Reviewer: ellegirl89 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2012 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I love that you're bringing up the pre-cog dreams Bella has in the series. It always bothered me it was never addressed. I love the powers you gave her! Amazing story!!
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Hottt!
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
I think instead of bloodlust Bella should struggle with "lust" in general and have a go at all the Cullen men....and a few of the wolves as well. It wouldn't be her fault, just an uncontrolled newborn reaction. (LOL)
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
Jake is going to need some members to complete his pack .....
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
I LOVE YOU TOO EDWARD, But you are still an idiot !
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 6: Reunions
What about my Jakey???
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
You really stayed true to the characters, I can see this playing out easlily with that one crucial change - Jake not arriving in time to stop Laurent. Very well done, I am really enjoying this.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 4: Revelations
AWW, Jakey is being a gaurd dog.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 3: Visions
Sounds like the smart move would be to send Jazz
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Meadow
Nice start, can't wait to see where this goes.
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
I enjoyed this story. It was sad at first when Bella was turned by Laurent. But it had a great ending. I loved that Bella could use her shield for more than defense.
Reviewer: gykinga (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
Ah, what a beautiful story! I was afraid of what you would make of this new situation you created but both Edward and Bella came together growing in their relationship. Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: charmtiarn (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
I love this book, I was on the train while I was reading this and I missed my station and had to get my mum to come pick me up. Your an amazing author I absolutley love your book The List.
Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Love it!!
Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
OMGosh! I am loving this :)
Reviewer: maz2401 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 5: Waiting
Want to review but can't stop reading...so good!
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 17: Together, Forever
The precog dream totally made me cry. "Miss you, little girl." Big tears! Thank you for the wonderful story! I'm going to look for your original work. Congratulations!
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 16: Fighting for Our Loves
Action-packed, suspenseful, and satisfying chapter. I was so worried one of the Cullens would be injured or worse. Thank you for keeping them safe. "Stun" power (or should it be "pause" power) was brilliant!
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Brilliant. Love that you made her a precognitive mimic. Very cool abilities!
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 14: Attack
Tanya is an idiot. Score another for Bella.
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Date
Loved how they realize they're "mated." Why do I have a bad feeling about Jake. Hope he's okay.
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 12: Us
I hate that Tanya! Score 1 for Bella. She's one tough cookie now.
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Beautifully written. Romantic. Passion-filled. And I love that Edward seems abashed at being able to hear Bella.
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
Who's a good boy?! Jake's a good boy! Jake-y, Jake-y!!
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
Soooo romantic and heartwrenching. Your descriptive and carefully crafted phrases evoke such emotion. I felt angry at Edward; I hurt for Bella. Love this story!
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