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Reviewer: loveforwild (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
You are fabulous! I love this story line, I can't wait for the next chapter! We do get to see a sex scene between Bella and Jake right? Please. Love You!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
Fantastic chapter!!
I think I could be interested in the Twi-Fic Challenge but don't feel inspired by the current quote... and there could be others who feel that way too. :) Good luck!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
I can't wait for more...I wish the chapters were longer.
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
wow!!! congratulation!!!! ^^ i'm so happy for u!!! ^^ lol jake is such a dork well^^ update soon
FF
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
I really wanna go read your forum, but i havent had my account approved yet..
its weird cuz i signed up a week ago :(
{twiddles thumbs} pssh... im not the epitomy of patience i'll admit, but this is getting under my skin!! Dont they know i need my jacob fix in between your delicious chapters?!!! $*@% ....lol
Author's Response: Well that just sucks! Actually, if I remember correctly, it took a while for me to get access to the forum as well. I can't remember if I just finally got approved or if I emailed one of the administrators... Oh well, definitely join us when they let you in, and be sure to read the first page of my thread. I gave someone a pretty long-winded answer about the direction the story is going.
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
Another great chpater! Woop woop!! I can't believe they didn't get Victoria! Damn! I hope she really gets an ass whopin, sooooon!!!
Author's Response: Well, she'll be back, of course---a bit later though. And someone is bound to put her out of her misery...
Reviewer: fanofevanescence (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
I really really enjoy reading your story ! I like it SO much !!! And also because Edward is gone, and Bella and Jacob are together .. That makes the story so much better ..... I'm Team Jacob and I didn't like the fact that Bella and Jacob didn't end up together in New Moon ... Your version of New Moon is so much better than Steåhanie Meyers ... :) I hope you will keep updating the story :) I can't wait to read more !
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
Another fantastic chapter! :) I loved it just as much as the previous ones! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I love it! :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: The Darkest Vampire Queen (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
This is a great story Ysar!!! I never thought I would like a Bella/Jacob story, but I think you have changed my mind! It has been so well written and I like the fact that you go back and forth between point of views as well as the companion stories. The way you have written Bella's and Jacob's relatonship seems like he's already inprinted on her. Thanks so much for writing this and for updating so quickly!! I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I read so many J/B stories that were just unrealistic, OOC, or one-dimensional before I started writing this. I think people forget that they're just normal kids at the end of the day.
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
awwww! yes, i know i saw that everytime, but it's always a 'awww' moment! 10, as always....heading over to the forum now!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
Love it....BUT...LONGER CHAPPYS PLEASE!!!!!!! <3 I just love this story! Thank you so much for it!
Author's Response: Ummmm...not gonna happen. Word count doesn't even cross my mind when I'm writing the story---I just sort of let things play out as they will, and in the end, the chapters all end up about the same length. I think it's a curse.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
awesome chapter:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
p.s.
yes i definately also think bella and jake should have some cute "puppies"
like the precious wolf pup in my pic! lol
... im gettin thirsty from all the kissing scenes, and eagerly waiting for some Lemon-aid :) make sum puppies!!!
bwahahahaha
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
another Awesome chapter!!!!!
i love how the relationships between bella and jake's family,and the rest of the pack are getting stronger! Nice foundation!!!
"Please sir,..i mean miss... I want some more!?" heehee!
~hannah
Author's Response: Thank you! Bella's got to fit in somewhere, right?
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
that was amazing im soo glad i read this story i cant wait to read more you make me smile like i used to haha and thats quite a feat in itself :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
Oh good! Saw the update! :) Yay!
This is a GREAT series.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
That was cute at the end of this chapter, love the story
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
sigh...this story makes my day :)
Author's Response: And your reviews make mine!
Reviewer: Amber_Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
congrats with the youtube thing thats soo cool. Now even more ppl will read ur fan fic and they should cuz its awesome. :D
Plz don't take to long for the next update! I will be waiting and checking my email everyday. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
You already know my thoughts on the whole imprinting thing, darling. Besides, I'm over there enough as is. hehe A little lurking, a little posting, you know how it goes.
Great chapt, bb! Loved it! Now, write us some more. Please. Hell, if you won't come up here, I'll steal my hub's tickets and come to you. I cook, clean, babysit, the whole nine. All you have to do is write. hehe
Just curious, how much do you think is left to this? I know you're talking about a sequel, but do you know about how many more chapts you want to do on this? And will the seq be in the same format?
Author's Response: Yes, you are one of my loyal forum posters! And what's this about cleaning? I may just have to leave a spare key under the mat for you!
As for how much is left...I really don't know. Everytime I think I'm done, I realize I have another loose end to wrap up. Let's see...Victoria has done her thing, so that part's taken care of...there's some very minor J/B miscommunication I need to cover...some Rachel moodiness...oh, and a super-secret little event that leads us into the happily-ever-after (at least until the sequel) ending. Damn, even though it doesn't sound like much, that's gonna be a lot more chapters. This one was #46, and I've got them partially-written up to #57, and that doesn't even cover half of what I have left to include in the tale. It really is the never-ending story!
And the sequel...I haven't figured out the format yet. Originally I wanted to do back to back POVs like this one, but there's some stuff that really needs to be told from just one POV for a while. I'll definitely have both POVs, but it will probably be something like 1 from Bella, 1 from Jake, 3 from Bella, 1 from Jake, 1 from Bella, 3 from Jake... That's really the only way I can think of to tell the story right.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
I'm a whiner about short chapters (not that the length isn't completely correct from a literary standpoint, just from an impatience standpoint), but this one was oddly satisfying even though it wasn't huge.
Thanks!
And maybe I'll use your info about the challenge to motivate me to write my first ff that's been kicking around in my head for a while. RL sucks for me right now, but maybe I can bust some time free. I'd like to. :)
As always, thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Oh, I know exactly what you mean about RL...mine has been a rollercoaster through hell lately. Ironically, it's fanfiction that helps me de-stress! I get to put myself into a whole different world, where things can work out the way I want them to... Yeah, if I didn't have fanfic, I'd probably need a padded room!
Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
Man I know you told us that Edward was gonna come back but man how sweet is this...are you really sure he didn't imprint on Bella :) lol. I love Jakes point of view...even when its serious he always makes me laugh!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: samantha0078 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
i love this story so much....cant wait 4 another update
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: brettrocks (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
jake needs to imprint on bella and then edward needs to come back it can be a developed inprint that they have never seen before but and imprint non the less and when erward comes back bella rejects him HARD!!!!!!!!!! moihahahahaha sorry not telling u what to do or anything just getting it out of my system u know what i mean?lol anyways love your shit cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: That would just wrap everything up in a pretty little bow, wouldn't it? LOL!
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