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Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
Jessica? This is going to be good.
I am very TEAM BELLA, but I'm going to tell you anyway.
I so very desperately need her to be with Jacob.
But you already knew that. ;)
Very fun chapter! I'm excited for JPOV.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
She's not gonna end up with jake is she? GOd i'll seriously die! If it helps any i was on the fence as far as what team i was on. But now i'm sooo Team Jacob! no more fence! lol I'll keep reading the story but I have this feeling she's not going to end up with him because of the whole "all wolves will imprint" thing you said and jake never imprinted on bella he should have by now right? Ugh oh well don't tell me. I guess i could settle for you giving jake a chance...okay who am i kidding! I want them to be together so so so bad! UGH!I'm so frustrated! If this were a book i would've stayed up reading it all night until i finished it....or read the last chapter to see what happened if they didnt end up together i would just really appreciate the parts they're together and just dwell on them a little longer (maybe even read them twice)or continue reading at the regular pace if they ended up together. So now i'm uber frustrated that this isn't a book! lol Anyway Update soon! Pretty please! I'm totally in love with the pack! All of them except that womanizer embry! lol I'm kidding i love him too! UPDATE SOON! I'm dying though that wont help with my dyingness lol! I will not feel at ease until i find out who she stays with! which considering there's a sequel is an uber long time.
Author's Response: LOL! Well, I can promise you that whoever she chooses, it will be a bumpy ride!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I was team Edward but dang if your Jacob isn't amazing. Bella would have a hard time choosing. I don't know I couldn't say one way or another at this point. I do love your Jacob.
Author's Response: I know what you mean! I hate that I have to break one of their hearts eventually :(
Reviewer: twilightgirly12 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
Im a team edward, but this time jacob and bella belong together. and if i reading fanfics like these i might go secretly team jacob.this story is great so far, keep writing=)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
omg!!! awesome twist!!!
can't wait to see the drama with Jessica!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
eeww! Embry did not just bring Jessica to Jake's!
Author's Response: Nope---Jessica tracked him down. Poor Embry...so stupid.
Reviewer: ssoopphhiiee (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
aw cute :)
TEAM JACOB all the way!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
Jessica?? Hmm, I think I might need to go back and re-read what happened in the Newton-parking-lot scene ;-) And how did she know to look for him at Jake's house? Very very interesting...
:-D
Author's Response: Oh, I don't think you missed much, if anything, from the parking lot scene. Embry and Quil went looking for the girls, and that's all we know so far. As far as finding him at Jake's house, that will all be revealed in her stalkerish one-shot.
Reviewer: monkeylover95 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
bella cant love mike she should love jaobe edwared is a a jerck im soo team jacob
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
sorry for not reviewing in a while. the tension you build in this story is awsome. I really look forward to reading this story and am patiently awaiting the next direction this story will take and am looking forward to the sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: seeraEJ (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Please, Please, Please, Please Pretty Please Write More Soon!
I'm Sorry To Just Say That... Its Barely A Comment Much Less A Review, But I'm So Desperate To Read More I Just Can't Help Myself...
I Love This Serious So Much. Your Writing Is Amazing...
Cant Wait For The Next Chapter (& The One After That etc.).
Desperate To Read More
x
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Bella and Mike should never marry!!! I love this story, and I am reviewing! =D I'd also like to add that I love Jacob's POV and that I cant wait for the next chapters.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Jacob is still so sweet - trying to protect Bella from embarassment. So adorable. :)
I enjoyed this chapter, and I can't wait to see what they get up to next! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: brettrocks (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
ok ok im reviewing just dont stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please i need more this things like a fucking drug lol :) love ya keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: thunderstorm (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I found & read through this story last night. I absolutely love it! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: bmrsnr0524 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
i really enjoyed reading this story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: seeraEJ (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
Oh My God! I Love This Story (:
Amazing Writing, Amazing Storyline, Amazing Everything...
Loved Everything. Please, Please, Keep Writing.
x
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
loving this story. Jacob is so sweet here.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Daisy-Chain (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Hmm, a sequel, you say...? i wonder if that is when Victoria returns?
That makes me happy. Your writing is my favourite little indulgence ever. Your story is kind of light and happy and easy-going, but it's not... i don't know how to describe it. But it's just like the right amount of everything. Like a perfect composition. Some moments are incredibly tense or heated or angsty - but not too tense or heated or angsty. i don't have to stop reading to take a breather (like, it took me a year to read Schindler's Ark because every three pages i just got entirely overwhelmed).
It's just.. good. And this chapter isn't an exception. i know my reviews are totally sporadic and i try to be good and give appreciation - like right now. A lot of the time i don't really know what to say because i always seem to say the same things.
i prefer Jake's chapter to Bella's usually. i love your portrayal of Jake. i think it's so honest and accurate. Reading this chapter just relaxed me so much - he's so happy-go-lucky or something... like carefree but not careless, except that he's not exactly carefree, is he? i liked his reaction to Sam offering protection... i think it's like the closest Jake gets to being embarrassed. i had a bit of a laugh imagining his expression.
It seems like Bella's caught in a bit of a limbo. Like she's starting to become more comfortable with testing the boundaries of her comfort zone with Jake, but the lack of privacy between the pack puts her off.
Great chapter! Excited for the next one!!
=)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, Victoria will return in the sequel---when the characters least expect her, of course. I have to admit that Jake's POVs are my favorite to write. There's so much about him that simple and fun, and I think that comes across in his chapters. Bella's always interesting to write---she thinks so much about every little thing---but there's just something about Jake's acceptance of everything and his ability to enjoy it all that makes his perspective my favorite.
Reviewer: dblkickflip720 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I liked the chapter :) Can't wait to see how edward fits into the story and who the rest of the wolves imprint on. Thanks for updating it so frequently.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
I'm telling you I LOVE it! I love it! I love it! It really should have been in the book tying up so many loose ends.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! When I began writing this fic, I had no idea I would take it this far, but the more I write, the more I realize SM left me a million little plot opportunities!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
I haven't been reviewing as frequently because I am so engrossed in reading! You rock!!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Admission: Bella's POV
Holy hell!!!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Choice: Jacob's POV
Your Jake is just too damn cute!!!
Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
You know I love this story! You make some great points, but I cannot lie. I approach this story at this point like a logical teenager who knows their first love prolly will not be their only love.
I really like your pairing of Jake and Bella, and having it end without them being together breaks my heart. I will read regardless, and have a box of tissues ready.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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