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Reviewer: g-riley (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV
I love this story so much. I know you said to discuss this on the forum, but... PLEASE PLEASE bring back Edward. Let's see who she loves more. Bella is sleeping over at Jacob's, huh? Is it time for some lovin'? Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. It's been mentioned about a million times now, and was decided long ago that Edward is coming back in the sequel. In the forum we're discussing the other Cullens, who should come back first, why, etc.
Reviewer: Lauryn-Ashley (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
I LOVED this so far. lol I couldn't stop reading it. I need more!! :D Definitely my favorite fanfic ever :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Wonderful! I would love to read more! I check back so often to see if you've added another chapter. Thank you for your story! You're an amazing writer :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: permiable_cell_walls (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Nooooo Cullens! Ew.
I can't wait for the next chapter! =)
Author's Response: The Cullens *have* to come back. Bella misses them, and she's still under the miconception that Edward didn't love her.
Reviewer: permiable_cell_walls (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
I like the way you introduce conflict to break up all the mushy love business, but you don't let the conflict carry on for too long. Perfect =) By the way, when I don't review, it's because I'm too anxious to get to the next chapter. Sorry about that!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV
i would love to join you in the forum but i registered like 2 weeks ago and still havent gotten the activation haha but i think that you are just brilliant and i cant wait to read the rest of it :D again its great
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not sure why the forum thing takes so long. I think I ended up emailing one of the moderators or something because I got so sick of waiting!
Reviewer: permiable_cell_walls (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV
ohhhh hell!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: permiable_cell_walls (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
I took a break from FanFiction and returned to find beautiful new chapters in your story - which is and always has been my favorite =) Good work, love, keep it up! Thanks for being amazing.
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
I want no Cullens to come back. This fic is about Bella and Jake. If the Cullens come back, then...well, there's conflict. And there shouldn't be conflict just when Bella and Jake are so in love. Waiting for more. =]
Reviewer: dblkickflip720 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Great chapter! I dont think you should bring back any cullens though, cause that would just screw everything up.
Author's Response: The Cullens' reappearance in the sequel was decided around chapter 3, so it's kind of set in stone at this point.
Reviewer: ravenwhitlock33 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
I love the fact that Bella and Jacob get to stay together after the battle. I also like the fact the Billy says she is one of them now. Please do not let Jacob imprint on someone or Edward come back and still her. I really want Jacob to get the girl this time. Thanks for continuing to write!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ApplesnFeathers (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Did I read that end chapter not correctly? You are going to bring some Cullens back? OHHHHHHHHH Now I am beyond pumped! Ok! Ummm I say bring Alice, Emmett, and I don't want to say Edward cause DRAMA CITY but yeah bring him back eventually lol
Author's Response: Yes, we will definitely be having some "drama city" in the sequel ;)
Reviewer: ScarlettButler (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
I am a huge Jacob fan so I was ecstatic when I found your series. You are doing a great job keeping the characters with their original characteristics and personalities. And incorporating Rachel and the other characters more is an added bonus since it creates a few more scenes and scenarios. I'm not one to read the various POVs but the way you wrote them makes the reader interested. Usually its just a complete recap of the chapter before but you add different thoughts, emotions, and actions which takes the scene to a whole different level. And of course I love that you have Bella with Jacob. He actually fits the time frame with his thoughts, actions, and problems. Keep up the good work, you definitely got me hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know from my own fanfic reading that good Jake fics are few and far between, which is a big reason why I just started writing my own. I didn't really think it would take off like this, but I certainly wanted to write it the way I thought it should be. I think the reason I end up writing all the other POVs is simply because I get too involved in the reasons the other characters do and say things, so I'm thrilled that everyone seems to like the extra insight. As for doing everything in Jake's & Bella's POVs, I started that simply to show that they both had different thoughts and reasons for their actions, and also to highlight the continual miscommunications they have. SM gave us a glimpse of all that in Breaking Dawn, and I just couldn't help but want to dig deeper into Jake's mind.
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV
OMG!!!! yay!!!!!!! ^^ update soon k?
kisses
FF
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Union: Bella's POV
AWESOME!!!!! WRITE MORE MORE MORE!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
great job, as usual:)
is victoria getting back in the sequel? are they going to deal with her in this story yet? and I'm dying here to find out which of the Cullens will make it back first (not Eddie? no, of course not, that would be way too easy to you:))
and I hope Charlie will be find - you aren't going to risk his life, are you?
Thank you for an amazing story. Again and again
Author's Response: Victoria is pretty much gone for now, but there will be another showdown in the sequel. And no, I could never put Charlie in danger. I love him too much!
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
more more more more!! please more
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Ashmerlin (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
I loved it. I especially loved it when Billy put his foot down about Bella being one of them.
I'm a greedy person so please update soon.
XOXOXOXOXOXOX
Ashmerlin
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: underwater963 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
I just want to say that I'm so glad that you add new chapters so often. You have no idea how excited I get every time I see that you've added another lol. So I'm kinda curious as to what you're gonna do with the imprinting thing? Anywayyssss I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you! Imprinting is going to remain a mystery for now. Only one person other than me knows how that's going to play out, and that's because she helped me hammer out the details.
Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Kind of excited that she has to stay the night!! Can't wait for Jacob's POV!! So, she is not dead! Hmmm...is Edward going to make an appearance ? I am so Team Edward usually...but I would like him to stay away just for this story! I am loving Jacob and Bella!! Great job! I love this!!
Author's Response: Edward's coming back in the sequel.
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
THANKS FOR THE NEW CHAPTER! BOY IT ENDED ON AN INTERESTING NOTE! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
slightly concerned victoria is still on the lose.
love the chapter... staying the night, that should be interesting =]
Author's Response: Yes, Victoria will be back eventually. She's not one to give up so easily.
Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Can't wait to read the next chapter! Still loving this story!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Haha, I love how laid back Billy is about Bella staying over. Great job as usual.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Is it sexy time now? Even a little? It's probably best for Bella's sake if it isn't though. Eventual imprinting for Jacob means heartbreak for Bella, and if she gives it up to him, that'll make everything harder. I think they need to talk about imprinting some more (or at all). I'm glad everything's alright. :) And I'm glad Victoria lost her arm - she'll definetly come back super pissed, and with more back up next time.
Can't wait to see where we go from here! :)
XOXO
Author's Response: Thank you!
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