Can't wait for more!  I would like to see more wolf stuff.   I want to see Bella be the cool girl for accepting the wolf form boys!  It would be fun!

I dont really care about the secondary characters. I like the humor that Embry used to bring to the story but it seems to have gone away for some reason. I just want to keep reading about the relationship between Bella and Jacob.

ps I would live a new banner for the story. Thats an awful picture of Jacob!

Author's Response:

Ummmm...thanks?  I know my graphic design skills aren't anything to brag about, but...well, feel free to make me a new one.

As for the secondary character discussion, that's going on the forum and it pertains to the sequel, so head on over and join us if you'd like.

Let's see...Embry.  Well, a few hours ago he was setting up his scheme in front of Newton's.  I know it seems like years ago, but remember that I cram a lot into a single day.

very nice!

I really love jacob's point of view in this chapter! Its freaking awesome! and i still cant believe charlie let bella stay the night. Lol and billy omg! he didnt even care about bella and Jacob staying under the same roof. but then again jake is the guy here so i guess in that aspect he didnt have to worry.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I think Billy's too busy trying to deny what his own daughter is up to!

Very nicely done.  I'm assuming this chapter is a segway, which, IMO, are difficult to write.  I have a hard time with piecing together scenes.  Well, I have a hard time with pretty much everything, but segways are even more difficult.  I thought you did an awesome job.  I do love getting both point of views.  I also appreciate that this is written by a non-teenager.  Not that I don't like teenagers - I just generally don't like fanfiction that's /written/ by teenagers.  :)  So, I've babbled enough.  Thankyou for another great chapter! :)

Author's Response:

LOL! I can certainly appreciate your feelings about teen writings.  There are a few good ones out there, as well as a handful of incredible ones, but for the most part they get a little too idealistic.  We all want a happy ending, but it's rarely all rainbows and kittens along the way!  I think for most of us, it takes growing old and cynical to get the details realistic and right.

Again:  Gah!  hehe  Oh, to see what happens.  Hmmm...if memory serves, you did say something on the thread about fluffiness coming in about two chapters.  Wouldn't that put our fluffiness this coming chapt?  *squee*

I love this story to pieces, bb.  Like, hard core.  When I see there's an update, I drop whatever I'm doing and dash over here like a mad woman to read what you've written for us.  Please please please update soon!  hehe

Author's Response:

I believe I did say it would be a few chapters ahead, but each chapter is two posts....I'm sneaky that way ;)

Awww, poor Jake :(

but great chapter :)

Secondary characters that I love:

Embry

Leah

Seth

Angela :)

anything about any of them would be awesome

Author's Response:

Thank you!

That's the best way to end a very lazy day. Going to bed after reading a new chapter of your story!

I liked it and I liked the fact that Jacob doesn't like the fact that he has to kill vampires though it is to protect people. Now, the next chapter should be interesting!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Yay!  Love the JPOV!  Are you surprised?  :)

I'm DYING for the next two chapters!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

aghhh -YES!!!! Thank you for putting up the new chapter. I am patiently waiting for the next. I was sitting in class taking notes when the email popped up that there was a new chapter. I had to wait a whole hour, knowing it was there and not being able to read!  I really think this is THE best Bella/Jacob story out there, and one of the best twilight related in general! . Your writing and story line is so fluid, it flows so well. Cant wait for more! Thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have the same problem---getting fic update emails when I'm in the middle of something.  I can't tell you how many times I end up reading them on my blackberry so no one catches me doing it online!  Seriously, I would die without that little piece of technology.  I can totally live without a phone, but the web access is absolutely necessary!

Battle scars are sexy.  Just my opinion.

I enjoy the pack interactions.  :)  They're great guys.

 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I truly enjoyed this chapter, and I've enjoyed your whole series. Your writing style is very eloquent and . .well . .  read-able. My sister recommended this series to me and I spent the whole night (and most of the morning) reading it. If you aren't in professional writing, you should most definitely look into it. I am not particularly good at writing reviews. .so I hope this is enough .. and that I didn't say all the wrong things. 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

I know someone as talented, and smart, and sweet, and good looking, and Generous, and lovely as youself would just love to post a few more delicious chapters right away for us... right? ;)

did i mention generous and beautiful?!?

*muah*

Author's Response:

Flattery will get you everywhere!  Next one's going up today!