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Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
This is probably the first Bella / Jacob story that I have read and true enjoy. I think it gets better with each chapter and I love how each chapter is done in each of their views.
Well I am looking foward to future chapters and I hope this story still has aways to go.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's lots more to come!
Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making me wait any longer. =)
I'm beginning to think that you love cliffies... xD
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
HIIIIIIIIIIIIII sorry i haven't been able to read lately... getting grounded sux but IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 ^^ well can't wait till u update
love
FF
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: jdmathis (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Thank you for not making me wait any longer!!! You have forced me to read other stories, which are good, but not as good as yours!! And there aren't near enough stories about Jacob and Bella, which I LOVE!!! Thank you!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
This was one of the first stories I had read when I joined Twilighted, but I did'nt realise it was not finished. So I lost track of it is really good to read more of it again.Its great story I love your Jacob wish he and Bella could stay together they make agreat couple , even though I love me some Edward.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Thank you thankyouthankyou for updating. For some reason I've been having a really slow fanfic week (yours is only the second of my regulars to update) so I was starting to get a bit antsy. :) You've made my Friday (is that sad/pathetic? I hope not. Is it even Friday today? Now I'm confused. Boo.)!
So I liked this chapter. My fave line was when Jake said "This is your problem. If you leave, take it with you." That made me LOL. It was great. Jessica as an "it". LOVE it.
I feel kinda bad for Collin - the poor guys' mom thinks he's a demon now. That's gotta be rough, even if she eventually gets over it.
And I'm gonna guess that the Howl was just to call a meeting or something. Someone has some info about something. Maybe the imprinting you were talking about? Maybe just so Collin can "meet" the pack? I dunno.
Either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And I'm really excited for the companion piece to see how you write Jessica. Is she really as mental or stupid as she seems to be? Hopefully it won't be much longer until we find out!
Lurv Ya!
XOXO
Author's Response: Great guessing! Yes, the howl was simply to call a meeting so Collin could be properly introduced to the pack. Oh, and yes, Jessica is just as stupid as she seems.
Reviewer: brettrocks (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
i still review it was awsomelove youuuuuu need to work fast need to read more awsomenesssss
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I tried to make myself wait to read this chapter untill the Jessica one shot was up, but you see how far I got with that. ;) Oh well, I'm weak for this story!
Did Embry get hurt when he side swiped the tree?
I personally love the double POV. It's fun to see how they sometimes look at things in different ways, and I like to hear what they are thinking about each other. I really like that you give us both sides of the story.
Thanks for another great chapter! You know I'm addicted! :)
~Jen
Author's Response: No, Embry's not hurt. He banged his shoulder, but that's about it.
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Oh you know we love you! Thanks for not making us wait any longer;oD
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: ssoopphhiiee (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
i love you i love you i love you hehe thanks that was awesome a really good jacob pov
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
thank you thank you thank you for taking pity on us and not waiting till the one-shot was up! I would've died! I'm wondering why there was a howl. And I always love jake's pov its so refreshing! It was actually my favorite part in the fourth instalment of the saga, though that had another feel to it. Okay, Okay, so i'm just a huge jacob lover and anything jacob makes me happy! lol anyway. I loved the update! I'm looking forward to reading Destined and the next chapter for this story!
Author's Response: You know, I loved it when we got to see things through Jake's eyes in the books. It was a nice change of pace, and he had such a fresh view of things. What I didn't like was that the only time we got that peek was when he was distraught over losing Bella, accepting her pregnancy, and defying his pack to protect her. It would have been nice if we could have seen something from his POV when he was actually happy.
Reviewer: alaska4114 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
thank you very much for not making us wait any longer for this update. i love how considerate you are to our mental stability. waiting to much makes me rcazy. so THANK YOU
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Salem Witch 17 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making me wait any longer :p. Seriously though, I liked this better, it didn't feel like filler like the last chapter
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: KaseyLeavitt (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I definitely love you for not making me wait any longer! I want a Billy POV about how he feels about Jake and Bella. Do you think you'll write one?
Author's Response: I'm actually playing around with a POV from Billy. I've got a few paragraphs written out, and I'm just trying to figure out which way to go with it. One thing I'm thinking about doing is maybe posting several one-shots that don't necessarily fall within the current story, but compliment it instead. Like with Billy's POV, one thing I'm interested in exploring is how he feels about his son becoming a wolf. And I'd like to do something solely from Leah's POV addressing how she feels about imprinting and her lack of faith in happily ever after. If I can get my thoughts all organized, I can figure out how best to do it.
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I would have like to read a little more about Bella and Jacob and a lot less about Jessica and Embry. Although I like Bella's POV and Jacob's POV, it's like reading the same thing twice.
Author's Response: Oh, don't tell me you're just now catching on to that ;) Unless Jake and Bella never see each other again, the dual-POV will pretty much guarantee it's always a bit of the same thing twice. And while it's tempting to write about just J & B, they're not exactly isolated. It just wouldn't be right for them not to have other people to interact with.
Reviewer: beatingheartbaby (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making me wait any longer!
Loved Rachel's "your woman is here" comment to Embry. Genius. I really love how Jake is just so...Bella's man, ya know? He'll do anything for her, and they really look like a couple. Especially to everyone else. Not just Jake is in love with Bella while it seems like she leads him on. It's all recipricol.
I cannot wait to read Destined. Please update again soon!
ps. I'm so sorry to hear of your financial troubles and I hope everything works out for you. Stay strong!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
You are so loved for not making us wait any longer! You'd be loved even more as soon as you post again-hint... hint! Embry's reaction to Jessica is hysterical!!! Love it!
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making me wait any longer:)
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
You are too good to us.
Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making me wait any longer:)
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making me wait any longer:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: elsye (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Ah! Right more woman! lol.
Author's Response: LOL! I'm workin' on it! ;)
Reviewer: xXSizzlingBabeXx (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making me wait any longer:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
<3 you and your awesome story:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Always love Jacobs side! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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