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Reviewer: Black Snowflake (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Surrender: Jacob's POV
Great story! Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: CeeCee (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV
So cute! I love it!!
Update soon, love.
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter has been submitted and is just waiting for approval!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV
Aww very well done. I"m glad she accepted his apology.
Author's Response: Thank you! I figured they had to see eye to eye eventually!
Reviewer: ThighMasterTorgo (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV
I thought I was Team Edward but I'm not so sure anymore. I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you! Personally, I've decided not to choose teams. I'll just take whichever one of them turns up on my doorstep. Unless it's Newton, in which case I'll probably run away screaming.
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV
I hope he can treat with love and respect. I know it is a stretch for him...
I agree with Bella I miss the old Jacoub. He had humillity... or something that made him seem more mature than he is now.
I am glad he apologized.
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Revelation: Jacob's POV
jacoub disgusts... he is a immature pig. He is a complete and total dog. I am so sick of boys who think they can treat women like whores because they are not virgins. His reasoning is flawed no matter what the circumstances are. Poor Bella her taste in guys really does suck... controlling idiots.
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
I hate how disrespectful Jacoub is to her... Edward is a sanctimonius prude and Jake is a oversexed ass. I wish she had a better choice.
Author's Response: Jacob's just young and stupid. He loves her too much to ever hurt her on purpose. He'll come around.
Reviewer: mermaiden (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV
Ohhhh... the flutter!
*SIGH*
Author's Response: Just wait...it gets even better!
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV
Phew! That was... verry nice. Hehe. Bella was so brave. I want some of that steamy-ness!
Author's Response: More steaminess coming up!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV
Awww. :)
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Persistence: Bella's POV
Whew... intense. Boy in bedroom while drugged up on cough syrup... meh. Boy ready to morph into wolf... eek.
Bella's silly to think Jacob has anything but pure love for her and that she's just someone to feel up. Glad they made some progress, but I still hold strong that boys are infuriating.
Reviewer: ein_gutes_leben (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Just wanted to say that I was always Edward/Bella all the way. But I love this...it's given me a total new perspective...and a total new uh...love for jacob!
Author's Response: Thank you! I like Edward/Bella too, but I just wanted to play around with something different. I always felt like Jake had such potential!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Perceptions: Jacob's POV
I like Sam - he's good looking out for Bella and Jacob. Just wanted to let you know that this story is super ... adding it as a fav :)
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
The weirdness that are guys... with thick, clueless minds. Poor Charlie, got caught totally off guard!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV
Why do guys have to be so stupid. I like living in Bella's brain better...
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your stopping to review each chapter like you did. And I've submitted the next one, so hopefully there will be more to read soon!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Moments: Bella's POV
So incredibly detailed, it was like I was there... but, not :(
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Revelation: Jacob's POV
OH! Now that I am caught up to everyone else I need you to update. RIGHT NOW! You cannot just sucker me in and then leave me hanging :(
Another weill written chapter and a great cliffie!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've got tons more written, and I'm submitting them as fast as they can approve 'em.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Revelation: Bella's POV
Awww very nicely done. Although, and I forgot to ask this in my review of wisdom; now that you have got me thinking that Jake and Bella might be an ok thing to read about you brought up the whole Imprinting thing. He didn't imprint on Bella did he? So now what?
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
LOL another very cute chapter :)
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Dilemma: Jacob's POV
Poor Jake. Ever the loyal, doting friend... good chapter
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Admittedly, I don't really read Bella/Jacob stories, but I like the writing here and there's something very honest and real about this relationship that most people can relate to -- my friends and I loved reading New Moon and the high school / boy friend who likes you but you don't feel the same way memories. I was bad and read this story but didn't leave reviews, but am now since I feel that I've done you an injustice for awesome writing :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Persistence: Bella's POV
ROFL! This is the best one yet!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Perceptions: Jacob's POV
LOL the ending made me laugh :)
I really liked how Jake tricked Bella into going home, very sweet and a very loving thing to so.
I hate to say it but you are making the whole Jacob/Bella idea grow on me.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
LOL WTG Bella! I'm sorry that she is feeliing so lousy but I'm glad she said what she said. Now Jacob knows how she feels and also knows that Mike is nothing to Bella.
Another well written chapter.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV
I like how we see the same scenario from both perspectives. I like how Jake was trying to do the right thing and resist tempatation.
very nicely done.
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