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Reviewer: Rhett (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
LOVE IT!!! No Mike Newton!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: rosy1015 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
well im a total team edward person... i would love to have bella and edward end up together at the end of the story.. now i just have a feeling that jacob is going to imprint and it wont be to bella... i love the fact that jacob got some time with bella, but i still love edward!!! but thats just my opinion .. maybe at the end bella ends up with jacob...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: HeyBri11any (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
Oh no she didn't...
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Yea, I've noticed a lot of Team Eddies who have admitted they've been drawn to the other side with your story. That's just a testament to your writing though. You're so good you can make the impossible happen!
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Oh okay. It seems Jessica is just gonna have a crush on Embry? I was scared for a sec, but I guess I also forgot that he's already seen Jessica and there was no imprinting so... *whew*
My poor Embry tho. Don't torture him too much! lol
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
New chapter! Yay!
Jessica? Oh lord.
Why does she want to see Embry??
Oh man, do I have to tell you that Jessica is NOT imprint material?!
Not.
At all.
Just no.
:p
I love Bella being Emily-lite and taking care of the pack. It makes me happy! :)
You've already decided the ending? And you want to know what Team Edward thinks? *nervous*
You do know that I and all the other Team Jacobers will be like, supremely devastated, if Jake doesn't get Bella in your story either, right? You don't wanna make us sad right?
Hehe... But no pressure or anything! :p
Author's Response: Yes, I know. I only asked about Team Edward because of what I've been seeing in reviews. I've been getting reviews from people saying things like, "I used to be Team Edward, but now I love Jake," or "I'm Team Edward but you've got me secretly hoping Bella stays with Jacob." I see it often enough that I wanted to know if there were any more Eddie lovers out there that had come over to the dark side ;)
Oh, and yeah. Jessica is DEFINITELY not imprint material. That's not even an option.
Reviewer: Niques (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
i wonder what Jessica wants
Author's Response: Embry. She wants Embry. Poor, poor Embry...
Reviewer: chris54 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Ok so I just read your this update: First gotta say "Shame on me, and any other readers who do NOT comment your story" Im really sorry, you can "sic" Victoria on me!
Ok well first off Im a HUGE fan of this story, I mean I check for updates daily, really about 3x times daily (shhh)! I have never wanted Bella/Jacob to be together until THIS wonderful story of yours!! I actually *advertise* it to my friends on TA forums, bc its the best Bella/Jake Fan Fic out there in my humble opinion :)
SO Im sitting on edge waiting to read the next chapter..eekk but I wanted to submit a review like "a good lil reader" should lol! But I dying to know where this is going, is Victoria going to for round 2, is Edward coming back (I hope so, add a lil drama), is Jake going to Imprint on someone else/ or Bella, is something going to happend to the pack, ARE THEY GOING TO "DO IT" (excuse my childish talk), etc....
So On to the next chapter, *jumps up and down* cant wait...Im really really excited!! Review you in a bit Ysar!!
All my respect and giddyness right now,
Christina
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: justinefennell (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
i've always been on team Edward but after reading Breathe Again i have to admit im kinda rooting for team Jacob : )
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mandydavis (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
Typically Team Edward, but sooooo want Bella to end up with Jake this time!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Sciencemom (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I think Bella does still love Edward. Her love for Jacob, although real, seems more platonic on her part. She is comfortable with him and they are "cute" together, but she lacks that head-over-heels emotion that she had for Edward. In this story I honestly would not mind if she did end up with Jacob but the fact that he did not imprint on her is a scary thing for Bella. Once he imprints she will no longer be everything to him, and she will be abandoned once more. Her heart would be broken again and maybe she would decide to swear off all men (monsters) for a while! Or maybe someone new would crawl out of the woodwork...
Hmmm. I wonder what Jessica is up to. As always love the story. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Yep, Bella still loves Edward. That's not to say she doesn't love Jake, but she was over the moon for Edward, and even if she's healing that's not something she's just going to get over quickly.
Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
She should totally end up with Jacob. He's much better for her than that bloodsucker heheheh :) TEAM JACOB!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
im a loyal team edward fan, but as long as this fic doesn't bad mouth edward like some other fics i've read, then the ending is all upto you :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
Im team edward but im so wrapped up in this story that i love the jacob and bella in your story and want them to stay together
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ravenwhitlock33 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I love the cuddling couch part. Also, kind of neat Jessica showed up - could lead anywhere. I just love to speculate. Anyway, love this chapter, please keep writing, and have a great day!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Amber_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
As much as i love Edward... i just dk. lol
this is a totally different story from the original of course... so whatever u choose to do is ur choice.
I will be perfectly happy to see who she ends up with.
it would be nice though for jake to end up imprinting on her or something... cuz all of the other stories i read that are similar to urs, jake either ends up imprinting on someone else, or edward comes back and steals bella from jake. it would be nice to read something different. :)
so yea... really good chapter, haha. i hope someone ends up kicking jessica's ass. lmao.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I have been waiting for a new chapter...thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: -Livi- (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
woha! Jessica ha?1 that`s a suprise! hmm, wonder why she is there? or how she knew that embry was there...?
Greate chapter!! again :) I didn`t quite understand the "sudden hush"? what was that? and to be honest, i dont know what it means. since I`m a norwegian.. is it kind of a "shhh" hush? or more like a "breathe" hush? If you understood any of that?! LOL xD
when is the next chapter up?? Love it!
PS: always have and always will, Team Jacob!!!
Author's Response: the sudden hush is just when everyone's talking & they all suddenly stop. Bella joked that Embry could just eat at home, and everyone immediately shut up and turned to see what would happen. Embry's home life is less than perfect, and Bella has no idea.
Reviewer: LucyLu (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Ysar,
First let me say how sorry I am that I haven't reviewed! Yes, I am one of the 576 that has this story as a favorite! I realize that I have been selfish, wanting (no needing) you to write Jacob and Bella's story while never giving you anything in return. I am team Jacob and while I love Edward, I seem to identify with Jacob. Always in the shadow, second best, not quite good enough...anyway, when I started reading Breathe Again, I was so happy to finally find a story that would tell about the life I believe Bella and Jacob were supposed to have. I must say, I was very sad when I read that Edward is coming back, again, not that I hate Edward, I just want desperately for Jacob to be happy! I almost quit reading, but who am I kidding, there was no way that I could stop reading. And that is the best compliment I can give, your writing compells me to read! I love the companion stories, I've shared this story with all my fanfic friends and even printed out several of the first chapters to give as a "prize" at a Twilight party. I'm sticking with you and all I ask is be kind to Jacob!
Thank you so much for your time away from your family, job, regular life that it takes to write for me. I am truly sorry I haven't told you before how amazing I think your writing is!
Author's Response: I think a lot of us identify with Jake, much in the same way we did with Bella. Bella wasn't the most beautiful or the most talented, but she landed the guy, and that made all of us want to be her. Jacob is kind of the same. He's not ultra-smart or carved out of perfection, but he seems 'real.' And while we all want the perfect guy, it helps if he's someone who actually seems like he could exist!
And don't worry---I will always be kind to Jacob. I'd be really, really kind to him if he'd just move in with me ;)
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I'm not really Team Anything I guess. As long as I like the story and it's well written, I don't really care. For this story, I think Bella and Jacob should stay together; they make a cute couple and if Bella left him now...bad beans.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Bad beans...I like that!
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
OMG! I WANNA KNOW WHATS UP WITH JESSICA NOW NOW NOW!!! lol....great chappy! Thank you SO much!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
im definately team edward but i have loved the story thus far but in my opinion if jake hasnt imprinted on bella yet he just wont and you said they all do i hope at least that it goes like that haha i did a happy dance already haha :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
ooo, boy! jessica, huh....?........
one thing, though-did Jake completely miss Bells in a towel? that quite simply had the potential to be hilarious!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Embry had no idea what he was getting himself into when he led Jessica on. As for the towel...well, we haven't heard Jacob's side of it yet, have we?
Reviewer: keeleymiller (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I LOVE this story. That way you write is phenomonal!
I am Team Jacob and always will be. I don't really want Edward to come back, the creep...but I see it's inevitable.
Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next post!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
i was on vacation so i missed the past couple of posts but i love your story :D you are amazing and your right that reallllllllllllllly wouldnt make any sense would it haha :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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