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Reviews For Breathe Again
Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV

bwahaaha!!!  i loved the jessica embry thing.  (snort) him taking off, jake having to run him down..LOL.  im wondering wtf though with Rachel to.  jealousy i sense for sure..but what else? is there anything else? and im fearing the imprinting...each sentence brings me closer to that..and i am not sure i can take tragedy with them anymore..the books pretty much killed me off..these stories are my lifeline..


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV

sigh..what a lovely place to be.  to sleep with that..warm, safe.  loved.  i love this story, and i love them together, how you write them all is ive never stopped reading the actual just floated along the way i ached for it to be.


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV

i so love his pov. i really do. this just made my own heart and pride swell.  thank you again for another gorgeously written piece.


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV

god, i was holding my breath  to, i forgot she'd not seen him really as a wolf yet..not actually made contact with him except the one time.  but i love it. i loved it in the actual books, and i love it here.  id have run, id have done the same thing. 


Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Distractions: Jacob's POV

Can't wait for Allison's reaction to Quil imprinting on Claire. ;)

Good luck with the craziness life has thrown at you; I'm looking forward to the next chapter, when you have time.

Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV

Pretty sure I found this one in the S.O.B. series.  That caught my eye because I hadn't read any Bella/Jacob stories, yet.  The intro blurb sounded good, & the graphic banner grabbed me.  After that, one chapter and I was hooked. :)

Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV

I f'ing love Emily!  Wish I'd had a big sister like her to give a reality check when I was a mess.

It's equally nice and disturbing to see Jake so rattled, showing his vulnerabilities and insecurities.  I get so used to thinking of him as "a rock," that it's strange to see his humor and courage faulter.  Brings depth to the character, though, which is always a good thing.


Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV

Curious...I thought you wrote a while back that Edward wasn't making an appearance until the sequel.  Yes, right now, it's just Alice and Emmett, but it's suggestive of Edward's return.  Hmmm...changing the plotline, are we?  Throwing out a red herring earlier to see if we'd take the bait? 

Reviewer: Daphne 13 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

OK, so I just finished what is posted of Breathe Again, and I gotta say that I LOVE it. This is the best Jake/Bella fic ever! It is realistic, has perfect grammar, a good plotline and a humorous author! I think I have read most of the one-shots to accompany the story, and those were magnificent to! I am so happy to have finally found a good Jake/Bella fic, and even more joyous that it actually made the top tens! So, please, please, please, update ASAP, and keep it up!!!! LOVE IT!!!  

Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV

BWAHAHAHAH..ok..ok..this whole thing with Embry..has me cackling. i LOVE how you write the pack.  their humor, their perfectly youn man, F you, type of convo's..the "stupid magazines"..etc. all of it.  its a joy to read. thank you.  i was sitting is Embry doing?  i can't wait to see. 


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Disturbance: Bella's POV

k..i officially want to kick her ass for even thinking this of him.


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Redemption: Jacob's POV

ok..but..does it happen with Jacob?  these other chapters you refer to?  where can i find those?  im still trying to learn to navigate the place.  sorry.  (blushes) i love this story to..the tension is excruciating though, i will say that. 


Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

I'm slow; it took me until the last paragraph of Jake's POV to figure out that Edward had stashed those things under the floor, not Bella.

This scene reminds me so much of my last high school relationship.  Does anybody really know how to communicate at that age? 


Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV

Ah, Embry.  That's just the price you pay for being the center of attention. ;)

Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Redemption: Bella's POV

bwahahahaha!!!!  oh..i loved that..the buttons were being done up!  see? she's the one that needs some self control, not Jake.  good god. id never be able to control myself.  (he's so


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Blunder: Jacob's POV

see?  its so hard for him..why can't she see that? he needs to speak up and tell her.  TELL HER dammit. 


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Reassurance: Jacob's POV

ahhh..i love Jacob.  in all his horny "mine" glory.  the two sides..again, very different, not just jake and bella, but man woman.  very good. i loved that he was writing her name in the dirt. LOL


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Reassurance: Bella's POV

sigh.  well, she's not taking it slow thats for sure.  but, im glad to be reading their budding "relationship".  i hope she realizes soon what she's doing to him, how hard it is for him to stop. 


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV

GAAAAAA..what is she DOING?!  k..if she's all pissy about him taking it too far..then what does she do? starts it all up again!  holy gonna scream. 


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Revelation: Bella's POV

k..i really just want to shake her now.  SHE kissed HIM.  she hung on him, not letting him go.  now..she's saying its him that went too far?  she knows hes in love with her, and yet..she pushed his resolve to the breaking point.  gawd.. and now she's gonna pull the whole lets just be friends thing again?  my god..he needs to blow the hell up..thats gonna break him even more.  but..i am hoping since this is a jacob bella story..there will be a happy ending.  to them. 


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:15 AM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV

damn damn and double damn. i have to go to bed..but this is the first thing i will be thinking of and getting to in the morning after the family is all out and about. do them well.  Her flip flopping, like in the book..annoys the shit out of in the book.  Jacob's persistence, his teasing, his always pushing her to her limit..knowing if he doesn't she'll never let go.  and yet..the moments when he's so..vulnerable to.  i just love this.  and crap.  Edward.  sigh.  this is gonna be rough.


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV

k..she is annoying me like she did in the book..soo good job. LOL.  she's demanding too much of Jake's strength.  He's a hot blooded male who worships teh ground she walks on.  not easy for him to just..put the brakes on.  sigh. 

and Mike..blech! but at least Jake knows now she didn't like it, nor want it.


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV

i love it so much, these different points of view.  freeking brilliant! and probably tough to write. thank you!  god..i was melting again.


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Moments: Bella's POV loved that.  see? so many times..people get you say.."postal" on Jacob's character in the actual books..and i just want to tear my hair out.  they just..don't see that.  that he is a horny teenager..who's still ALIVE with a beating heart that pulses..and sends blood..THERE. finally have tasted what he'd ached for for sooo long?  not many of us COULD control that. i know i couldn't..and I'm nearly 40! and I'm a girl.  i like that you had Bella not..all over him...though..still slightly.  'she's still new, still raw. very raw.  this makes much as i wanted and want them to be has to happen in a logical way.  i just..loved all of it.  hearing his heart beat, how she observed his beauty, the bit with the leg hiked up..YIKES..melted. 


Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Dilemma: Jacob's POV

oh my god.  ive only read these two chapters..and im so hooked.  i love his point of view..and i see i get to enjoy it much in this tale.  you have kept the feel of the characters true.  thank you for that..i look forward to it developing.  that last line..tore me up.


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