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Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Love it!!!! So wonderful more more more Write MORE!! please I am dieing for more. Just love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: scarletluna (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
love your story, please let all of the odd looks and Jacob staring at her as a wolf be his imprinting on her
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: IHOWLATTHEMOONTOO (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Why wouldn't she cuddle her wolf... silly other people. Wolf Jacob would be a great snuggler!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Can't wait for Jacobs POV!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
that last part made me giggle especially hard "Yes, my boyfriend was a gigantic werewolf, capable of shredding almost indestructible vampires. And he was rolling around on the ground like a mutant puppy." I mean thats just priceless haha i was biting my tongue waiting though i cant wait to read more brilliant as always
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
{little girls voice} gimme gimme!! more more more!!!!
OMG!! soo good! im so glad jacob got back safe!!!!
{evil grin} stop torturing us though and post more ;)
pplease?
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: never fading scars (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
love it bt i think bella and rachel warmed up a lil to quickly but its still great!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, but no, Rachel & Bella haven't completely mended their fences yet. Rachel is an emotional girl, and she lets whatever she's feeling at the moment rule her actions. Initially she was worried about her brother, so she wasn't too keen on his dating the "vampire girl," and in this chapter she was just desperate and scared, so she latched onto someone who was in the same boat. That doesn't mean she's completely okay with Bella yet.
Reviewer: ApplesnFeathers (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
In two days time I have read all of what you have written so far. I am Team Edward but Jacob holds a place somewhere in my heart and I have to say reading your story makes that place grow. You have nailed the characters so beautifully! I thought you should know that my roommate and I do a Twilight Saga related youtube channel Monday-Friday. Wednesday's are dedicated to Twilight Saga fan fiction and giving the writers the credit they deserve for such amazing and creative work. I'm telling you this because you will be one of the highlights this week. Don't worry all credit does go to you! I just give you the praise you deserve lol. If you'd like to check out the channel the address is http://www.youtube.com/ApplesnFeathers and don't worry I'm addicted to this story now so you MUST keep writing lol
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sounds like I'll be plugging your show in my next post!
Reviewer: leebell (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I can't wait to find how Jacob's and Bella's relationship continues to develop. Great job once again.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Bokormen_Lia (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
You've got me completely hooked and I can hardly wait for the next chapter and Jacob's point of view! I LOVE the story and the way you have the characters interact with each other. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
That was fun!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
Yay! They're back!!! I thought the Jake as a wolf part was so cute. Wonderful chapter!
=]
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: august30 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV
I was always so torn between Jacob and Edward. I liked them both for different reasons!!! Reading this I wish now that she had stayed with him. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I love them both, too, and if I were in Bella's shoes, I don't think I'd be able to decide!
Reviewer: august30 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
Okay so I laughed so hard when Embry began to choke on the popcorn!! That was a hillarious scene!!! I loved this chpt
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: august30 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Surrender: Bella's POV
That was so sweet!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: august30 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Moments: Bella's POV
Love the chapter!!!! I love Jacob's character! He is a normal teenage boy!!! Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I love love love this story! While I loved Jacob, I always wanted Bella and Edward together, but I have fallen in love with the whole Bella/Jacob story so much! Thanks for this! I anxiously await your next chapters!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do love Edward, but I couldn't resist the chance to see what could have happened with Jake.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
haha awesome:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
I really liked this. Your Jacob is extremely cool.
Of course, I've always kinda been a wolf-girl myself... :-)
DS games freak me out. Moleskin journals are good. :D
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
^^ yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ssoopphhiiee (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
YAY i love jake and i loved the chapter thanks for updating
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
What happened with Victoria??? I can't wait to find out!
I love that Bella isn't scared of the huge wolves!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
What happened with Victoria??? I can't wait to find out!
I love that Bella isn't scared of the huge wolves!
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
They're home safe! Yay! Of course Bella would run straight to a pack of werewolves. It's in her nature. ;)
Still enjoying the ride, and can't wait for Jake's POV!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
What happened with Victoria??? I can't wait to find out!
I love that Bella isn't scared of the huge wolves!
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