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Reviewer: chris54 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
ROFL! I love reading Jake's POV he is so much more funnier, I love all the trouble he has with Embry! Oh and on the last chapter, you wrote Jessica perfect, I love her way more here then in SM's story...at least in a "making the story funnier kind-of way"
Im dying to know how Embry will get himself out of that mess, because Jessica is not any ordinary love sick girl....she is flippin stalker!!! also Im dying to know who is going to imprint on who..hmmm!
Well like always waiting respectly for the next update,
Chris
Author's Response: Thank you! True to character, Embry's solution to the Jessica issue will be a little over the top and certainly worth witnessing.
Reviewer: curiouscat (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Persistence: Bella's POV
love it, love it, love it! i always wanted bella and jake to be together. now i can have both stories!! keep them coming!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: AshleyCullen85 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love this story. It is so addictive. You are turning me into Team Switzerland!!!
Reviewer: AshleyCullen85 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love this story. It is so addictive. You are turning me into Team Switzerland!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
(((( I love you! ))))) ..but you already know that!
Jacobs pov is like eating straight frosting, I love the cake(bella pov) cuz u gotta eat the cake.. but the frosting is just so irresistable! yum yum yum
You did it Again!~ this was yet another Great chapter! but you've never dissapointed me my dear! Any pee-on who comes trapseing through here with an additude or a complaint has no grounds to stand on - this is YOUR story!, and were just lucky enough that youre sharing it with us!
I can't properly express how much enjoyment im getting out of it personally (tons!) - youre saving me from having to go to the store and buy another book! I'd rather just read your stories at this point (better quality!)
I'll be Patiently awaiting the next chapt, as im sure everyone else Should be!
Take care my dear! ~ hannah
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love the cake/frosting analogy!
Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
i love you story!!!! its absolutely great!!!!
but if u don't mind update faster!!! its like hell waiting
Author's Response: Thank you, but I'm afraid it's just not possible to update faster. Every free second I have is already spent working on this story, including several hours each night that I should be sleeping. Unless I win the lottery tomorrow and can hire people to take care of everything for me, this is as good as it gets.
Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
i love you story!!!! its absolutely great!!!!
but if u don't mind update faster!!! its like hell waiting
Reviewer: inica (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
thanks for another awesome chapter, more more more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Thanks for not making me wait!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Persephone_k (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Okay, this is fantastic. Im so completely addicted. Please keep the great work up. I would like to see a little more progression with the story line. But perhaps Im just dying to know Bella/Jacob's future. I mean, him imprinting will happen you have already said, just scary, the thought of them not being together. I like edward but you have written this so that I want, need her to end up with Jacob. I feel like I just switched sexual orientations. But I suppose it's different kind of team Im playing for now. Team Jacob.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: BonjourLorna (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making me wait any longer. Lol cant wait for the next chapter, same as normal.. (:
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: abs (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I completely missed the connection between Embry and Jessica. I never read that they had hooked up, but his reaction to her was hilarious. You're not planning on having Edward in this story are you?? That would really suck if he came back.
Author's Response: I really didn't do much to point out what happened between Embry and Jessica. I think I just mentioned that they were kissing or something, and the rest happened "behind the scenes." As for Edward, that was addressed in the authors note at the end of Unrest: Jacob's POV
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Loved the chapter from Jacob's POV... you have such a great sense of humor writing him, and it is perfect! Thank you!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: midnightstars (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
SOOOO glad really enjoyed that chapter especially Jacob chasing Embry
x
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you but ...lol am addicted so i NEED MORE!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Perfect humor...I love it! Thanks for posting it so soon! I'm in the hospital with a sick hubby and really appreciate the well-written distraction this was!
Nice to see you on Twitter today!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I love you for not making us wait any longer!
From Jacob's POV you can really see that Jessica is a really annoying girl. Yet, I already read Destined on LJ and all I can say is 'poor, poor, poor Jessica' !!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I LOVE YOU FOR NOT MAKING ME WAIT ANY LONGER!!!! :D lol
Seriously, your posting times are the best of anybody else I'm reading BY FAR! You deserve an award. Hey, there's an idea for those of us that are dying by waiting. Make it a contest! You'd get the gold!
I'm usually a BPOV girl in most stories, but I just adore your Jacob!!! It's beyond great that I get his voice every chapter to fill in the blanks and up the giggle factor!
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Totally-Love you for not making us wait any longer. Jacob seems to have a good sense initially, but he needs to pay more attention to it. Get Bella out of the kitchen sometimes, get rid of Jessica. He needs to trust himself.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: amandamichigan (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Great chapter as usually. Thanks!! And no one can complain that it was too short! Im off to do my 'homework' im sure with your approval its great.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
LOL!
This? May be in my top five favorite chapters of your story. So good. That 'LOL' is literal, cause I really did 'laugh out loud' throughout this chapter.
These passages:
The look on Embry's face when Jessica jumped in his lap was something I'd never forget. And I planned on playing it over and over in my mind every time we phased for the rest of our lives.
Too bad he hadn't imprinted on her. I could have watched this go on forever.
Brilliant, honey! I am your story's b*tch. Really, I am.
And awwwwwwww! Seth has a crush on Bella? Why does that make me uber happy? Is Jakey-poo gonna get a lil jealous over the youngin and his woman? Hee.
I do love you for not making us wait any longer! Thankssomuch! <3
Anyway, as always, excellent chappy, and I anxiously await the next!
Author's Response: Actually, Jake won't have a problem with Seth's crush. If anything, he can see that Seth really likes Bella and he trusts Seth to look out for her nearly as well as he does.
Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Naked Embry...niiiiiice! LOL!!
WOLFY FAN GIRL SQUEAL FOR REAL!!!
P.S. Yay for pubbing Twin's fic :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Knowmercy (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I am really loving this story. I was thinking if you wanted to make Bella's life more complicated you could have another wolf imprint on her. HAHA that would actually be kinda crazy, but it would be interesting to see where it would go, especially with Edward coming back.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
i love this story you are the best except when you leave a cliff hanger like that my mind is racing now haha great job doll you have such a talent :D cant wait til the next chapter
Author's Response: Oh, that wasn't really a cliffhanger. The howl was simply a call for the pack to come together and talk.
Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
This is probably the first Bella / Jacob story that I have read and true enjoy. I think it gets better with each chapter and I love how each chapter is done in each of their views.
Well I am looking foward to future chapters and I hope this story still has aways to go.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's lots more to come!
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