Tell me she's not...

I do like this story, even tho I'm an Edward fan.  One thing I wish tho... I don't think it's necessary to do two chapters of the exact same thing happening from the two differnet perspectives. I like the two perspectives, and I think they could overlap, but the exact same thing with just a few differences in perspective becomes a bit monotonous IMO.  Not to hurt your feelings, but that my opinion.  Look at Jana Bana's "When Darkness Turns to Light" and you'll see how she does it affectively.  So more happens in the story.  Right now I just skim over every other chapter and wish I had another to read to find out what happens next!!

Author's Response:

I am aware that a few of my readers find the dual POV redundant, but the majority actually prefer the details from both sides.  Those who have already read the nearly 40 chapters I have written have pretty much insisted I don't change it, and as so much of the story deals with immediate reactions and feelings, I prefer it this way as well.  I have previously read the story you suggested, and I did enjoy it.  I guess my mind just doesn't work that way when it comes to writing.

First of all may I say that you are doing a great job of writing this story! I am thoroughly enjoying each and every chapter.

Although I like a good Bella and Edward story I am a huge fan of Jacob's character. Thanks for giving me a change of pace by writing a story about him and the rest of the crew. It sure is good to see Jacob get shown some love as well. Too bad there aren't more positive stories about him.

Anyway, great job and keep writing! ; )

Dear god! I can't wait for your betas to approve you chapter. It's literally driving me insaine. I'm sure they're great. But oh man, This waiting 5 days for one chapter business is killing me.

Your writing is beautiful. I hope all is well. I understand you are going through a tough time. I will try and send you good vibes where ever you are.

Oh. My. God.

And Now I'm going to have to wait. AH! That's just evil. But wonderful at the same time.

Absolutely love this story! Like you I like to think that Bella and Jacob would have gotten together if Edward didn't come back. While actually I supported Bella and Edward...there was part of me that wanted to have it both ways. And so this story is really just what I was looking for. Please don't give up on it, there's not enough Jacob love out there!

nice work

Love the idea of jacob and bella, although i am all for edward and bella

 

Oh, that was good! Can't wait to hear Jacob's thoughts on Bella's sleepwear!

OH MY GOD! TELL ME YOU'RE GOING TO UPDATE ASAP! You're so horrible for leaving us like this. Nooo. lol. I want morrre!

Hehehehe yeah!!!!!!! What's the next move going to be????

Hi Ysar!

I am totally enjoying your story! It sure is nice to read something good about Jacob from time to time. There just aren't enough positive stories about his character on the website so I'm glad you are writing this one. Thanks for updating regularly and keep up the good work!

NaughtyVamptress

That was awwesome please hurray so I can hear jacob's pov. I'm so addicted to this story. I love it

please tell me there is much more to come in this story.....i know it's not finished but i get a little impatient...sorry

Author's Response:

Yes, there's lots more to come.  I've got nearly 40 chapters written, and there will be a sequel.  I will be M.I.A. for a few days though because I'm in the middle of a divorce and I'm trying to move tens years worth of accumulated crap into storage.  I should be back on track next week, though.