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Reviewer: ravenwhitlock33 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

I love the fact that Bella and Jacob get to stay together after the battle.  I also like the fact the Billy says she is one of them now.  Please do not let Jacob imprint on someone or Edward come back and still her.  I really want Jacob to get the girl this time.  Thanks for continuing to write!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: ApplesnFeathers (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

Did I read that end chapter not correctly? You are going to bring some Cullens back? OHHHHHHHHH Now I am beyond pumped! Ok! Ummm I say bring Alice, Emmett, and I don't want to say Edward cause DRAMA CITY but yeah bring him back eventually lol

Author's Response:

Yes, we will definitely be having some "drama city" in the sequel ;)

Reviewer: ScarlettButler (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

I am a huge Jacob fan so I was ecstatic when I found your series. You are doing a great job keeping the characters with their original characteristics and personalities. And incorporating Rachel and the other characters more is an added bonus since it creates a few more scenes and scenarios. I'm not one to read the various POVs but the way you wrote them makes the reader interested. Usually its just a complete recap of the chapter before but you add different thoughts, emotions, and actions which takes the scene to a whole different level. And of course I love that you have  Bella with Jacob. He actually fits the time frame with his thoughts, actions, and problems. Keep up the good work, you definitely got me hooked!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I know from my own fanfic reading that good Jake fics are few and far between, which is a big reason why I just started writing my own.  I didn't really think it would take off like this, but I certainly wanted to write it the way I thought it should be.  I think the reason I end up writing all the other POVs is simply because I get too involved in the reasons the other characters do and say things, so I'm thrilled that everyone seems to like the extra insight.  As for doing everything in Jake's & Bella's POVs, I started that simply to show that they both had different thoughts and reasons for their actions, and also to highlight the continual miscommunications they have.  SM gave us a glimpse of all that in Breaking Dawn, and I just couldn't help but want to dig deeper into Jake's mind.

Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

OMG!!!! yay!!!!!!! ^^ update soon k?



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV


Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV

great job, as usual:)

is victoria getting back in the sequel? are they going to deal with her in this story yet? and I'm dying here to find out which of the Cullens will make it back first (not Eddie? no, of course not, that would be way too easy to you:))

and I hope Charlie will be find - you aren't going to risk his life, are you?

Thank you for an amazing story. Again and again

Author's Response:

Victoria is pretty much gone for now, but there will be another showdown in the sequel.  And no, I could never put Charlie in danger.  I love him too much!

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV

 more more more more!! please more

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV

I loved it.  I especially loved it when Billy put his foot down about Bella being one of them.

I'm a greedy person so please update soon.




Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: underwater963 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV

I just want to say that I'm so glad that you add new chapters so often. You have no idea how excited I get every time I see that you've added another lol. So I'm kinda curious as to what you're gonna do with the imprinting thing? Anywayyssss I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Imprinting is going to remain a mystery for now.  Only one person other than me knows how that's going to play out, and that's because she helped me hammer out the details.

Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV

Kind of excited that she has to stay the night!! Can't wait for Jacob's POV!!  So, she is not dead! Edward going to make an appearance ? I am so Team Edward usually...but I would like him to stay away just for this story! I am loving Jacob and Bella!! Great job! I love this!!

Author's Response:

Edward's coming back in the sequel.

Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV


Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

slightly concerned victoria is still on the lose.

love the chapter... staying the night, that should be interesting =]


Author's Response:

Yes, Victoria will be back eventually.  She's not one to give up so easily.

Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

Can't wait to read the next chapter!  Still loving this story!


Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

Haha, I love how laid back Billy is about Bella staying over. Great job as usual.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

Is it sexy time now? Even a little? It's probably best for Bella's sake if it isn't though. Eventual imprinting for Jacob means heartbreak for Bella, and if she gives it up to him, that'll make everything harder. I think they need to talk about imprinting some more (or at all). I'm glad everything's alright. :) And I'm glad Victoria lost her arm - she'll definetly come back super pissed, and with more back up next time.

Can't wait to see where we go from here! :)


Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

I just LOVE this story. Its so right!! Im a total Edward fan too but I cant stop reading this! Im so excited about this sleep over I know we get to see Jacob POV on this chapter first and Im excited for that too but I CANT WAIT to see what happens next!! Love it!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

oooo....this could get interesting....don't leave us(read: me....) hanging too long!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

A new chapter!!  The perfect thing to find on a Saturday morning when I'm at work instead of at home sleeping!

Let me just reiterate- I adore this story... SO much. You are a very talented writer. The flow of this story is perfect and it's amazing how in character you write Bella, Jake, and the rest of the La Push gang. I especially enjoy the Jake chapters because you have such a good understanding of his character.

Before reading this new chapter I read chapter 46 (Jake's POV) again and I just have to say I adore the moments between Jake and Bella when he's in wolf form. So beautiful and sweet. Bella going up to a transformed Jake was just so...Bella.

Anyway, this review got a bit longwinded, but your story inspires me to gush! lol

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Long-winded reviews are some of my favorites1

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

I'd also like to agree with "willowguess"... and tell you how much I appreciate the fact that, unlike many other fanfics, your story has an excellent, captivating storyline, wonderful character development, passion, angst, love... and all without the feeling of a cheap porn....

Hey we all like to see a little lovin' (I am ALL FOR TEAM NAKED JACOB)... but there's no need to be filthy about it, and the story doesn't have to be ALL about sex!

Can't wait for your next chapter....Love your story and thanks again!!

Author's Response:

Oh, Team Naked Jacob sounds awesome!  LOL!

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

YAY sooo happy to see another chapter... I'm tellin ya I am lovin this so much the suspense of what may happen next might kill me!!!!  I am following quite a few fanfics now and yours is BY FAR my favourite!  Thank You, Thank You, Thank You!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

this is so freakin good. i told a couple of my friends about this story too. most fanfiction is completely ooc & usually ends up like a cheap porn. but youre doing an amazing job & i cant wait to keep reading!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I fell in love with the characters in the books, and I just couldn't stand the idea of changing them!

Reviewer: kelmikmag (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

I love this story - keep writing!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

The parting line makes me chuckle!  :)

I think I'm going to have to go back and read this through again once it's complete.  The chapters are the appropriate length for the story, but it feels a little piecemeal to me in this moment.  I just get into it when I end up waiting again. Still totally enjoying the story, but I think I'll be more satisfied by the nuances if I can read it all together.


Author's Response:

LOL! I actually do the same thing!   Anytime I've been away from the story for a couple of days, I sit down and re-read most of it so I can get back into the right mindframe for what's going on.  :)

Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

wow.  great chapter. poor Bella .  Victoria just won't stop.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: m0ngoos3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV

So I've been reading your story(ies) and Ive managed to catch up (start to finish) in about a day and a half....It would have been sooner if I didnt have to work and be a productive part of society xD lol


I love your writing and I can't wait to read each chapter. When I first started reading, I didn't realize it was a work-in-progress, so when I finished reading "Homecomming: Jacob's POV" last night and there was nothing further I PANICKED! I just recently came upon Twilighted so I figured that the Top Favorited would at least be an older, finished story. Not the case, thankfully. I still have so many questions and I can't wait to see what happends next.


Just one thing, though. I really want to know if Edward is ever going to make an appearance. Alice, even though she was never intentionally looking into Bella's future, saw visions of Bella's future because she was so intuned to her...So I can't see Alice NOT seeing the return of Victoria and her miinons to kill Bella and have Edward NOT hear about it and come rushing back to save her...Unless of course everything was clouded by the werewolves (?)


*Sigh* I am a very confused Team Edward fan. Reading this fan fiction has made me love Jacob lol

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I know what you mean about the older stories.  I have made the mistake of getting totally caught up in some great fics, only to be left hanging because they were written ages ago, and the authors haven't updated in forever!

As for questions, I do a lot of Q&A in the forum, but that's limited to adults, so not all my readers have access to it.  One thing I hope you'll see is that I try to be as true to the original story as possible while allowing the characters to go on a different path.  That's why Victoria showed up with newborns, Brady & Collin are starting to go through the phasing thing (although I don't think I've mentioned that in the official story yet), and Edward will be coming back.  In New Moon, he did say that he was close to coming back anyhow, so it's kind of required.  He'll show back up in the sequel, as will Victoria.

As for Alice, yes, she did see glimpses of Victoria in Washington, but because the wolves have been in the way, she hasn't gotten a clear enough picture to realize that Bella was in danger.

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