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Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
VERY good story! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: hannahbrit (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh nooooooooooooooooooooooo i dont want this story to end EVER!!!! this is fantastic, amazing, you are incredible. I cannot even put into words my thoughts about your writing. the characters stayed so true, and you've delved into even deeper dynamics of everything then almost anyone else.
BRAVO! a million kudos, a brand new Infinite G35, and some lolipops. for fun.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Moving right along with the big stuff! Love it! Seems to me this is why teens should feel lucky to not find their matches so young! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Have I told you this is just an awesome story! and Bella's reaction was so awesome! Jacob can always phase and visit too! Much faster than her truck or most cars! She can ride Jacob back to la push! lol but not the sexual kind of ride unless she's ready for that. lol I love it! Looking forward to an update! i loved this mushy chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! still lovin' Jake; and Bella's so cute!
and what on earth is Rachel up to? i'm highly suspicious.......
Author's Response: Believe it or not, Rachel's not up to anything. What we've seen up to this point was simply her with her guard up, suspicious of Bella's intentions with Jake. After all, Jake's her little brother, and she doesn't want to see him get hurt.
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
This is great!! They really showed that they are just teenagers in this chapter!! Love it!
XOXOXOXOXOXO Jess
Author's Response: Thanks! That's actually one of the things I'm striving for in the story. Sure, there are werewolves and vampires and all that fun, but when it's all said and done, they're just two normal kids stuck in a small town and trying to figure out this thing they call growing up.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Oman, ok first i want to say that i enjoyed the whole story so much that i didn't leave any reviews for every page cuz i was hanging on to the next thing to happen.. PLEASE PLEASE write some moreand SOOOOON!! lol thank you for keeping the thought of Joke alive with Bells. I would really like to expierence the electricity between them when they finally do have sex though.
Author's Response: Thank you! It'll be a while before Bella finds herself rolling around in anyone's bed. She's got to sort a few things out for herself first, but there's definitely a lot more to come.
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
So, this isn't an official review....just wanted to let you know that you have a surprise coming to your inbox probably within the next couple days!!
Hope you will enjoy!!
Author's Response: Surprises are wonderful! Thank you!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Persistence: Bella's POV
"The men in my life were consipiring against me"
HAHAHAHAHAHA...Loved that line! Also, so glad Jake and Bella are making up!
I keep telling myself I have laundry to do and things to pick up but I can't pull myself away from this story!
XOXOXOXOXOXO Jess
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Perceptions: Jacob's POV
Ah, so Jake didn't pick up on that one. *sigh* Men...when will they understand women?? LMAO!
Great chapter!! Hope they overcome their misunderstanding soon!
XOXOXOXOOX Jess
Author's Response: Thanks. And they will. They're both a little slow on the uptake, it seems, but when it works, it really, really works!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Why do I get the feeling that things are going to come crashing down soon? I am curious as to why Rachel is ebing so nice to Bella? Or was she thinking that Bella would say some Ivy League college and break Jakes heart there and then?
Also, Bella too seems to have an inkling that she doesn't want to know about the whole imprinting thing.
Another well written chapter, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Well, things are going to get interesting, but nothing's crashing down soon. Of course, we still have imprinting & Edward's return to deal with, which is definitely going to cause some drama, but that's not happening until the sequel, so I think we're good for a while.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Questions: Jacob's POV
LOL very foolish but brave thing to do for Jake.... to make Charlie think the very worst and then say they weren't at all physical that way. Seemed to have worked. Loved it.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm moving on seeing as I'm behind everyone else.
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think Jake thought that one all the way through...but it did work out well
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
Oh Stupid MIKE NEWTON! Geesh! Take a hint will you!!
Ah, I'm hoping Jake picked up on Bella's not so subtle outburst...can't wait to read the next chapter!
XOXOXOXOOXOXOX Jess
Author's Response: It's gonna be a looooooong time before Mike gets the message. LOL!
Reviewer: EMX (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
this chapter was really good!!!
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
lol well one problem diwn much more to go lol that was great as always! lolkeep updating!!!! ^^
Author's Response: Of course! In Bella's world, trouble is always right around the corner.
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
They are so cute. Great chapter! But does Rachel have some evil motive...? Update soon. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! No, Rachel doesn't have any ulterior motives. She just worries about her little brother. At first she was cold toward Bella because she didn't trust her not to hurt Jake. Now she realizes that Jake's made up his mind (and heart) about her, so she's just trying to make sure Bella doesn't let him down.
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Such a sweet chapter and so many big steps! You know I never realized they never said "I love you" to each other before this chapter. It was so much implied in the previous ones. You're such a great writer, it's amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you! While they've both mentioned their love for each other before, it was never something quite as serious as this time. It's like they just knew they cared about each other a lot and sort of took it for granted. I wanted to make sure they had their "true love declaration" moment ;)
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Aww, Bella and Jake are so adorable together! Your chapter was awesome as usual, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Good chapter!!! You always leave me wanting more!!! I can't wait to hear Jake's thoughts on her choice of college :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Rhett (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
I so loved the "Want me to look at your truck?" Awesome stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks! I couldn't have Jake left wondering about that, and I figured something subtle but loaded like that was just his style.
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Aw, I feel Bella here on the choosing a college thing. To go or to stay mostly based on a boy, and if you're not 100% sure, that's a tough one. And she has to deal with the whole possiblity of him imprinting on someone else (she shoud probably look further into that whole thing).... GAH! And then Rachel being so seemingly supportive and nice, that was very sweet!
So I obviously really liked this chapter. Very Nice!!!!
XOXO!!!
:)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I would imagine the college dilemma would be a big one for her. I remember how hard it was for me to leave my boyfriend when I took off for school---and even though I was only 2 hours away, I might as well have been on the other side of the world!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Questions: Jacob's POV
My fav line was "Not afraid of vampires, werewolves, or Newtons." That's hilarious.
And I adore how Charlie calls Bella his little girl, and threatens to charge Jacob with Statutory Rape! That's great! :)
Loved this Chapter!
XOXO
Author's Response: Yay! Someone noticed my favorite line!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Aww... YAY! I love smart Bella! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to let her grow a backbone and start acting more like the adult she should be turning into!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
Congrats on the success of your story!
I liked this chapter! I always love to see Charlie being the overprotective father! It's so sweet! :)
XOXO
Author's Response: Thank you! I always figured there was more to Charlie than just fishing!
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