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Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Yeah...this chapter is also going to require an update, immediately. :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The next one will definitely be up soon!

Reviewer: Rhett (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

oooh oooh post again! agggh, i so hope they've come back. don't get me wrong, this is my favorite J/B fic, but they have to come back right? turn things upside down for a bit? :) love it, as usual.



Author's Response:

We will definitely see some Cullens, but not until the sequel.

Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Wow!!!!
This is awesome! So awesome! I'm like, wow, great, so awesome!
I love action and it looks like we're in for some!
I hope no one gets hurt though :)
And I hope Victoria dies.

FANTASTIC! LOVED IT!!!

I can't wait for the next update! :)

XOXO



Author's Response:

Well, without giving anything big away, I can tell you that the wolf pack will come out of this scrape just fine.  I love them too much to let any of them die or get seriously injured. 

Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

OMG OMG OMG......

WTF????

You totally caught me surprise with that ending. What is it? Aliens? Victoria? I must read the next chapter now to see if Jake know whats going on.

GREAT chapter!!!

XOXO



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Amber_Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

hmmm... i wonder who's pov its gonna be..

really good chapter by the way..

as always... can't wait for more!!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Amber_Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

grrr.... cliffie!!

next chapter!



Author's Response:

Okay, yeah, it was a cliffie.  But at least Jake can tell us a little about what's going on!

Reviewer: jacobsdream (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

EEEEEEEEEEEPPPPP!!!!! I'm so excited!  My heart's pounding!!!

More importantly, when do Jake and Bella get it on? Just wondering?



Author's Response:

Oh, now you know I can't answer that ;)

Reviewer: HeyBri11any (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

AHHH ACTION!    

EPOV????    

I can't wait...



Author's Response:

guess again ;)

Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

I can't wait to read more!!!  This story is amazing!  Please keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jadeesmjk (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Aaaarrrrrrggghhhh! I cant wait til the next chapter AND the companion story!!!! Keep it comming! :o)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Oh wow -- a fire?  And lots of vampires?  It seems too early to be the newborns!  I hope it's not... the poor werewolves are going to be in trouble if there are all those newborns without the Cullens to help them!

Thank you :-)



Author's Response:

Hmmmm...I don't want to give anything away, but you're on the right track.

Reviewer: Daisy-Chain (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Oooh, intense!

And exciting. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Pleasure to read, as always :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Getting so exciting!  Can't wait for another update...yeah, I'm greedy like that. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Keller (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

This is so goooooood!!!  Eeekkkk!  I cannot wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Yay! HOW DO YOU GET THESE CHAPTERS UP SO FAST?! thats crazy!! amazing, but crazy! hahahaha, now i'm panicing!!! WHO IS HERE?!?!!?!?!?!? i'm sooooo scared!!! omg, hypervinilating!!!!! just kidding! PLEASE give me another chapter quickly, please please please with a cherry on top!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Sadly, my writing seems to take the same bipolar path my brain does.  Right now I'm totally manic, and that means I'm writing like crazy!

Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

wow nice cliff hanger! Is Edward going to come back in this story?



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward will be back in the sequel.

Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Great story so far... but I'm gonna be really pissed if the glow is aliens!



Author's Response:

LOL! No worries---I've never been into aliens! ;)

Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Ooh, you're evil for leaving off there!  What a cliff-hanger.  Can't wait to see what happens.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I couldn't bear to leave everyone hanging, so the next chapter is up---and Jake's got some more info for us about what's going on!

Reviewer: twilightchick11 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

OHMYGOD. I need to know who it is. Ahhhhhh! Please continue as sooooooon as you can!!! Sheesh, talk about a cliffhanger..!



Author's Response:

Well, get to reading! The next chapter is up ;)

Reviewer: HeartnSoulzDesire (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

oman how could it just end there??????  MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

Coming up....right now!

Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

whaaa?! what's going on? is there going to be supernatural trouble or just a forest fire?



Author's Response:

Well, it's Forks, so it's bound to be supernatural!

Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

I have to admit I was all for being on team Edward til I read your story. The relationship between Bella and Jacob kept me wanting to read, read and read some more. I can't wait for you to post some more chapters on here.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I love Edward too, but I couldn't resist the giant What If!

Reviewer: Utterly Absurd (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Ahhh!  Did not see that coming!  Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And the next chapter is now up :)

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

a massive silver figure??? another mean cliffie!!! I still love you though.

You said more reviews from your regular readers (and I AM the most regular of your readers!) make you update sooner - so here I am!

2 those who have just found the story and are now looking through the reviews - guys, it's the best B/J story you can find here! Totally awesome, mature, breathtaking stuff!

Ysar rocks!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  The next one is now up!

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Okay, even though I already know what's going on, let me just say, for everyone else, you evil woman, leaving on a cliffie like that!  hehe

Hopefully the Insight thing works out well.  Is that an acutal program, or is it just something you made up?  Ooo, and maybe Jake can take some online college coarses afterwards, just to help him get some kind of degree.  I mean, what w/ the Cullens gone, the pack isn't gonna have to be so large.  So, in theory, he'll be able to leave soon if he wants to.

Love this, darling!  Can't wait for another update (and some more new chapters)!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I did some research into the Tribal School at one point---can't remember why---and discovered the Insight Program.  Apparently the Tribal school isn't only limited to Quileutes, or even Native Americans for that matter.  And although it is mostly people from the area's different reservations, they have a choice.  The kids in La Push actually fall into the school district that includes Forks High, so they can choose which one they want to go to.  And the Insight Program is available to all students in Washington, providing them with laptops and allowing them to get a real diploma online.  I'm glad I accidentally found out about it because it gave me the perfect realistic solution for Jake. 

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