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Reviewer: EMX (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
OMG this story is so good!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've got a lot more story to tell!
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Hooboy, that was a hot little makeout scene. And so awkward to be having the sex talk with your boyfriend/girlfriend's parent. Congrats on being #1! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kym (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Holy WOW!! i am now officially Team Jacob!!!
Please don't keep me in suspence... i've found a new love!
Author's Response: Thank you! There's much more to come---including a sequel!
Reviewer: viqii (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
oh gawd, i started reading this like 2 weeks ago...
me needs more!!! its the first jaboc/bella fic that i have actually liked (and obsessed with) haha!!
pleease dont take too long for jake's pov.
love this story..and may love you for writing it :P
bye! congrats on being the most reviewed series on twilight ! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
congrats on #1 Most Reviewed Series! Damn right!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
protective Charlie = my family on Valium
Loved the update (big surprise there!) and I hope you update again soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Great chapter! I cant wait for jakes pov so i can read about charlie's convo with him
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Whooooo. Well, I'm glad it's realistic. It's almost impossible to do that much in public and not have your dad find out about it. Thank you for adding such a probable incident. If I were Bella, I'd be beyond mortified, but what I wouldn't give for Jacob Black...
<3
Author's Response: Thank you! I think I need a Jacob in my own life!
Reviewer: Seremela (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
awesome. This story has made me convert to Team Jacob =)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Bella don't second guess yourself! You two work together! Just go with it. Geez I hope she doesn't mess this one up, Jake is working really hard and he deserves a girl who loves him back.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Black Snowflake (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
One of the best lines I have ever read...This was the kind of kiss that every girl dreams about...strong and slow, sweet and consuming, soft and deliberate.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I spend a lot of time writing, re-writing, and trying to word things just right so everyone can "see and feel" the story. Sounds like it's working!
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Very hot. Very very very hot.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
POST THE OTHER CHAPTER SOOON!!!
Author's Response: Will do!
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
loved it.
of course charlie would have his gun belt on. lol
Congrats on being the top reviewed series!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Congratulations! Mrs. Newton sucks. I hope Bella and Jake aren't in to much trouble.
Author's Response: Yeah, Mrs. Newton has awful timing, huh? And no, they're not in too much trouble. Jake knows just how to push Charlie's buttons....and just when to stop!
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Congratulations! Mrs. Newton sucks. I hope Bella and Jake aren't in to much trouble.
Reviewer: jadeesmjk (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
I love it! Keep it coming...... :o)
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: squeakyshoe (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
MORE PLEAAASE!!! :)
Author's Response: Coming soon!
Reviewer: jaimejo2929 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Another awesome chapter. I could feel the tension Bella felt over Charlie having the talk with Jacob. Can't wait for Jake's side of the story. I'm dying to know what Charlie said!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think everyone will love Jake's POV and the following companion story from Charlie's POV.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
YAYAYAYAY! Congrats on Most Reviewed Series! :)
That was a FANTASTIC chapter. Wow. Seriously. Amazing. And, OMG, I want the JPOV NOW! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
UU OO poor Jake. I'm glad we'll get this from Jake's pov I can't wait to see what Charlie had to say to him.
As always, I'm loving this story. Another fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Jake's POV of this one is better than Bella's. Nothing like a little talk with the dad to make things interesting!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Yikes!! I feel like a teenager caught necking again!! Holy crap - not a fun place to be!!
As always, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! That scene brought back some pretty embarrassing memories for me, too!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Yikes!! I feel like a teenager caught necking again!! Holy crap - not a fun place to be!!
As always, looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
So Mrs. Newton is a closet racist? interesting! I'm glad that Bella is letting herself feel some regular teenage lust. Go for it, girl!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have to admit I was impressed by the way SM handled the whole teen lust thing in the books. She made sure that Bella was a normal teenager, hormones and all, even though she made Edward such a worried prude about things. I think it's only natural that Bella let go a little---after all, she is 18!
As for Mrs. Newton, I don't know if she's necessarily a racist, althought that moniker does fit iin a way. She's basically just the town busybody that thinks she's better than everyone else. Sadly, the small town I grew up in had more than it's share of Mrs. Newtons!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
I saw that you were the most reviewed series this afternoon!!! I'm so happy for you, you deserve it so much. Your story is just great and not only for us Team Jacob-wolf girls^^. I'm sure everybody can see that it's really well written though they're Team edward or something else.
So about this chapter...I officially hate Mrs Newton!!! It was going so well, Bella seemed to enjoy being with jacob so much and this woman ruined everything. She has the worst timing ever (with Embry of course^^). But I'm so glad Bella seems to want to go further with Jacob. And now I'm definitely looking forward to the Jacob's POV chapter and the talk with Charlie!
Sorry for this very long review. Congratulations again for the series. Can I ask for an update soon, please???
Author's Response: Are you kiddiing me? Long reviews are my favorite! Yeah, Mrs. Newton is pretty awful. I just couldn't have these two getting too carried away in a parking lot like that, and she was the perfect excuse. Just wait till I post the side story from Charlie's POV (after we get Jake's side of this chapter, of course!) and you'll get a look at the real Mrs. Newton---she's the most annoying woman on the planet!
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