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Reviewer: femme_ecarlate (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
Lauren needs to die? That seems a little extreme for the tome of the story. Utter mortification is a little more fitting in my opinion.
I really enjoyed this chapter. The difference you are showing between Edward and Jacob is great.
I loved reading her expressions. She was usually an open book.
^Favorite line
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! No worries---Lauren's not going to die. But she might wish she had ;)
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
I think Leah should scare the hell out of her. It would be highly amusing:)
Author's Response: Leah will definitely be involved ;)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
yet again I love you for Jakes POV. I like this version of Jake. He's such a great guy and you can tell he really cars about Bella.
Love all the little stories you have going on at the same time too, so it's not always just Jake and Bella.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really enjoying writing the companion stories. They give me a chance to explore all the different characters.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
*sigh* I love JPOV. I love Jacob. :) As always, a good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
lol Jake's so sweet
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
I NEED EDWARD ON THIS STORY...AND HE NEEDS TO GET HERE FAST! PLEASE!! IT'D BE SO MUCH FUN!
Author's Response: LOL! My plans for the story are outlined in the forum.
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Hi Ysar! I spent my whole day reading your story! Great job!! I'm looking forward to reading next chapter!! :) Hope you keep writing!
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: SkittlesBlack (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
AMAZING!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
I love the easy intimacy between these two. It's gentle and sweet, but so much behind it. I can't wait! I have to admit that I am a Team Edward member, but Jake can have her this time (don't tell).
Author's Response: Thank you! Your secret is safe with me ;)
Reviewer: TwilightLoBe (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
I loved this one!!! Jake is so sweet! Love him!!
Will Jake inprint on your story?
Author's Response: Thank you! As for imprinting...well, I've put some info about that in the forum, so go check it out ( http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3704 ). It won't answer the really big question, but it will definitely give you something to think about :)
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
I've never liked Jacob. And I've always hoped Bella and Edward would work it out somehow. I still do. But I love the way you write, I somehow think that's exactly what it woud have been like if Stephanie Meyer had decided to give Jake a chance with Bella. So again, I love it and look forward to more (though I am far toooooo old for that kind of stuff:)) Thanks again! (and sorry about my English, I'm from Ukraine)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Defiance (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Great story! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
awesome chapter! I love the time they spend together with the whole pack...its very entertaining!
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know what SM had in mind as far as quality time with the pack goes, but I see it happening like that. They're all young, even if they weren't all bff's they probably knew each other pretty well before the phasing started, and they're bound to want to do more than just patrol together.
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
LOVELY! BUT SHE'S TREATING HER FEELINGS FOR EDWARD LIGHTLY!.. HE NEEDS TO REAPPEAR AND TURN UP THE HEAT
Author's Response: Hmmmm...Edward? Why don't you take a look at the forum ( http://twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3704 ) for a little more info about that.
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Embry "pretending" to choke on popcorn to split Jake and Bella up; hilarious!
Author's Response: yeah, Jake's fun to write because he's...well, Jake! But Embry can just do whatever he wants, and I love that!
Reviewer: larken2000 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
I am so excited to read more about jacob! I had been looking for a good bell/jacob, and seem to have found it in your writing!
Please keep it up..... i read it all today and don't have a lot of patience for the next chapter....
oh, and leave edward where he is..... bella is doing fine without him!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Cute! It's so nice to see Bella happy and fitting in so easily.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
Adorable! I am satisfied!!! Cannot wait for more!
=]
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
I feel so far behind!!! I been CRAZY busy since the semester is winding down but i finally caught up.
I never actually thought of what would have happened if Jacob and Bella actually got together in the books, but i think this is what wouldve happened
great chapters :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be up soon, I promise!
Reviewer: Ann_ (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
heeey
i love this fanfiction, you know?
it is really fit in the books
i have read some that the caracters are too diferent, i don't like it
your's amazing
and i bet more people from other parts of the world are following your ups.
kisses
angélica
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just fell in love with the characters in the books, and I hate the idea of changing them too much. I know that as my story goes on, they'll change a little, maybe grow up a little. But I don't ever want to make them into something completely different. They're just too much fun the way they are!
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was soooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
awwwwwwww!!!!! he's so sweeeeeeet! (i'm cooing here. don't tell anyone!) can i have a Jake? pretty please? :P
Author's Response: As soon as I find a stockpile of Jakes, I'll let you know ;)
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Curiosity: Bella's POV
awww! that was sweet! loved the ending and finding not one but three new chapters made my day!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll probably be posting the next one really soon!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
O snap! This is AH to the mazing! abso-freakin-lutely awesome! Give me a virtual high five! (holds up hand) hehehe, yay for you,this was gooooood!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! With this kind of feedback, I may never stop writing!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
Sorry i didn't reveiw on the last chapter! My computer broke and i couldn't read any fanfics! Soooo, this is the bomb! totaly great! you have me gliding over to team jacob! Ahhh! i'm usually a team switzerland but, gosh, this is so good! I love this fanfic! you are amazing! TWO FOUR SIX EIGHT, WHAT FANFIC DO I APPRECIATE?! BREATHE AGAIN, BREATHE AGAIN, BREATHE AGAIN!!! WOOOOP WOOOOOOP! lol, like the cheer?
Author's Response: Oh, if my computer broke I don't think I'd survive! I carry this beat up old laptop with me everywhere!
And thanks for the cheer!!!
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