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Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Loved it!  Looking forward to more, especially the new companion story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Okay, so, somehow I didn't get an alert for this chapter but got one for the next.  So, I decided to try reading them the other way around and read Jake's chapter first.  It was good and fun and different but your way is totally better.  :)  But you probably already knew that.

Anyway, anxious for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

mmmm interesting... i have only one thing left to say....EDWARD!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you!

Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Soo good, as always! Can't wait for the next chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Okay, this is how it's going to go.  My husband it flying down to TX next month.  I'm going to come with him, kidnap you, bring you back to NY with me, and hold you hostage so that you can write for me all day long.  hehe  By the time I'm done, I'm going to have quite the collection of fic authors living in my office.  Guess it's great my hub's is such a good cook. 

Wonderful chapter, darling.  Can't wait to read the rest and see where you take our lovely couple.  And some more smoochies (and a little more, eventually) would be wonderful as well.



Author's Response:

Nooooooo!  I tried going north of the Mason-Dixon line once and discovered that I cannot survive on the food there.  Plus, people hear my accent and think I'm inbred. ;)

Reviewer: -Livi- (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV

OMG!!! This is so exciting! What happens next? Pleas update soon! I like the idea that the vampires are back, it kinda brings a little thrill into the story. Well done!!! =) Sory for the bad english, I´m only a Norwegian girl :P

When do you think the next chapter is up?



Author's Response:

Well, it's definitely time for a wolf vs vamp fight.  I usually watch my reviews to know when to post the next chapter----once I see that my regular readers have had a chance to catch up, I go ahead and submit another one, so it should be pretty soon.  Oh, and your English is great!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

That would be fun if Embry imprinted on Jessica:) What a couple they would make!

As to the vamps, I bet Victoria's back.

Looking forward to a new chapter. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: IHOWLATTHEMOONTOO (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

oooooooooooo.... interesting. vampires are back. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

oh jeez, more more more more more more more more more



Author's Response:

I can definitely do that!

Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

^^ upsate soon i have a guess who it actually is: EDWARD... it's a guess not really sure but it is... o yea! I CAN SEE THE FUTURE lol jk ^^

FF



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: thirstforblood (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

This is soooooo good!! Love it!! Thank you :)



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: XFireandIceX (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Admission: Bella's POV

Oooh...very good!  I love endings that keep you hanging.  Can't wait to read the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

:) Great update



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

i hope your manic-ness doesnt stop until this is all done haha yea my mom is hooked ive read all of stephanies books to her like 3 times and after she read it she wanted me to read it aloud to her haha surprisingly my mom is 43 im 20 and we never got along until twilight haha keep the writing up i realllly cant wait the last one came just in time for me not to go crazy :D i love it



Author's Response:

I think Twilight has bridged a lot of age gaps.  I'm nearly 20 years older than my youngest sister, and the books really cemented our relationship.  We went to see the movie multiple times, we read the books and talked about them on the phone every night, and when the DVD came out, we pushed all other plans aside so we could camp out and watch it.  Everyone else in the family thought we were nuts, but we were just having so much fun!

Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Ahh! Now I'm really anxious to read the next chapter.  Forks is on fire and an invasion of vampires?   You definitely don't do anything by halves.  :)



Author's Response:

Nope, I figure if there's gonna be an attack, it should definitely be a good one. :)

Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

i knew the silver thing zooming past was a wolf... when i read it i thought "wasnt one of the wolves silver-y?" but my memory isnt the best.

so they are vampires... not the cullens obviously.. so i'm assuming victoria and others.

amazing chapter and thanks for not keeping us waiting long =]



Author's Response:

Yep! I had to do some re-reading of the book to figure out which wlf was what color, and it worked out just perfect that it could be Paul.

Reviewer: leebell (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

I was so into your story that I read everything in one sitting. I can't wait to find out what will happen next. Keep up the good work.  



Author's Response:

That must have been one loooooonnnng sitting!  And there's lots more to come!

Reviewer: AthenianPostbox (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

AHHHH THE SUSPENSE IS INTENSE!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Finally Victoria is back! With all the drama about Lauren and everything we almost forgot her! I like your companion stories I'm glad you'll make this one!



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

I love the quick updates I gotta say but now i'm even more terrified to see what is going on! I hope its not victoria and her army! Can the wolves defeat the army without the cullen's help like in the book?! I dont want to see anyone in the pack die! Ugh! I know i know i'm getting ahead of myself but seriously! I'm so scared for them right now! I'd die if jacob got hurt! Or worse if bella got turned!



Author's Response:

No one in the pack will die :)

Reviewer: Salem Witch 17 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

usually I am not so inarticulate but I have to say, I want Jacob



Author's Response:

Me too!

Reviewer: Parker Reads (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

I hope you update quickly again! This chapter left me all anxious to see what's next.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

i saw that there are 999 reviws so i thought y not make it 1000?

i have been reading and am up to chapter 37 and am realllllllyyyy happy to see that Jake and Bella are acting like Teenagers - with all the overexcitedness on the couch to Bella yelling about oversexed boys and then the scene that was played out for Lauren in Newtons car park and the scene between Jake and Bella - i was like "no way OMG"

love your work so far (C37) am sure that i will love the rest!!!!    :) 



Author's Response:

Yay!  I finally hit 1000!  I really never thought a J/B story would do this well here!  I'm glad you love the normal teen stuff---that was one of the driving factors in my writing the story.  I do love the supernatural aspect of it all, but when it comes down to it, they're just normal kids, and normal stuff is bound to happen.

Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

Yeah...this chapter is also going to require an update, immediately. :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The next one will definitely be up soon!

Reviewer: Rhett (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV

oooh oooh post again! agggh, i so hope they've come back. don't get me wrong, this is my favorite J/B fic, but they have to come back right? turn things upside down for a bit? :) love it, as usual.



Author's Response:

We will definitely see some Cullens, but not until the sequel.

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