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Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV
Oh shit! Sounds like trouble for Bella and the La Push gang, and of course ending with a cliffhanger makes me anxious for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I know everyone was getting comfortable, but that's usually when trouble strikes, isn't it?
Reviewer: alexandra cullen (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV
wtf is going on
Author's Response: Chaos...anarchy...ambush...yeah, something like that.
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV
Holy cliffhanger!! Now, I really need the next chapter!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV
OMG!!!! NOW IM PANICING! LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE!!!!! ahhhh, scary!!!!! If this next chapter isnt up soon im going to die!!! omg, now i won't be able to go to sleep! grrrreeeeeaaaattt...... of course it's a great chapter, maybe even a top five favorite, but its so damn infuriationg!! i don't get to know what happens so i have to wait! ugh ugh ugh!!! you ruin my life, just kiddin!!! awesome chapter, stupid cliffie! UGH!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
LOve it, need more this story is my fav :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: brady09 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
I love your story. It is by far one of the best fanfics I've read! I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
forever? the truck's going to last forever? that could be funny.......
very nice, as always. still waiting for my Jacob to show up on my doorstep, but other wise very content with the story....... :P
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't know if Jake's quite going to be able to pull that one off, but we all know he'll try!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
Jacob is so sweet. And my favourite line was "That truck was going to last forever by the time I was done with it." I just thought that was the cutest, sweetest thing. So adorable!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
XOXO
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lion_and_the_lamb648 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
heloo,,
i thought the story was really great :)
good job
i loved how Bella an Jacob got together.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
its good
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
It so cute how happy Jake is. Aww, I can't wait to see what happens next with Bella and Jake. Excellent job as usual!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
The writing is awesome! I'm staying up all night to read it. I'm so glad I found this!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
i'm still not very clear on Rachel's intentions.
but amazing chapter as always
=]
Author's Response: Honestly, I don't think Rachel's thought it out that far either. She just goes with her gut and tries to look out for her little brother.
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
Why girls cried when they were happy, I would never understand. I like this line! And it's so true I always cry when I'm happy but I don't know why.
I'm glad that Rachel tries to get more friendly with Bella. And it seems that Paul's softening a bit since he's imprinted!
Author's Response: Thank you! I never liked the idea of knowing practically nothing about Rachel...and only knowing Paul as a hot-headed jerk. I figure everyone's got to have a good side somewhere, so I'm just going with that.
Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
Just Like Heaven is not a crappy movie, lol. Great chapter, I love those two together!
Author's Response: No, I actually enjoyed it very much myself. But I think Jake was looking for car chases or something ;)
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
Bahaha! The everlasting truck...a Chevy no less...from the sixties...I would love to see that!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Jake's got his work cut out for him, but at least he's got great incentive!
Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV
OMG, I love this writing! Anyone who is Team Jacob will love this!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! It as slow to start out, but I think most of the Team Jake people who lurk here have found the story now, and it's just getting more and more fun to write!
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
awwwwwwww. i love when you write jakes pov. theyre always so super sweet! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! Jake makes it so easy...sweet, sexy, funny. Really, how did Bella get so lucky?
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
I absolutely love Jake's point of view, as well. I forgot to mention that before. It's all just very believable. I've read so many stories where the characters say and do things that doesn't fit them at all, but this one is just perfect. Awesome, awesome job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I read a lot of other fics before I finally decided to write my own. Some are so OOC that they're just completely new stories, and that can be great. But it drives me nuts when someone takes the original characters and suddenly changes them into something totally different halfway through the first chapter. I try really hard to keep them who they were originally while allowing them to grow and develop a bit.
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Choice: Bella's POV
Well, I feel terrible! I just spent 2 hours reading this and I'm just now leaving a review, and only because I have no more chapters to read!
What a fantastic story!!! I love that you have the same sarcastic sense of humor that Bella has. I've laughed out loud more than once! Honestly, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read - and I'm definitley Team Edward. I'm so glad I gave this a shot, because it's just so brilliant!
The only negative I have about this is that I'm out of chapters to read! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I've been writing like crazy lately, so the updates should be rolling in!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
Awww... that was WONDERFUL. :)
My favorite line, "...and I smiled at the thought that she was finally beginning to realize that she belonged as close to me as possible."
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
i loved it! this is just such an awesome fic! Stupid paul! lol! but it was kinda hillarious! So much for pack loyalty! Looking forward to the update! bouncing in my seat almost lol!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
WOOOOOO!!!! great!! My heart exploded> soooo aorable! sweet little jakey! and I like seeing when paul isnt SUCH a jerk! as always you impressed me!! Snaps claps and TWO popsicles for you!
Author's Response: That was my favorite line! Thank you!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
WOOOOOO!!!! great!! My heart exploded> soooo aorable! sweet little jakey! and I like seeing when paul isnt SUCH a jerk! as always you impressed me!! Snaps claps and TWO popsicles for you!
Reviewer: Sciencemom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
Oh Jake, so sweet! I am getting a little nervous about something though. The imprinting topic keeps coming up, but we know that Jake has not imprinted on Bella. I fear what may happen next...
Author's Response: Yeah, imprinting will come up in the sequel, so I have to lay a bit of groundwork now. I know it's driving a bunch of readers absolutely nuts, and all I can say is that it will be a big deal as the story progresses.
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