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Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
AGH! That was short. lol. I liked it though, Jacob would get upset about that situation, especially when he tries so hard to keep Bella comfortable. Just so you know, whenever I think of Jacob Black, and I argue with my friends about his greatness when they dispise him, I realized I no longer think of SM's Jacob, but yours. I love that he's so lovable in your story, when in SM's he can easily be seen as wrong for expressing his love for Bella. So anyways, great job, I'm obsessed!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think if SM's Jake had been given a fair chance, he'd have been just like this!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
Yay, another chapter! I love how truly believable your characters are. The dialogue is also very good. And, I just love this alternate reality. I think I'm starting to lean a little more toward Team Jacob, now! Very nicely done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Getting the dialogue right for two teens is not easy, so I'm thrilled to hear that!
Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
Youre so mean to us!! I just want more lol Im a freakin addict! For real tho I love the beginning of the night. Very cute... Thanks for the quick update! I cant wait for more, as always!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
SQUUUUEEEEEEE!!!!
YAAAYYY!!!! That was even better than I thought! :D
UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!! PLEASE!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
Charming. :) They really are adorable.
I like how you kept the dialogue spare. It was very cozy.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
Looking forward to more! I love how fast you update! Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
Awww, Jake is SO wonderful! Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: ssoopphhiiee (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
awww that was so cute!! thanks :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
MORE MORE MORE!!!! I'm totally addicted and now that i've had a hit, i need more! ;o)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
Can't wait to read about the convo between Jacob and Sam!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: MelissaIsabella (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
Another great chapter! It's so great to see that "what if" love story that could have been between these two characters. You rock, of course!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
Aww, this made me smile, which is a miracle. I've been sobbing for days, and I won't really leave my room because of michael Jackson, he was like family to me, like an older brother or uncle; and i really needed to get my mind off him. thanks
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so sorry! Glad I could help a little :)
Reviewer: -Livi- (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Oh! come on!! I cant sleep without redaing the next chapter. and i`m working tomorrow! dont mean be pushy, but its my addiction to read youre story!! hehe (sorry my english)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: MelissaIsabella (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
I am loving this story so far. It's really great! You've matched your writing style perfectly so it really feels like the story just continues to flow from the books themselves. You're staying true to the characters, and weaving a storyline and plot I'm very excited to follow and see how it all plays out. Can't wait to read more! But, I just had to tell you, you rock, your story rocks, and keep writing. Finish this story and then write another Fantastic Fan Fic!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There will be a sequel when this one's finished, so there's definitely a lot more to come.
Reviewer: leebell (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
I really like how Jake's and Bella's relationship has been developing. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: -Livi- (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
very good!! when are the next chapter up? soon i hope;)
Author's Response: Should be this weekend. I have to iron out a couple of details, but it's almost ready to go.
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
Jacob is so cute! :)
I love how the Blacks all stand up for Bella.
Good Chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Redemption: Bella's POV
I love this story!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jacobsdream (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
I was just thinking earlier today about all of the FFs I've read, which is a lot, and all of them even the AU or AH rarely, if at all, write Bella and her guy of the moment E or J on a date.
I would love to see these cooky kids on a simple teenage date, dinner, movie, maybe some PuttPutt. So much so, that I daydream about it.
Plus, this is just my opinion, I love your story being all about Bella and Jake, I honestly think you can keep its awesomeness sans Edward.
The date would be angsty enough for these two. hehehe
Author's Response: Well, there's a reason these two haven't been on an actual date yet, but I can't change it or fully explain it without ruining something.
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
brilliant as always i cant wait for the next update im sure the next chapters should be interesting haha :D brilliance :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
I'm so excited right now for the next chapter, don't get me wrong I LOVE the insight to both Bella and Jake, but I've been excited since your last update lol. I love reading Jake's POV though its so nice to see how much he loves her and wants to protect her. I know I've said it already but I cant wait for next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
I love your writing!!!! this story is awesome, I am waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
im dieing to join u in the forums, but my account still hasnt been approved, i even wrote to the admin ...and nuthin :(
I cant help the feeling that im really missin out :(
waaaaaahh!
Author's Response: Well, I can't wait till they get you approved. It's not like we discuss any super-secret stuff there, but it is a great place for me to answer my readers' questions and get some discussion going about the story. I have to admit I love that we can just sit there and chat about it----it's a lot better than my one-time answer to reviews.
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
everytime you write jacobs point of view it amazes me how perfectly you get him
=]
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
Great chapter. I am really enjoying the whole thing! Cant wait till Victoria gets what she deserves! Keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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