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Reviewer: FurbyQueen (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
You asked for a review so I thought I'd give you one. :) I love your story and I can't wait till you update again.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: kshaudae (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Bella and Jake? Gotta love it! Though i am Team Edward all the way!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I love Jacob's point of view. There is always so much more going on in his head. Edward coming back causes me anxiety. It would be nice for Jacob and Bella to have a little down time--- be teenagers dating.
Looking forward to the updates.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Jake's a pretty simple guy, but he's certainly not simple-minded, is he?
Reviewer: skyrose16 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I love this story! PLEASE DON'T LET BELLA MARRY MIKE!!! I would DIE!!!
That being said, I hereby PROMISE to review after every chapter :)
I can't wait for Edward to come back. Now THAT will be some good drama!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Okay, no Mike then. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Bethany_Love (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
i came across your story and fall in love it
is bella going to stay with jacob or
is she going to back to edward
Author's Response: Thanks so much! However, I can't answer those questions without ruining the story. You'll just have to read to find out.
Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I love it. This seems real, like she and Jacob could actually have a real relationship.
I read all four books last summer, so even though I knew from the beginning that she'd end up with Edward, I'm still (shhhhh) TeamJacob.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I didn't read the books until last last spring, but I bought them all at once & read the backs, so I knew it had to be Edward, too. What's funny is that my little sister recommended the books to me (she was 15 at the time). Shortly thereafter I got an email from a 34 year old friend of mine telling me that I HAD to read the Twilight series. I figured something that crossed age groups like that had to be worth checking out, and I'm so glad I listened to both of them!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
Love both POVs AND your foreshadowing. This SO should have been in the book!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Persistence: Bella's POV
This is so satisfying! It really explains the reason was so torn between the two of them. I love this storyline! Provacatively written!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a hard time with the books myself. I did like that she ended up with Edward, but I just felt so sorry for Jacob!
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
This is amazing! I'm 24 years old and I get so excited when I see a new chapter up! You're a great writer! Sorry we don't review more :) I always think... everyone will review. I shouldn't bother her with it. I will review from now on!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I never thought I'd be one of those people who just lives for reviews, but I have to admit that it makes writing and posting the story so much more fun!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I like your story...and please don't make Bella marry Mike to punish us! No one deserves that!
Author's Response: Okay, find. No Mike and Bella... LOL!
Reviewer: lada_8 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I'll review anything just so you don't make Bella end up with Mike. I mean c'mon!!! Mike???? seriously??? lol
I wasn't sure about this story when I first saw the summary, since I'm team Edward, but to be honest, you've kinda turned me onto Jacob. I'm still team Edward, but in this story, I want her to end up with Jake. You say that all the wolves imprint. Oh I will be so mad if she goes through another heartbreak when Jake imprints on someone else, and then of course Edward would come back and sweep her off her feet again right? Does Nessie end up happening at the end? And Jake imprints on her? hmm . . . interesting theory. Maybe Jake and Bella have a child before Edward comes back. that would be messy, but interesting too, a hybrid and a warewolf child . . . anyway, just thinking out loud.
Can't wait for more chapters! thanks for updating so often. I like this Jake soooo much. You're ALMOST making me Team Jacob. hhmmm . . . that's really quite something. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'd be willing to bet that half the people who see this story just scroll right past it, but I seem to be having good luck with the Team Edward folks who have given it a chance. There won't be a Renesmee in this series, simply because I don't think I can handle that name (lol!) but there will a few kids for a few couples as things progress.
Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I am very excited that there will be "at least 20 more posts"...super excited that there will be a sequel...and beyond excited to read the next chapter!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: midnightstars (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Im a new reader, just read the whole thing through from start to here and i totally loved it. And seeing as I now know that Edward is coming back that makes me wonder will Bella go back to him?
See if things were how they are supposed to be she would get back with Edward like new moon, but things are very very compliated seeing as her and Jacob are pretty much in love and in item and your story has me pretty much on Team Jacob and usually im a team Edward so it will be very interesting to see how this turns out. but unfortuantly i reckon poor Jacob is going to get dumped.
Great story- please keep writing
xxxx
Author's Response: Thanks so much! All that's happened since Edward's been gone, and the fact that he's gone a bit longer in my fic, should make his return very interesting, to say the least.
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
HI THERE!!! i'm reveiwing because ur so amazing!!! bella's so silly, i can't believe jake had to spell it out for her like that! it's so obvious!!! she can be a bit of a retard sometimes, lol! it was funny when Sam asked Jake if he needed protection.
Also, doesn't bella realize how difficult this can be for a boy Jake's age? like, jeez, Bells, he's trying to be good and all and ur just like, "oh, i think i'll make this as difficult as possible." she should learn to be more considerate. gosh.
GREAT STORY!! as per usual. I really like Jake POV, it gives way more insight than bella's, he's smarter! Bella never knows whats going on...
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have to agree with you...Bella may be intelligent, but she's a bit naive. Jacob may not know everything, but he certainly figures out more than people give him credit for.
Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Ok, you guilted me into leaving a review... Your story is awesome! I look forward to your updates! I love reading both Jacob and Bella's perspectives. I hope you get over 500 reviews on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: melonhead25 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
This is spaghettigirl18!!! This was really good. Just the thought of Edward coming back and Jacob imprinting gives me chills especially because, who knows who Jake imprinted on and who knows what Edward will do to get Bella back. I'm so exited to read more.
Rebecca
P.S. Bella falling in love with Mike Newton??? What the heck! That is the craziest thing ever considering how Bella hates him so much and how he is soooo annoying.
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, and Mike's not as bad as you think. He's just a little slow to catch on. We'll be seeing a better side of him soon.
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Perceptions: Jacob's POV
Love both POVs. Very interesting. . .
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
I'm really enjoying all the sidelines and detail. This could easily have been part of the book. You're a talented writer.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really do wish the books had given us more insight into the secondary characters. SM could have done so much with them!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I love your story it is my favorite and I get so excited when I see that you posted a new chapter I love how you write Jacob he is so fun sweet and horny but understanding hillarious to read. And don't you dare make Bella fall for Mike ew newton
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Mike is officially out of the running ;)
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
IT'S ALWAYS SO EXCITING TO FIND A NEW CHAPTER TO YOUR STORY. I LOVE IT AND WANT TO THANK YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL EFFORTS. I LOVE THE DIRECTION THE STORY IS GOING AND I HAVE NO CONCERNS WHERE IT IS HEADING. IT'S YOUR STORY, AND I'M JUST HAPPY THAT YOU ARE SHARING IT WITH ALL OF US. THANKS AGAIN.
Author's Response: Thank you! Finally someone who isn't competely freaking out! I don't know if you've read through any of the reviews I got for this last chapter, but after saying that Edward's coming back, I'm starting to wonder if some of my readers may need therapy ;)
Reviewer: stylindancer (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Hmmm I can totes see Edward coming back and catching them on their first time together, it'd be like, take that Edward she moved on, just like you wanted right? Haha that would be great. Keep it up, I love checking my email and seeing update to Breathe Again, makes my day :)
Author's Response: Now, THAT would be an interesting angsty scene to write! Thank you!
Reviewer: beaandmarco (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
lol.. well i wonder who jacob is going to imprint on.. speculation is going to kill me.. lol.. and i cant wait for the sequal to be up.. this story is so good it should be a book.. lol... i would buy it.. lol..
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
oh sam, he always makes me laugh in your story
=]
Author's Response: I do love Sam! Thanks!
Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Mike isn't the devil, but he DEF isn't for Bella! DON'T DO IT!!
ALL the wolves will imprint?!?!? LEAH TOO??!?!?! YAAY!!!
*cue wolfy fan girl squeal*
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Author's Response: Yep, Leah too! She deserves a happy ending!
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Love it Love it Love it.... definately don't want Bella to fall for Mike... yuck!
Love the happy story for Jacob and Bella....
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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