Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: nicewordusage (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I'm glad that Edward is coming back (as you mentioned it is in the books). But I will be sad if Bella just ignores everything she has with Jacob and drops him. But if Jacob does imprint, it won't be on Bellla....oh the drama.... =) I can't wait to read what comes next. Thanks for writing such an addictive story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I will say this much: Don't jump to any conclusions. i've put a lot of thought into how things will work out, even going so far as to brainstorm with one lucky (and very helpful!) reader to come up with the perfect ending. It seems half my readers are convinced Bella will choose Edward and the other half are convinced that she'll choose Jake. I'm honestly shocked by that. I would think they'd have realized by now that the story is not exacly predictable, and I must admit that I find it hilarious that so many people are getting themselves worked up over what they are assuming will happen.
Reviewer: NLKL (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Ok, I sooooooo don't want Bella to fall for Mike. So under that threat, I am choosing to come out of hiding and post.
I love this story! Keep updating (quickly please). Oh, and no Mike....pretty please? After all I did post. :)
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! And okay, I guess I'll take Mike out of the running ;)
Reviewer: Parker Reads (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I'm liking the story a lot but I'm getting tired of the back and forth POVs. The chapters aren't very long and sometimes we don't get a whole lot more from the second POV. Could you maybe copmbine the two somehow or only show the other POV when it is necessary? I was excited about a new chapter but this one didn't tell us anything that we didn't get from the Bella POV.
Author's Response: The back and forth POVs were initially done because the story was only supposed to be a couple of chapters long and it was an exploration in different reactions and intentions that could only be properly illustrated by highlighting both perspectives. But it quickly became so popular and people were anxiously anticipating the second POV that it just turned into this never-ending monster. At this point in the game, it would just be weird to suddenly switch up the format, but if you'd rather read both POVs together, you can always do so on my LiveJournal page.
Reviewer: Anne VIola (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I just started reading this story a couple days ago and just made it to the end. I can't wait for your next post! I've always loved the Jacob/Bella side and this story is excatly what I needed to get my Jacob/Bella fix!! Thanks you rock!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: ravenwhitlock33 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
NNNNOOOOO - Bella does not need Mike Newton - UUUGGGGHHHH - I really wish Jacob wouldn't imprint on someone else - Couldn't he have imprinted on Bella and he's just afraid to tell her - Bella can be a drama queen - In the original pack, only one of three imprinted - that's a 33% chance of imprinting only. You can tell I think about this stuff wwwaaayyy to much - HaHa - i also know he and his sister have already had the imprinting discussion, I just was hoping Jacob and Bella would finally get together. Anyway, love your story and please keep writing!!! . .
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: JacJac (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Addicted to this story. Favorite Bella/Jacob story. I would really like to see all the cullens come back but I don't want bella to get back together with Edward... She blongs with Jacob!
Author's Response: Thank you! We will definitely be seeing the rest of the Cullens in the sequel...and maybe one or two before that!
Reviewer: brady09 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Hi - I really like your story and I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the characters. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: KaseyLeavitt (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Okay, I give! Please don't let her fall in love with Mike Newton...or Edward! I like this chapter a lot in Jake's POV. The way he looks out for Bella is sweet, even if he does manage to turn his best intention into a disaster of a misunderstanding. You've really got the characters nailed.
Author's Response: Thank you! Writing from Jake's POV is my favorite part of this!
Reviewer: mschenke (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Please, please, pleeaaassseee let Jacob and Bella stay together. You have no idea how much I love this story - Jacob deserves to win at least once.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
lol you cracked me up!!! No Bella needs to be with Jacob!!! This chapter was great, can't wait for the next one! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I knew mentioning Mike would get a reaction!
Reviewer: ssoopphhiiee (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I LOVE IT!!! i'm really nervous now though cos i want bella to end up with jacob and now i hear edward is coming back? arh! and if jacob hasn't already imprinted with bella does that mean he has to imprint on someone else? (PLEASE SAY NO!) thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry, but I don't want to give anything awaty before it happens. But I can promise it will be a bumpy ride!
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
WRITE MORE! FASTER! I DEMAND MORE, LONGER, AND FASTER CHAPTERS! (wait, that didn't sound right) Oh nevermind;o)
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Sigh...can't wait for what comes next...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Bella and Mike equals bad beans. :) So, in case you weren't aware, I LOVE this story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Oh Dear Lord! NOOO! No to Mike! Ugh...
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
well I cant speak for anyone else, but my heart swells with joy - and fevered anticipation- everytime i get an email alert that u updated, ...
i can't imagine why the 575 other readers cant show some more appreciation for your writing talent!
hopefully my measley reviews will show how i do tho :)
love it love it love it!! cant wait to see what happens in the morning.. tee hee!
P.S. Snowball's chance in Hell that Newton and Bella should be together! yuk!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It looks like Mike's getting no love here. He's officially out of the running ;)
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I Love this story and cant wait to see how it turns out
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I've been very remiss about reviewing and I am sorry. this was one of the first fanfictions I ever read over on another site early in the year, I reviewed then but haven't been as good since.
I've come back to it after a break and I'm all caught up now and still enjoying the read. Keep it going. I promise I'll review more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: slippery (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I loved that you have put Jacob and Bella together. I was always team Edward. Now I dont want you to seperate Jacob and Bella. Great story. Try to find a way to have Jacob imprint on Bella....pleeeesssee
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Dear, the story is fantastic. I love it so much! I don't repeat that after each and every chapter only because I'm afraid you'll get sick and tired of me LOL
I'm so happy about your consistency - there are a number of really good stories here which have been dropped and are not likely to have any (not saying happy) ending.
What I simply love about this chapter is that Jake decides not to sleep with Bella in the same bed to save her from any future embarrassement from the pack. When guys (and Jake is not just a guy, he's a teenager!) want sex, I mean really want, they normally don't care if anybody will hear them and what they will think. So your Jake has just won over a devoted EdwardTeam gal
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean about good stories getting abandoned. I know people have real lives, and they lose interest, and a bunch of other things go on to prevent them from writing, but it just drives me nuts to get all into a story only to be left hanging!
Jake's a lot of fun for me to write. I certainly want him to be a typical teenage boy, but his devotion to Bella should keep him from screwing up too badly.
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
OH god if Jacob imprints on anyone other than bella i'll freak out! He needs her! She needs him! If bella takes edward back please tell me so i stop reading now seriously please! I'll die if it ends in another jacob heartbreak! I'm sick of people breaking Jake's heart! :( UGH! Jacob would've already imprinted on bella wouldnt he! NOOOOO!!!!!!!! I'm dying! seriously though send me an email telling me she's going to take edward back so i wont continue to read this! Seriously no more Jacob heart break it breaks my heart! I want him to get what he wants and deserves! okay lol i'm done venting! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry, but I can't give anything away before it happens. Well, I guess technically I could, but then I wouldn't get to laugh at everyone freaking out. Yeah, I know that's probably mean, but I'd be lying if I said this wasn't thoroughly entertaining for me ;)
Reviewer: Haniyah (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
i love it, most of the time i don't review, but your comment about mike newton and bella made me realize i should atleast let you know i love your story!! I am so curious with who bella will end up, right now i am wishing it is jacob, but on the other hand i love edward as well.
Author's Response: LOL! I had the feeling Mike would get a reaction from everyone! Thank you!
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I love how Jacob was both happy and sad that Bella wanted him to join her in his room. He's so adorable like that. Anyways, as usual, excellent work. I hope for Bella's sake it'll be quiet for a while, though I'm sure that won't be the case since Vicky is still skulking around. Can't wait for more Bella/Jake mush. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! There's one more big bit 'o drama to cover before the story's done, but it will lead to lots of good mush :)
Reviewer: mommachace (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
i love your story please keep writting and god no mike newton hheee he
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Mike is now officially out of the running!
Reviewer: vhdnet (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I get happy every time you update! I can't wait to read what happens next. You have a way of pulling me into your writing. Thanks for that :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
