Reviewer: lavander (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Distractions: Jacob's POV
yay! I'm glad you're back. I loved the line about Bella and Sam spending the day together He he he he! THAT would certainly be interesting. as I imagine the shopping will be. can't wait!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Distractions: Jacob's POV
nice
Reviewer: tubamom8594 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Distractions: Jacob's POV
This is my most fav fanfic!! I've missed you! It's like reading another version of the Saga!
Keep it coming when you can, please! (I understand that you have to put your new job first, though.)
Reviewer: Amber_Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Distractions: Jacob's POV
Loved it as usual...
Plz don't take so long next time!!! :( lol
Reviewer: EmmaBrooke (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Distractions: Jacob's POV
Glad you're back! I was having withdrawls! Definately voted for you in the Bellies.... Good luck! I love this story; you deserve the win!
Reviewer: AshleyCullen85 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Distractions: Jacob's POV
I was going crazy without a new chapter! Thank you thank you thank you!!! Love the story, like always!!!!!!
Reviewer: jaceadiane (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV
It aggravates me how he was laughing at something completely different, but she thought he was laughing at her. I wish she would just sit there and listen to his point of view. I love this story. It's typical Bella and Jacob. :)) Love, love it! You are an amazing writer! I just have to say.
Reviewer: oceanapple (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Your story is the first Twilighted that I have read, and it is superb. Beautifully told and wonderfully entertaining. I've enjoyed it tremendously.
Now to the really important stuff: For the love of all things good, you absolutely CANNOT...I repeat CANNOT have Jacob imprint on someone other than Bella. You've done such a great job at developing their relationship I'm not certain that I would get over it!
Reviewer: timmy (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Great story, really enjoyed reading about Jake & Bella!
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Please write more!!!!
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I was looking for some good stories, not like the other ones who just stop posting after 3 or 4 chapters...and I found Breathe Again. At first I didn't like how it swtitched POVs every other chapter but I got used to it and I wanted to know what Jacob was doing. Ha. But I love it now, and you better post the sequel soon.
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Jake can't die!
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
Oh gosh I can't wait to see what happens oidsfasir,dmncxkiuwerdc
Please write the sequel!
Reviewer: stephk (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
Hi Ysar,
I have just read all 73 chapters of Breathe Again in two days. I have really enjoyed reading this. I think you have kept very true to the characters and I love the relationship between Bella and Jake... I think it's more real than the first time I read the novels. This is really well written and enjoyable to read. I cannot wait to see where this goes.
Thanks for posting,
Steph
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
I wanna get to the part with Edward but I know I shouldn't skip! It's so tempting. I can't stop reading, it's so amazing. You should become a professional author.
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I'm still team Edward. No matter what. :]
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I love it. I can't stop reading it!
Reviewer: retailrita (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
WOW! You are mazing! I actually joined Twitter just to follow you on my blackberry. I only just discovered Twilighted recently on my phone and I was gutted I have to wait for the next chapter. Me and our fellow Twi-hards are eagerly aniticipating the next fix. Thank youuuuuu!!!! x
Reviewer: montanaRider (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Thank you for the story.... I like it and I love Jacob. Think that you have painted him darker then what he is in my head but great job. As a female I have to wonder if Bella would have stayed with Jacob if it would have been later when edward returned.
I hate the fact that she would have aged while Jacob stayed at 27. It is amazing how much this story sucks a person in.
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
Very neat, also well written this here is
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Perceptions: Jacob's POV
so goodly, neat & written well
Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
please update!!!
Reviewer: Elezerma (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Distractions: Bella's POV
I love what you have done with the story. I am a die hard Jacob fan and you are making my dreams come true. Keep up the amazing work!
Reviewer: hbarbie (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Normalcy: Jacob's POV
An imprint would be nice. I'm hoping it's Jacob and some random person so that when Edward comes back he'll be out of the picture. lol
Reviewer: hbarbie (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now, but I'm in no way a Team Jacob person. I stumbled onto this fic by looking at the top tens lists. I really like reading all the 'what if Alice hadn't seen Bella jump?' scenarios. And even though a large part of me can't stand Jacob, I think you've done an amazing job. So please, please start the sequel because I'm dying to have Edward back; I'm really interested to see how you handle that.
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