I like that in your story Jacob and Bella have real problems and coflicts and actually have to work to solve them but in the end they realize that how smal the problem was and how they love each other.

Are there going to be any werewolf/vampires fights?

Please please update

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  And yes, there's a bit of a skirmish coming up in a few chapters. :)

awww jacob - you can fix me anytime!

Author's Response:

Thank you!   He makes me feel all warm & fuzzy too!

ohhhhhh he is so lovely! Goodjob! nice body description, it was just enough to make you feel very jealous of Bella! Yay another chapter to go. WAHOO!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I figure a big, muscled guy like Jake...well, we just need to take a moment to appreciate him!

I've been sick with the plague, I swear!

I like. But where is the kissykissy part of the making up? Eh? Eh? ;D

Author's Response:

Well, since you had the plague, you're excused.  And KissyKissy is coming up!

Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens at Sam's house!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Nothing particularly constructive, but I still am loving this story. Actually, it is what got me into Jacob/Bella stories in the first place, and lead me down the road to being much more team jacob leaning. I like how you deal with them as a couple who has issues beyond the whole edward thing. I'm secretly hoping not to see him. Though on the other hand i do like to have Jacob know that bella chooses him over edward. So, keep up the good work i guess, and i can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  This is a tough site for Jacob/Bella stories, so I'm especially excited to hear when someone who may not have been open to it before is now enjoying the story.  Thank you!

I really like it... however it made me wanting more. I would to see how this continue to happen and I like that it has more conflict in it then the original books!

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Thank you!  I would imagine for anyone else, life in a small town like Forks would be pretty boring.  But teens create drama for themselves, and Bella is dating a werewolf, so I have lots of fun thinking up all these troubles for them!

im sorry only one person reviewed it. but actually i've been waiting for DAYS for you to add more...man do i love that jacob, but anyway, i liked it very much. and im glad their past the lauren thing cuz im ready for some action...hahaha

Author's Response:

Thank you!  My validation beta set it up so that when I submit a chapter, it's immediately viewable now.  So I may just go nuts submitting new chapters!

Since you beg so nicely <grin>, here's my first review.

Your story is more of book Jacob and as far as I'm concerned there can never be too much of that.  You've captured his sheer ability to pay attention to Bella and give her what she needs (rare in a male).  Given how far into it you are the split viewpoints are rather set but if you take up writing for publication rather than fanfic it's probably good to remember the rule that everything needs to advance the story.  Even Midnight Sun--while fascinating to those already heavily invested in the characters and story and desperate for another fix--would not work to revisit the same ground with more typical plots and characters.  It's probably not a good habit to get into except perhaps as a writer's exercise.

I'm enjoying the story and hope you continue to carry it forward to a satisfying conclusion.

 

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Initially this story was only supposed to be a few chapters, but more was requested by my readers, and...well, here we are.  I doubt I would ever take up writing for publication rather than fanfic.  In fact, I've done just the opposite.  I quit the whole publication thing years ago and have come to the fanfic world for my own amusement.  As my ex-husband would say: I do just about everything backwards ;)   I should also point out this is the only one of all my stories that has any kind of multi-POV structure.  While it may be the only work I've posted on Twilighted, those who follow the rest of my writing are more accustomed to my usual single-POV fics.

Lauren is a tool. Jake is yummy. Lemons in the future??

Author's Response:

I am planning on some eventual lemons... Right now, though, these two have offcially been together such a short time that it would still be a bit soon.  But don't worry----the sexual tension is building up for a reason!

As I just said on the forum I'm posting my review. I like this chapter as usual and I was certain that Lauren was a liar. THis girl is evil! I'm looking forward to the JPOV chapter on that discussion I think h's going to freak out or something like that when he'll see that Bella wants to talk to him.

Bella doesn't like bonfires? Well, I like them. Jacob can take me instead of her^^

Always here, waiting for the next chapter, keep on the good work.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  And I'm with you.  I saw we build a nice big bonfire for shirtless Jake, no Bella allowed!

AHHHHH! So good to get to read 3 chapters at once. I have just had a painful 5 day car ride across australia but luckily I got to read this at the end! Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Poor guy doesn't get it that giddy doesn't help the broken.  :)  Like it so far.

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Thank you!