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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Mischief: Bella's POV
What? Forget to review and just run over to the forum???!!!!
Not sure I understand what's going on. What on earth is Embry up to? I love it!
Can't wait for more though, this was another well written chapter.
K I'm off to play on the forum.
Author's Response: I never said forget to review. I just wanted everyone to know there was a preview on the forum. And don't worry---after we get Jake's POV, we'll get a one-shot from Embry that explains his devious little plan.
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
Oh i love Leah! I wish Stephanie would continue her story! I was wondering though, will the Cullens ever come back in this fic? I mean i wouldnt want Bella to just run back to Edward like she did in New Moon, id want her to make him suffer for awhile, but still i'd like to know if theres going to be a fight between the boys! Some hot potential right there! ;) Anyway keep up the good work! :)
-Erin
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I do plan on giving Leah a happier ending as well. My hope is to work it into the main story, but I'm tempted to launch into a separate fic if I can get the plot going.
Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
love IT/YOU so now more chapters!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Coming right up!
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
Good one as always!! Can't wait for next chapters!!! Thank you so much for updating so fast!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
What is going to happen??? The suspense is killing me...
Author's Response: Oooooh, so much is going to happen. But for this part...Embry's up to something!
Reviewer: IHOWLATTHEMOONTOO (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
hell yes! go make some mischief Embry!
I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you! There will soon be a one-shot from Embry's POV to make things even more interesting.
Reviewer: TwilightLoBe (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
I'm so disapointed that Edward din'd appear but now I'm curious of what's Embry up to!!
Thanks for updating so soon!!! I hope to read soon next chapter!
Author's Response: Sorry, but Edward won't appear until the sequel. If he appeared right now it would just be too soon to inspire much drama. But once Bella's truly settled in with Jake...well, just imagine what will happen when someone she never thought she'd see again pops back into the picture.
Reviewer: Rhett (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
sooooooo much love. i want to see what embry is planning!! haha, the little sneak. and thank you for finally bringing up the imprinting thing! i dunno how he fools himself into thinking there's no chance...and god, what it will do to her when he does! can't wait to see what you do next!
Author's Response: Embry's so much fun to write that I'll be posting a companion story from his POV when the time is right!
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
Love love love love love love love love love love love love love you
still have no clue whats going on in Embry's head.
and Leah just asked the question that i am sure is on everybody's mind.
once again, amazing chapter =]
Author's Response: Embry's a little nuts---in a good way. A couple of chapters from now I'll be posting a one-shot from his POV to make things really interesting!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
Jacob is really clueless but he has great friends. I'm glad you updated this chapter because now we can go back to Bella's POV and see what Embry is going to do to Lauren. Yesterday I was thinking about it and I ended with a nice theory and I hope I'm gonna be right!
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, Jacob just really wants to avoid any more drama. He really just wants to be happy with Bella and leave it at that. But yeah, that's pretty clueless of him. No matter how secure he might be in his relationship with Bella, something MUST be done about Lauren.
Reviewer: HeyBri11any (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
I seriously love you right now cause I was on edge earlier with the other chapter cliffie!
Author's Response: Thank you! I know a lot of my chapters end with a minor cliffie, but I didn't want to leave everyone freaking out!
Reviewer: Tahelovi (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
I can't wait for the next chapter, mainly cause I need to know what Embry has planned to get back at Lauren.
Author's Response: Thank you! Embry's a devious little wolf!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
I love you lots for updating sooo fast...and i bet embry took jakes bike to bella's school and now I cant wait to find out why!!! Now I am wondering what you will be doing with this story... you already mentioned about edward needing to come back so bella had to make a choice...but dont make jake imprint!!! that would be soo sad i love this jake and bella story! But i guess either way i will still love it! I hope you are in another great mood tomorrow and update a ton!
Author's Response: There's still so much left to this story, but it's going to develop rather slowly, the way things happen in real life. I just hate it when fics rush into every little thing. I've addressed the imprinting thing in the forum, so go check it out.
Reviewer: Prettygirl40 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
Ha love where its going hurry and update please want to see what the heck embry and quil are up to ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Jacob should have known better than to think the pack would stay out of his business!
Reviewer: vote (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
AWESOME!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
You are amazing! This is such a fun story to read--can't wait to see what Embry does to embarrass Lauren. Thank you so much for your awesomely quick updates...you know how to keep us addicts happy! Yay--looking forward to reading the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I can't tell you how much I enjoy writing this story, and the fact that everyone loves it so much just makes it that much more amazing!
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
OMG! I love it! I hope he imprints...-- anyways Edwards needs to reappear, and i think is very funny thatEmbry and Quil are doing a prank on lauren
Author's Response: Thank you! I've addressed the Edward and imprinting questions in the forum, so be sure to check that out.
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
awwww, is he gonna imprint? or not cause your taking in renesmee never being born into consideration?
Author's Response: I've addressed the imprinting thing in the forum, so go check it out. As for Renesmee, I can't really answer that without giving away some of the ending.
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Unease: Bella's POV
OMFREAKINGGOSH! IT BETTER NOT BE EDWARD! NOOOO!
Author's Response: Aw, now would I really do that to all my Jake-addicts?
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
I love you sooooo much, Edward can't even comprehend it! So good, and so speedy! Omg! Like starbucks! ur just like starbucks, you keep the good stuff coming at a good speed! Yay for starbucks! This is awesome! Internet hug! (hugs)
Author's Response: Starbucks is my favorite place in the world! I actually didn't have time to stop there yesterday, so when I stopped in this morning, they asked me where I've been!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
I looooooooove you for updating so fast! *cookies and berry pie to you*
Author's Response: Mmmmm Cookies! Thank you!
Reviewer: aleonos (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
Amasing! Simpl put, Amasing!Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
ooooh, the plot thickens even more......i like it! that last bit was really good, too :D
thanks for being awsome and updating so super fast !!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love taking twists and turns in the story. I felt like SM left out so many important details---like what about Leah? Did she ever find anyone? And what about Embry? Who's his dad? Of course, I can't complain too much because in doing that, she left me lots of room to write a very long fic!
Reviewer: na-is-fba (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
I'm guessing your disregarding BD, if you're foreshadowing Jake's imprinting...
And that's okay because no one liked BD anyway... :)
Author's Response: I guess in a way I am disregarding Breaking Dawn. There may be a few aspects of that book that make their way into the story, but since Bella's already heading down a different path, a lot of things have to change. For one, she will be going to college---which should make for lots more story!
Reviewer: abs (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
Woo hoo!! you are so awesome! I can't wait to read what Embry does at Bella's school, its gonna be hilarious. And yes, you are super awesome for updating so quickly, make it a habit so I don't go through withdrawal...
Author's Response: Thank you! Embry's so much fun that in a couple of chapters I'll be posting a one-shot from his POV.
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