only polite to finish it off to some degree :)
I'm loving this, please don't stop!!
-Jen
Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Awesome story!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
I just read the whole story so far and am so hooked. I love that Bella is stronger and has grown a backbone. She is really setting Edward straight (she always is too forgiving to him). I love the Bella/Tanya fight. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review! Chapter 15 has been submitted and will hopefully be posted in the next day or two!
Reviewer: silviababy (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
i loved it i added you as a fav author and story this is not a seriuos threast but i want more give me more i mean more n ow thank u wwith a smile
Reviewer: Penny Luck (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
WOW! It feels like I'm reading a book by SM. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Hard to review when I want to get on to the next chapter. ;)
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Best date ever, best proposal ever, best lovemaking ever, best moment ever.
They connect in so many leves that it overwhelms me so,that I can not read at a steady pace, I find that at times i have to stop to catch a breath and take in everything you wrote bit by bit. The visualization that you creat sucks me inside the story. It's amazing.
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Us
Oh my god thisb should have had been on the book, OMG Bella is going to be a BAD ASS.
You are an insane writer, Keep up the fantastic work.
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Yay!!!!!!!! am so happy loveitloveitloveit.
Reviewer: Tilla Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
UGH! WOW! I would so happily read anything you got published. You are an amazing writer! Thank you! Oh, and more, more, more please! I can't believe you left it all cliffy like that! UGH! :)
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
Oh god am so happy this chapter is so good, I cant believe how quick i have read this.
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
I was waiting for EPOV, Great.
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
OH this is getting good.
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Yay this going to be good
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
OMG!OMG!OMG!!! THIS STORY IS AMAZZING!!!!
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
OMG!OMG!OMG!!! THIS STORY IS AMAZZING!!!!
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
OMG!OMG!OMG!!! THIS STORY IS AMAZZING!!!!
Reviewer: lomitch (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
OOOOOOHHHHH MMMYYYY! These last few chapters have been AWESOME!! Thank you for a great read so far...can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
WRITE!!!!!!!!! this is my fav story that i've read on the site so far you have to fini it BEFORE i explode!!!!
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