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Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
What happened with Victoria??? I can't wait to find out!
I love that Bella isn't scared of the huge wolves!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I love the way Bella was interacting with wolf-Jacob. He should give her a ride in his wolf form. Can't wait to see what the wolves and Jacob thought about Bellas actions.
Writing is good as always, I wish your chapters were a little longer but the chapter was good.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: melonhead25 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
This was really good and was very creative!! :)
spaghettigirl18
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I'd love to see Jake wagging his tai LOL
The chapter reminds me of a typical picture of all times - men fighting (hunting, working etc.) out there thile their women are patiently and loyally waiting for them. Like Penelope and Odysseus...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
great story. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Gah! You leave us there? Gah! *starts banging on table* Update! Update! Update! *cough* hehe
Great job, darling. Glad the boys are okay, at least. Can't wait to see what happened and everyone's thoughts about Bella running out to them like a lunatic. hehe
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
He smelled of musk and woods and…dog?
Yes Bella, he IS a giant dog. lol, silly Bella.
Author's Response: I couldn't resist putting that in there!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
just read 44 and 45... can you say fabulous!!!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Daisy-Chain (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Love how you stay true to Jake's personality even in the moments after battle.
i also loved that quick little moment of panic when Bella realised Leah was missing, only for her to be off dressing. My heart did a little jump (i love Leah - she's the strongest female in the books, in my opinion) and i was worried for a second.
Great chapter! You're so good at conveying Bella's feelings that i just kept super impatient to read Jake's chapter because you get him downpat too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree about Leah, and I really want her to have a happier ending here!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I really liked this chapter. Having the wolves involved is fun. I totally had a dream about wolf Jake a couple of nights ago, so seeing him with Bella here was great!
I'm really curious to find out what happened with Victoria now though. Can't wait for Jacob's POV. :)
XOXO
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Waiting: Bella's POV
I just had a thought...is Bella every going to look under her floor boards and find all the memories of Edward? It could make the story quite interesting!! BTW you have totally converted onto Jacob's Team. I am rereading Eclipse and I can't believe how controlling and frankly, an asshole, Edward can be. I wish your story was the real thing...but then would Jacob imprint on his own daughter...? lol eewwww!!
Author's Response: Ewww is right! LOL! Yeah, I really liked Eclipse, and Edward's possessiveness was a bit overdone. Yeah, it was great that he loved Bella that much, but he was pretty close to needing a restraining order. As for the floorboards...yeah, we'll be checking in on them soon enough.
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I dont get it! lol they shouldnt be shocked HELLOOO! She wasnt scared of dating a vamp and vamps dont have a human form they're bloodsuckers 24/7! I want to see what is going on in Jake's head and the pack! lol I'm still confused as to why they would think she was crazy and looking at her weird! Update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Sure, Bella dated a vampire, but Edward never changed his form---which was human, only hard & cold. Not to mention the fact that vampires are supposed to be breathtakingly beautiful to human eyes. Jake, on the other hand, just morphed into an enormous dog. The first time she saw him in that form, she ran for her life. The second time, the guys were placing bets on whether or not she would throw up. And everyone knows what happened to Emily. So why would they just ecpect her to be all sunshine and rainbows about it, much less run right up to them?
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
yay everyones safe!
can't wait for jacobs point of view
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Delphius2004 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Way too short :(! I love this story and want more of it. Seriously though...thank you for the quick updates. Looking forward to some more romance.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
*SQUEEEEEEEEEE*
Good Grief! Every chapter of this story makes me squeal like a little wolfy fan girl!!! I LOVE IT!! :D
and that little "roll over" trick at the end...priceless
Author's Response: Thank you! You know it just wouldn't be Jake if he didn't say or do something silly!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Love it. I read the first 40 chapters at once and this one at a time is killing me. I'm so glad Jacob is fine. I can't wait for his POV and find out what really happened. Is Victoria still on the loose?
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Funny! LIked the ending. That's our Bella, not afraid of the supernatural! She's seen a lot in her short life. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jacobsdream (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
That was sweet, but I can't wait to get to some action!!! I love Bella and Jacob.
B&E it's been done and I get it. They are very much the IT couple for all of for ever, but it's nice to think of the "could haves". I know I definitely would have gone for the Jacob type and that's why I love this story so much. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I have loved this story since you posted it on FF.net and I am so excited that you are all caught up on the postings :) I really can't wait for Jake's point of view here...like every chapter is this is wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
HAHAHAHA! HE ROLLED OVER! That's just too good! hahahaha, i love it! hahaha, awesome job! once again! snaps claps and ice cream sundaes for this chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Waiting: Jacob's POV
Hey !!
just poping in to give more praise!!
{sets laptop aside and kneels down on the floor } All hail Ysar!!!!
i mean this Seriously! to be honest- ive never been a fanfic girl, but youve got me entranced with how you've taken the story in a whole different direction but still kept the characters the same as in the actual books!!! ..now im wondering if youre actually SM?
I've ferociously devoured everything you've posted on here and my thirst isint quenched!!! i want ...NEED! more!!!!
Any hints as to when your releasing another chapt?
aloha~hannah
Author's Response: Your wish is my command! Next chapter is up now!
And sadly, I am not SM. If I were, it would be MUCH easier to pay my bills ;)
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Admission: Jacob's POV
OMG i can't wait for more!! I love the twist with the vampires (i was wondering when they would return).
PS: you're already on my favorites!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! As much as I was enjoying the everyday life thing, I couldn't forget the vamps! After all, it wouldn't be Forks (or Bella) without some supernatural action!
Reviewer: mummi (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Wow! This is awesome... I think even Stephenie would approve... OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Waiting: Jacob's POV
i want- no...NEED more!!!! ppplease?!!!
so good!!!!!
Author's Response: More is coming soon, I promise. Thank you!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Waiting: Jacob's POV
Wow! I love your Alternate Universe! It's really good. Your characters are so believable! I loved Victoria's point of view, as well. Nicely done!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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