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Reviewer: EMX (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

wow this chapter was really good. i cant wait for it to be updated!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: IHOWLATTHEMOONTOO (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

eeeeeep! what is happenning?



Author's Response:

There's only one way to find out...  I just posted the next chapter, and Jake's got a little more info for us!

Reviewer: BonjourLorna (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

OMG. Woo.. god now to wait... aaaah! x



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

massive? Could it be Emmett? You have me on pins and needles!



Author's Response:

Not Emmett.  Go check out the chapter I've just posted, and it'll answer your question.

Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

no not a cliff hanger!!!!!

now i must wait for a couple updates to know whats going on lol



Author's Response:

Nope, actually Jake's POV is up, and he can tell us what's going on---at least enough to know what they're up against.

Reviewer: snoopykota (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Can't wait for more! ;)

btw- You always have very nice banners.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I can't believe how much difference the banners make, but apparently that's the way to catch people's eye!

Reviewer: readgreekeasy (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

oh crap did Edward come back?



Author's Response:

Nope, not yet.

Reviewer: HeyBri11any (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

OMG!!!!!!! goddamn cliffhangers......



Author's Response:

LOL! I'd be lying if I said I wasn't enjoying everyone's reaction, but I just can't leave everyone hanging.  The next chapter is up!

Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

I like Rachel acting like the big sister she is. It's good that Bella wants to stay near Forks at least now she kind of like being there.

Update soon please!



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: chris54 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Ohhhh no no no no no!!! You are an evil little thing, you love to leave us on the "cliff" all alone.....ahh this is the worst cliffe yet!! I hope there is an update soon...or I might just *jump*!!!!

haha, I'm kidding, I love this story. You my dear are writting a very excellent story here, I love everything about it....how you make me see "bella and jake" better than any other FF's I have read! Please continue this utterly amazing work!!

I'm stalking off to my bed now, and going to rack my brain trying to figure out where in the heck are you going with this last chapter!! eeekkk LOL

(biting nails)

Thanks so very much for this wonderful story that keeps me soooo interested.....so I'll be tappin my boots till the next update!!

With all my upmost respect,

Chris



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Now stop your tapping and get to reading! The next chapter is up :)

Reviewer: Starglow31 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

okay, so i've been reading this story from about the time you started writing it and it's been in my favorites since. yet, i just realized i've only left one other review for Breathe Again. smh, forgive me! lol

anyway, OMG, what a cliffhanger! can't wait for the next installation and keep up the amazing work. i'm always happy to find a great Jacob/Bella story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: viqii (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Oh, noes. What's going on? Silver figure? what? *dies*

''What kind of future are we supposed to have if all you're qualified to do is bag groceries?" Uh-oh. Did I just say "we?"    i LOVED this!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  The good news is that the next chapter reveals what just ran by---and it's posted now!

Reviewer: viqii (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV

''...my heart exploded again.'' Just make sure Bella doesn't make Jacob have a heart attack! Haha..I loved it. Can't wait for more...



Author's Response:

Nope, no heart attacks for Jake.  He's in perfect health ;)

Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Victoria returns!!  I was starting to wonder about the timeline and why no one seemed concerned about Victoria anymore... but there was certainly plenty to worry about with getting things off the ground with Jake.

 

Whoo!  I love this story :-D



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think I lulled everyone into a sense of false security...but that's what makes it so fun!

Reviewer: ssoopphhiiee (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

i just read this whole story over the weekend and i loovvveeee it!!!!! THANK YOU for writing a bella/jacob story, i hate to admit this but i think i like your story better than new moon. i love how you write the side stories too. i can't wait for the next chapter :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There's a whole lot more to come, and I've been writing like crazy lately, so make sure you add the series to your faves so you can get email notifications :)

Reviewer: samantha0078 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

hurry up and update



Author's Response:

Done!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Silver figure? could it be a vampire?



Author's Response:

Nope, but there ARE vamps just over the horizon...

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Oooooohh!  Damn, baby!!  That more than got me on the edge of my seat!!  And here I just thought enjoying the deepening relationship was going to be enough! 

Thanks for the fast update!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I just couldn't resist breaking the happy little bubble and throwing in some action!

Reviewer: Pari625 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Wow, great chapter with a very exciting conclusion! Looking forward to the next installment!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The action is just getting started!

Reviewer: na-is-fba (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Edward?

 

A girl can hope.



Author's Response:

No Edward...yet.

Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

ooooOOoo who is it edward or victoria? plz be edward



Author's Response:

Nope, it's not Edward---not yet at least.

Reviewer: DamagedGirl (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

OMG! I didn't see that coming at all.

Please update quick!



Author's Response:

Then I've done my job well ;)   Thank you!

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

OMG what is that?  You need to get to the Bella chapter pronto so we can find out!



Author's Response:

How about if I tell you I just posted the Jacob chapter, and he's gonna let us know who (or what) is out there?

Reviewer: jadeesmjk (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

What the?!?!?! Ok, this is getting really good, what could the silver thing be? Arrrrrgh! Cant wait for the next chapter! :o)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

That was SO mean, I'm going to have to insist that you update immediately!



Author's Response:

Sooooo...now would be good?

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