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Reviewer: lilsealsfriend (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
Long or short, your writing is DELICIOUS!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
A chapter is exactly the right length when it has made the point that the author wants. <><3
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I think it's a wonderful story:) Great chapter and I"m looking forward to the (hopefully)torture of Lauren. She drives me crazy
Author's Response: Thank you! The "torture" of Lauren will commence soon, but it won't end there. She really screwed up!
Reviewer: ravenwhitlock33 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I love it - please keep writing - enough words for me to keep wanting to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: um_oops (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
hey ysar i don't think its so much the short chapters as the fact that when i read ur fanfic time flys literally and you sure know how to write a great cliffhanger....so in my opinion it doesn't matter how short the chapters are its the content that matters...which i have to say and have said in previous reviews is outstanding you are hands down my fav fanfic author
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p.s. you update more regularly than all other authors put together i don't know wat the others are on about i thinks this is the 3rd chapter this week correct me if i'm worng
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, I think it has been three chapters this week. I know I won't always be able to update so fast, so I figure I should do it while I can!
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
protective jacob is cute.. as long as he doesn't take it overboard =]
love the chapter as usual
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
Yeaaah!! You made my day! I was soo happy when I woke up this morning and saw the new chapter! I have been dying to read it!! Thank you so much!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: DesiCullen (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
I always wondered about what would happen if edward never came back and this story definitely came through. Im already addicted. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mermaiden (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I like chapters getting posted so quickly, but I wound up four behind in no time! Hehehe. I can't wait for the companion story. This is madness! ;D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
This was funny, especially the bit about Billy not getting in the way of his son. Is Leah going to get her happy ending inthis story or in the sequel? Because now she doesn't really sound like a bitch all the time (sometimes she's nice^^).
I'll keep an eyes out for the companion story and i'sure it's gonna be awesome!
Reviewer: TwilightLoBe (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
That's too bad that I have to wait till the next chapter! I hope Embry's POV will be accepted really soon!!!!!
I'm very curious of what's on Embry's mind!!!
by the way Jacob was very funny!
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
Aww Jakes so cute when he gets jealous! I'm eagerly awaiting Embry's POV in the next chapter.
I love that you update so much! It makes my day to come home and see an email in my inbox that one of my fave stories has been updated and its usually yours! Keep up the excellent work! :)
D
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
Why would you complain about it being short? Escpecially when your getting updates every couple of days or every day? That is rude. I can't wait for Embry's point of view. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
Why would you complain about it being short? Escpecially when your getting updates every couple of days or every day? That is rude. I can't wait for Embry's point of view. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
When I beg for length, it's purely because the story is too good to want to wait for more! I'd love a couple of "chapters" worth in one update to bse honest! Skip the filler by all means! I'd hope you would hear us slavering for more satisfaction that only more of your story gives!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I'm okay that it's short because that means that you will post them sooner...right? ;)
Reviewer: jadeesmjk (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I dont think this chapter is too short......it is just teasing me......making me want to know what happens next. Keep up the good work, I love your story! :o)
Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I love it, but then, what's new?
:)
Reviewer: Tahelovi (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I am looking forward to next chapter, mainly cause I can't wait to see what Embry's master plan is. Also I wonder if Lauren & jessica will show up in that chapter too.
Let's just say this story just keeps getting better & I wouldn't worry too much about those that moaners. I think the chapter sizes are just fine.
Reviewer: brettrocks (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
keep doing ur thing u kick ass dont stop man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I don't care how long the chapters are just as long as you keep them coming! I'm seriously like a kid in a candy store with this story. lol :D
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
I can't wait to see what Embry is up to! Looking forward to his POV!
My favorite line(s) this chapter:
"Besides," she said with a wry smile, "I can't be the bitch forever, can I?"
"Oh, I have the feeling you could if you really wanted to," I laughed, ducking just in time to avoid the speaker she threw at my head.
Perfect!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
You know, I think I would take the "too short" comments as compliments, cos it just means the reader isn't ready to be done yet and wants more. I know I am always anxious for the next chapter...
Hmm anyway, I can't wait for the one shot chapter to go with this 'cos I have no clues at all what Embry et al might be up to.
Another well written chapter. I felt so bad for Leah. It must be horrible having to sit around and watch your ex be besotted with your cousin. Ouch!
Reviewer: vighnigh (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
"This chapter is too short" shouldn't be taken negatively at all. It should translate to "we love your writing and look forward to it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much that when we get a smaller word count, we are disappointed because we are super-greedy and want more". Kind of like when you are reading a series and have to wait for the next book to be published. What if SM decided to continue the Twilight series and the next book was 100 pages… It isn’t a comment on your writing, it is just our impatience. We are spoiled and lucky because you update often.
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Mischief: Jacob's POV
You should interpret "This chapter is too short" as "Holy crap .. this is AWESOME and I want to read what happens next!!!!" :-) Because it is (awesome).
Thank you! I can't wait for more :)
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