ahhh..i love Jacob.  in all his horny "mine" glory.  the two sides..again, very different, not just jake and bella, but man woman.  very good. i loved that he was writing her name in the dirt. LOL

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GAAAAAA..what is she DOING?!  k..if she's all pissy about him taking it too far..then what does she do? starts it all up again!  holy shit..im gonna scream. 

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damn damn and double damn. i have to go to bed..but this is the first thing i will be thinking of and getting to in the morning after the family is all out and about.  lordy..you do them well.  Her flip flopping, like in the book..annoys the shit out of me..like in the book.  Jacob's persistence, his teasing, his always pushing her to her limit..knowing if he doesn't she'll never let go.  and yet..the moments when he's so..vulnerable to.  i just love this.  and crap.  Edward.  sigh.  this is gonna be rough.

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i love this..love it so much, these different points of view.  freeking brilliant! and probably tough to write. thank you!  god..i was melting again.

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oh my god.  ive only read these two chapters..and im so hooked.  i love his point of view..and i see i get to enjoy it much in this tale.  you have kept the feel of the characters true.  thank you for that..i look forward to it developing.  that last line..tore me up.

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Bella had better not fall in love with Mike Newton, or I'm gonna come to Forks and smack them both upside the head. ;)

I KNEW IT! Okay, well, I figured it out wen Claire showed up, so, not very long. BUT I STILL KNEW IT!

Well, I just happened to stumble though some search results for non-EB stories. I think this is only the 2nd or 3rd fic that I've read thats non-eb. And I started reading it, and COULD NOT freaking stop!!! It's EXTREMELY well written, a definite TEN. I can see you out a lot if time and effort into writing this as well as you do. YOU GO GIRL!

I want to thank you for this story, actually. I've been arguing with my fiance a lot lately, and usually spend most of my spare time worrying about how we're going to work things out. And crying. LOTS of that. I blame the hormones. See, we got our first child due in July, and I'm REALLY stressed. And reading this fanfic, it just takes my mind of everything for a while. The fights, the money problems, everything. So thank you very very much, for offering me some sort of escape from reality, even if it is just for a while. :)

I just came across this site looking for Jake and Nessie fanfic and came across this one started reading and haven't been able to stop. Thank you

Oooooh, Charlie's a smart one lol.

Dude I love the way that stephanie meyer made the saga end with everyone being happy because jake inprints with renesme but it would be really cool to see how you make your own ending if she ended up with Edward I thikn that would be to close to the origanal story. I'm all for edward and Bella being together in most all storys but in this one Bella seems so perfect with Jacob. I love it so please keep em coming coming cause you are way taleneted. =]

Ohhh shneaky shneaky...And good GOD i hope no one imprints on jessica. she'd be around waaaaaaaaay too much for my liking.

Ohhh, you're definitely making it hard on this Team Edward girl...I've ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS loved vampires (they ooze sexy ^_^) but a tiny part of me (it's a secret, SHH!) will always be Team Jacob. I think because he tries SO hard to make Bella see that she belongs with him, and in ways, she really IS better off with him. Then again, maybe it's cause I always run colder than everyone I know, and would love me a werewolf to keep me warm at night, lol. So, for NOW, still mostly Team Eddie, But a tiny bit Team Jake. I've always been indecisive, I can't help it!

Who do I want Bella to end up with? Now THAT is a tough freaking question. Anyone can see that Bella will always hold a place in her heart for Edward, if she wants to or not. Ever girl is that way with her first love. You never really forget them, and occasionally, you wonder, what if? Edward is also the kind of guy every girl dreams about finding, but so rarely do. He's perfect, and is utterly infatuated with her. He can offer her the gift of immortality. (Even though he thinks he's damning her soul.) But in all reality, Jacob is so much better for her, as anyone can see. He doesn't have to try to control himself (as much.) when he's around her. He's not fighting the urge to rip her throat out 24/7, and she wouldn't have to sacrifce anything for him. She could live a (mostly) normal life.

And now for you reaming. (a kind hearted one!) Your story is so riveting, that I completely forgot to eat. And that's NOT easy for me, considering Im 27 weeks pregnant. Food is ALWAYS on the mind. So now, I'm extremely freaking HUNGRY, and need to find some foodage.