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Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
Sorry i didn't reveiw on the last chapter! My computer broke and i couldn't read any fanfics! Soooo, this is the bomb! totaly great! you have me gliding over to team jacob! Ahhh! i'm usually a team switzerland but, gosh, this is so good! I love this fanfic! you are amazing! TWO FOUR SIX EIGHT, WHAT FANFIC DO I APPRECIATE?! BREATHE AGAIN, BREATHE AGAIN, BREATHE AGAIN!!! WOOOOP WOOOOOOP! lol, like the cheer?
Author's Response: Oh, if my computer broke I don't think I'd survive! I carry this beat up old laptop with me everywhere!
And thanks for the cheer!!!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
I love Embry! He's so funny! I would really love for Bella to become close friends with Quil and Embry. It would make her feel more at home with the pack.
Author's Response: I think so too! I mean, she knows them all, but she's still kind of on the outside. And something tells me she'd have a lot more fun if she got to know them all better!
Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
lol,nice. More? I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: jacobsdream (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
awwe that was sweet...I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love that you loved it!
Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
AAAHHHHH!!!
This is slow torture!
AND I LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: It is, isn't it? LOL! And there's lots more to come!
Reviewer: snoopykota (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
Good! Keep going! Be happy! Write!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy!
Reviewer: stylindancer (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Yay for making up, can't wait to see how they deal with Lauren!
Author's Response: Thank you! Aren't they sweet together? And Lauren...poor Lauren just doesn't know what kind of trouble she's in now!
Author's Response: Thank you! Aren't they sweet together? And Lauren...poor Lauren just doesn't know what kind of trouble she's in now!
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
I was always curious if things would ever actually progress with Jacob & Bella ... and the writing here is fantastic!
I'm very curious to see if you ever have Edward come back.. and if you do, who she choose now? ;-)
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Head on over to the forum to find out a little about what the future holds as far as Edward is concerned: http://twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3704
Reviewer: Lynn8687 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Dilemma: Jacob's POV
I am new to this site and this is the first story that I've read. I like how you capture Bella and Jacob's thoughts. They are so opened and I can feel what they are feeling. I read up to chapter 2 and will continue to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is really a great site, and there are some wonderful fics here. I was nervous when I first joined because the validation team reads every submission and only allows the best ones, but I've really come to appreciate their efforts. While some stories might not be exactly what I'm looking for, nearly all of them are well written and very interesting. If you haven't done so already, be sure to check out the stories listed in the "Top Tens" section. I found a lot of my favorites there!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Sigh! I'm so envious of Bella! <><3
Author's Response: Yes, I've often considered killing off Bella and making Jacob imprint on me ;)
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
haha i love the wolf pack, theyre so cute all together
Author's Response: Thank you! They are a lot of fun to write!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
LOVED this chapter... and I'm betting I'll love it even more from JPOV! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I always like Jake's side better, too!
Reviewer: gtg178y (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
So if we keep giving you ~50 reviews per chapter does that mean we get an update everyday? I think we can handle that. :)
Author's Response: Hey, that's not a bad idea! If only I could write that fast... I actually do use reviews to tell me when to post next, though. I've got a few readers who are pretty good about reviewing every chapter, and if I don't get many reviews for one, I just assume not everyone has had a chance to read it...so I wait. On the other hand, when I get a ton of reviews and everyone's all excited, I can't help but want to write more faster!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Another fantastic chapter. I loved how Jacob handled Bella in his room, prooving he wants more than just sex. Very nicely done.
Your description of Bella on Jakes lap and just touching and kissing was excellent!
And I wonder what is going through Charlies mind... and I'm assuming a "full" day tomorrow means she is grounded?
Author's Response: Thank you! She's actually not grounded this time, but Charlie is nearing the end of his rope. He will be confronting Jake about some things in the not so distant future.
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
WRITE PLZ THIS STORY IS MY HAPPY CRACK DON'T STOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!! T.T plz i love ur story i'm u're #1 fan
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I promise to keep feeding your addiction!
Reviewer: jadeesmjk (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
this was great.......cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
I so love your story! I know it's alot to ask, but is Edward coming back? I know this is a B&J story all the way, but edward's return would be a great twist!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! And that's actually the most popular question I get. I posted the answer to that and a little bit about the reasoning behind it on the forum: http://twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3704
Reviewer: Make_Edward_Growl (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Yay! Another update! I giggled at the popcorn part! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Embry makes everything more fun!
Reviewer: jadeesmjk (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
keep it comming, cant wait til the next chapter! :o)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Oh you're gonna make the story with Victoria's POV?!!! This is going to be interesting !!
I liked that chapter the wolves are so funny. But Quil wasn't there? He hasn't turned into a wolf yet? Because I've always thought he changed before Seth and Leah. But maybe I was wrong.
Waiting for the next chapter (and I'm so glad your Validation Beta decided to set your chapters to be updated automatically because we don't have to wait a long time to read them and that's great!!!)
Author's Response: Yes, I am. I think it will be great to get inside Victoria's mind just a little instead of making her all one dimensional. After it was suggested on the forum, the more I thought about it, the more I realized that would be such a fun challenge to do.
Reviewer: mermaiden (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
OM NOM NOM
<3
Author's Response: LOL! THANK YOU!
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Your story is fantastic! I LOVE Jacob and Bella!!! I hope it never ends!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! There's so much more to come!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Curiosity: Bella's POV
I really liked this chapter. Bella's jealousy was so realistic, I could totally feel it! And Jacob was so sweet about the entire thing. He totally could have thrown Mike Newton in her face and he didn't.
Now on to JPOV!
:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I didn't want her to completely flip out, but I figured that no matter how much you try to rationalize something like that, it's still going to upset you. As for Jake...well, it's about time he started growing up and handling things right, don't you think?
Reviewer: TwilightLoBe (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
I love every chapter you writte! I hope to read very very soon another chapter of Breath Again!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, a little pouting on my part and I'm flooded with reviews. Just for that, I'm gonna have to put up the next chapter today!
Reviewer: Georgia29 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
Thanks for the update so quickly. Loving the story. Maybe a chapter set at Bellas school were Lauren or Jessia could see Bella and Jacob together? Just an idea. So hears a a small review!
Author's Response: Thank you! Lauren will definitely be witnessing some Jake/Bella love soon!
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