LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! 

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Thank you!

HaHaHa Embry - I'm really excited now to see what she's going to say.

And I love how Jake sees Bella, it's too cute! :)

Good Chapter!

XOXO

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Thank you!

Bella was still the queen of the kitchen when I went back inside. She had enough trouble on her hands with Paul and my sister, so I just stayed out of the way. Dad came in a few seconds later, followed by Jared, and Bella started serving everyone. She seemed so in her element that I couldn't stop watching her. She belonged there with us, with my family, with me. She was like Emily that way, just accepting everyone and finding her place with us. She looked so at home, and my imagination took off, picturing a future where it was our home.

I just said something to that same effect in my last review. :)  Am I in tune with this story, or what?  Ha, ok, before I get my reading priviledges banned: another great chapter!  I thought it was very funny how Jacob was chanting "you can't hit a girl..."  LOL  Cute  Typical, that the guy would turn somehting completely innocent into something sexual.  Men.  Boys.  Well, they're all the same, aren't they?  :)  God love 'em. 

So...what did Embry do with Jessica that would make her stroll up to Jakes' front door?  I guess I'll have to wait and see. 

I also appreicate how you've elaborated a tad on Embrys' home life.  I wondered about that and I can't remember there being much said about it in NM.  It's just another nice touch.  One of the things that makes this story very believable. 

Now what do I do for the next week or so?  I guess I coulld work on my own story, but it has no angsty vampires or loveable werewolves and it's just boring me at the moment.  LOL  :)  Thanks again for another great chapter.  I'll try not to babble so much in  your review box the next time. :)

 

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Banned from reading?  Never!  I love it when people have a character pegged!  Honestly, it's so rare for some reason.  I think people just react instead of taking all the story into account or something.  And then of course, their views are generally biased based on what happened in the books or other fanfics.  So thank you for understanding EXACTLY what I wanted to get across!!

OMG... Embry and Jessica?! Thats kinda exciting if thats right lol.. Just thinking of how she will deal with the wolves! Again great chapter. I really love this story. Jake is such a cutie I love it. I think Rachel needs a good bitch slap sometimes, you know? Girl needs to be put in her place. I feel for Bella when it comes to her I just wanna jump in and help her out lol. I cant wait for more, This story is so great!!

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Thanks so much!

I <3 your Jake...sigh...

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Thank you!

You really are amazingly talanted.  I adore the way your work just flows naturally as you read it.  The only bad thing I can say about your work would be that I always want more, but I somehow think that no matter how much you wrote I would always want more.  So unless you manage to clone yourself (let me know if you figure out how) I will have to settle for showering you with love and praise and practicing that virtue that is patience.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

 

Ashmerlin

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Thanks so much!  I'll keep you posted on the cloning ;)

Wonderful as ever!

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Thanks!

hehe  :D

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Thank you!

I love Jake chapters. I love his insight into his time with Bella. One of the reasons why Jake is one of my favorite characters in the novels is because of how he understands Bella, how he notices all the little things, and how he almost effortlessly can make her feel better. Your Jake does the same things and so I love him just as much, if not more, than SM's Jake. Seriously, getting to read your version of the happenings in Forks/La Push is such a gift to this Jake fan. It's like all the things I didn't get in SM's books, I get in your story. So thank you :)

All thist talk of imprinting has me so interested in who you're gonna pair up. I'm anxious to see who you actually have Embry imprint on. Oh and Leah too. She is going to imprint too, right? I think you said all the pack so I'm just assuming...I'd love to see her happy though. And I'd love for her to imprint on someone that no one would ever expect, lol.

 

 

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Thank you!  I loved all those things about him in the books, too, so I'm glad fanfic gives me a chance to expand them.  As for imprinting, I'm sticking with the facts from the book as much as I can with an alternate storyline.  So we know who Jared & Quil will imprint on.  Of course, I have free rein with Embry, Leah, and Seth, and as far as Jacob goes, everyone will just have to wait and see. 

Loved the chapter!  Wish someone could have imprinted on Angela instead of Jessica!  Anyway, looking forward to more!

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Thank you!

awesome chapter! can't wait to read more :) :)

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Thank you!

I absolutely love Jacob's perspective! He's completely attuned to everything Bella. It's so sweet. Also, he's really funny with the inner commentary, which is always a plus.  What's up with Rachel and the stick up her butt?! She irks me, grr! :P I am loving each chapter as updated and I cannot wait for the whole Jessica searching out Embry debacle. I'd love to not only read a side shot of Jessica's perspective, but Embry's perspective on the whole thing too. That'd be hilarious. Anyway, awesome update and I can barely contain the excitement of the anticipation of a new chapter! Lovely writing, as always!

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Thank you!  I'm working on a couple of one-shots now :)

deer in the headlights, huh? this is gonna be good, isn't it?!

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Thank you!