Ugg. I wrote a whole review and then my stupid internet connection timed out. Blah.

But since I love you and your story so much, I'll type it again! :p

Is Charlie gonna go all 'nosey-dad' on Bella again? Can't he just mind his business?! My lovebirds are already having a awkward, difficult time, they don't need any added pressure! Though Charlie playing bad cop is amusing.

Love your end notes. So funny. I never thought you said Jessica would be an imprint (didn't you say she wouldn't be), so I wondered why some seemed to think you did. I mean com on, you're not that evil ;)

How dare Jake run off without saying bye to Bella! Boo. Not allowed!

Is Rachel bi-polar? PMSing? Talk about mood swings.

The Embry/Jessica stuff is especially hysterical when I imagine Kiowa Gordon as Embry (the actor cast in the movies). KG is gorgeous with super dreamy eyes and imagining his Embry being chased by crazy, pushy Jessica cracks me up. Hee!

Author's Response:

Charlie's not really being nosey---just practical.  And yes, I have mentioned to people who asked that Jessica wouldn't be an imprint, but a lot of readers had no idea, so I just had some fun with it. 

As for Rachel, I wouldn't even classify what she's doing as moodswings.  After all, every change in attitude she's had has been aimed only at Bella, so her problem is with an individual person.  In any case, bipolar disorder is a debilitating mental illness, generally marked by substance abuse, reckless behavior, financial & legal troubles, relationship issues, decrease in cognitive function, and suicidal thoughts.  It's unfortunate that the term is used so loosely nowadays, as people seem to be taking it less seriously.  I've suffered with bipolar disorder for over 20 years, and it's taken away nearly every decent thing I might have had in my life.  I wouldn't subject another person, fictional or not, to that kind of life.

this just gets better every chapter!! love it, thanx so much! your my idol, you know that??

o, and thank you for keeping the updates frequent. there are some authors, with amazing storys, who take four months to update. it makes me not want to read their story.

i think i would make an exception for you, if you took longer. maybe, just maybe.

Author's Response:

It seems you and I must be reading the same fics!  I do try to be patient, and I know firsthand how much work goes into writing these things----especially at the chapter lengths some authors do!---but I can't tell you how often I receive an update notification, only to find that it's been so long that I don't remember what the fic is about! 

Please update soon :-)~  Suspense...killing me ....  I like the way Rachael is taking to Bella, hope it lasts, LOL.  Gonna go make some spaghetti, this chapter got me craving it.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I love this story. I keeps me on the Jacob side of things. Amazing.

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Thank you!

Thank you, thank you.  I think...  I mean, you know. about Not Jessica. lol

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Thank you!

Ok, so I don't hate you.  THat was a naughty trick and I'm wondering now if Jessica was the one who imprinted!  That would be a good one.I think I'm getting ready for Bella and Jacob to do some lovin'.  Is that possible?

Author's Response:

Some heated moments, maybe, but no real lovin' in this story.  That's all being saved for the sequel when we jump up a rating so I can do it right!

Holy crap, woman, you are a literary genius, have I told you that?  I love every word that you write.  Hmmm...I wonder if maybe Jess' pizza making will draw some of her friends and some of the pack together, that way a pack member can imprint on one of her friends.  Oh, wouldn't it be great if Embry imprinted on Lauren or something?  tee hee.  Now we just have to find that lesbian for Jake to imprint on....

Wonder where Jake ran off to?  Oooo, and the convo w/Charlie!  Can't wait for that!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

awesome awesome awesome story... huge fan. i check the site everyday for updates...im obsessed. i can't wait for more? are the cullens going to make a return? i love how the relationship between jake and bella is deepening...it would be really interesting to see how she reacts and what she does. great job. keep it up

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Wonderful chapter. YES I am super happy that Jessica wasnt imprinted on. I was actually a little afraid someone else would imprint on her..... YES I am super excited that you did another chapter. And Yes I am extremely sad that its over and I have to wait again. Now I am just wondering about Rachels mood swings, did Jacob talk to her and tell her to cut the crap? Or someone else? Maybe shes just at war in her mind. We'll see.  

Author's Response:

No, I think Jake is immune to Rachel's crap.  After all, he's probably been dealing with it his whole life.  At war in her mind?  Yeah, I think that's a pretty good way of summing it up.

LOL Random Reader That's too funny!
I love it!

There's so much left open for Jacob's POV. I'm excited to see it!

"Jacob, if you don't eat right now..." That was the best!
And right away, that big beautiful boy obeyed that little love of his and it was just too damn cute!

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Thanks so much!

I am curious as to where Jake went. That is odd that he wouldn't stick around to say goodbye to Bella. Hmmm....interesting. Jessica is just too much!! 

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Thank you!

The note was pretty funny.

I love how everyones afraid to eat anything Rachel makes.. Good thing bella can influence Jake!
Can't wait for Jake's pov

Author's Response:

Thank you!