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Reviews For Breathe Again
Reviewer: ForThe Love of Edward (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Perceptions: Jacob's POV

Poor Jake, lol.  Don't know if I should slap him or kiss him!

Reviewer: lovemesomejacob (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

I'm dying for you to finish this story.  Are you posting it elsewhere?  I went to your livejournal and couldn't figure out if you were or not.

Reviewer: dejachar (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

So does that mean that Quil imprinted on Claire like in the book?

Reviewer: dejachar (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

whose golden eyes are the second pair could it be edward?

Reviewer: whoaacxh37 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

i am finally caught up! this is such an awesome perspective on what could have happened and, for the most part, completely in character. edward's upcoming return worries me, but based on what you've got so far, i'm sure whatever happens will be great. even if bella somehow ends up with mike.. okay, maybe not then.. 

i also wanted to mention what you said earlier in your author's note about bipolarity. i'm really glad you're able to accept and joke about the situation because being in denial doesn't help. i lost quite a few years with my mother because she couldn't accept what was happening and i hope she'll be able to get to where you seem to be some day.

on this chapter specifically: i love the way you capture the awkward relationship between bella and charlie. i'm also really looking forward to see what happens with the shopping trip and quil's imprinting on claire. oh, and of course that romantic dinner jake's planning on making. he's so sweet(:

Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:25 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

tried to review earlier but I'm not sure if it worked so I'll try again. I was a little nervous about who was going to imprint. I only want to see Jake with either Bella or Nessie noone else. So you can imagine that I about had a heartattack thinking that he was going to imprint on someone random. I'm glad to see Quill imprint on claire... can't wait to read more about that later!

Reviewer: Siruka (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

lol!!! Q&C forever!!!!

Reviewer: Reese1603 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV

Responding to your question at the end of chapter 51. I am team Edward...mainly because I know that even though Bella loves Jacob, Bella loves Edward more and Edward loves Bella more than life. Also, even though Jacob loves Bella, he could (and obviously will) imprint on someone else and where does that leave Bella?

But I have to say, I do love your version of Jacob, because he is so good to bella during this time. So, I hope that Edward does come back, so that if and when Jacob does imiprint, Bella won't be totally lost. And she won't have to spend the whole time Edward is gone feeling depressed beyond hope because of Jacob.

Reviewer: Biological (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV

OK. 57 chapters is as far as I can read tonight, but *phew* that was soo good. =) Very entertaining, and true to character (IMHO) and well written. Thank you!


Reviewer: leopardskinfynn (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

I love this series.  I love it so much that I'm almost unsure about what the storyline is in SM's books as yours seems much more real to me.  Fabulous!

I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: peculiar1 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

when do we get more of the story?

Author's Response: When I'm done writing it.

Reviewer: wmaterial319 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Perceptions: Jacob's POV

Jacob in the woods guiding Bella home was so cute...I can't stop reading I LOVE it.

Reviewer: mindalyn30 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

I've enjoyed this so much more than I thought I would, but am feeling a little traumatized that there's nothing more to read yet...  and obviously a lot of time to go before Edward comes back, which I'm anxious for as well.  As much as I'm enjoying the whole Jake and Bella thing, there's just an inevitability about Edward and Bella that I really don't want messed with (still team Edward)...  Waiting with baited breath for what comes next.

Reviewer: EmmaBrooke (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:57 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

I just love this series!  I found it about a week ago and have read the entire thing thus far... Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: norevoli (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

I love you!

I bookmarked your story a while ago, but didn't read cause I was wary about infrequent updates. I finally gave in, and it was worth it! Your writing style is great, I love the characters and the relationship development between J and B is great. I also like that we get to know Emily and Sam a bit more.

I know it's getting towards the end of this fic, and I thought I would ask you to consider not putting lemons into your next fic, but instead have them as out takes so that readers have the option of reading without lemons. Don't get me wrong, I love a bit of lemony goodness, I just choose not to read stories rated NC17, and I would really love to read your next fic!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: GillyFish (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Have you quit writing Breathe Again?? I just got into this story a couple of months ago through a friend and i really want to know what happens next!! Please don't stop writing this story, I love it!!! ^_^

Reviewer: JaspersSouthernBelle (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

Amazing story and Im team edward so thats saying something. LOL. Please post a new chapter. Im really looking forward to it. You are an amazing author, please keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV

**gasping**  In my ravenous consumption, I know I was anywhere near hitting the end.  Please hurry!!  However, in the meantime, I'm going to go pee... something I've been putting off for about 3 chapters.

Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

It was the explanation "Alice doesn't see Bella jump."  I was always curious what would have happened if that turn in the plot just hadn't happened.  The writing was so true to the characters that I feel like it's like a choose your own adventure.  Jacob really is good for Bella.  And even Edward would have wanted this for her, over the human life that he could have given her.  I'm curious to know what their relationship would have been like if he hadn't first been so broken, but that probably wouldn't have turned out to be a very good story (Bella and Jacob, childhood friends, Bella moves back and the first day is the beginning of a rare streak of sunny days, so no Edward...)

Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV

typo: Do really think that?


If you don't want to know about typos... let me know somehow.

Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV

I didn't realize reviews were a kind of currency.  I'll write more...  I'm really glad I didn't start reading until well after the stories have been posted, or this would be killing me.  I can't stop.  I'm trying to work out some reward system...If I do 2 hours of school work, I can read the next chapter... but I keep blowing by all my limitations, considering one chapter to be only half a chapter, really, so I can read two.  And so on.

Mike Newton isn't such a dink anymore, thanks...  I think it will be hard to reconcile the thoughts that Edward heard from him into non-dinkish-ness though.

Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Couldn't he have just listened from outside to know she was okay? 

Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV

I want everyone to be happy.  I'm a sucker for happy endings.

Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV

I have only slept about 4 hours since I started reading this series.  I am just as addicted to it as I am to the 'real' books.  Thank you!

And no.  Mike Newton is a dink. He's kind but still, he's a dink.  He should have that sink in at some point.

Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV

I just gotta say that out of all the crummy fanfiction I have read hoping for something to cure my twilight withdrawel, this one is the best.  It's almost 2am and I can't stop reading.  I really like how well Jacob's character is comming across.  I've always been "team Edward" but now I really have my fingers crossed for jacob.  LOVE the steamy parts.

thumbs up!

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