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Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I mean as long as Jacob ends up happy with an imprint like he should and bella ends up with edward that is fine with me. i am happy with the story right now, but that is because I dont hear about how lonely edward is. when i think about it...edward is probably very sad and heartbroken not to be with bella. Its just wrong for edward to be sad. so therefore i want edward to have bella and jacob to have an imprint when the time is right.
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
ha...your author's note cracked me up. But I do love the story and when I get time to read I always review. I hope people start reviewing more! You definitely deserve it since you write so much more in a chapter than we do a review.
Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Peace: Bella's POV
This is the second time that I've read over this chapter and the line about Embry saying: "You're lucky Emily didn't pick it out. She would have made us sit through something with women talking about their feelings and crying over ice cream." never fails to make me laugh. Such a good line, lol.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Unrest: Bella's POV
haha...jake cracks me up. but its cute that he was protecting bella
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Union: Jacob's POV
Job well done!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Union: Bella's POV
Great chapter!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Homecoming: Jacob's POV
cute! I like jakes version of this chapter better because he is just soo proud of bella
Author's Response: Yeah, that was my favorite part of it too!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Homecoming: Bella's POV
This made me very happy! I am glad they made it back ok!
Reviewer: XFireandIceX (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I'm always happy when I see an update to your story. Great chapter. I was a bit unsure about the alternating POVs at fist, but you really make them work quite nicely.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Redemption: Jacob's POV
You need to write another chapter with the making out! I miss it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: silviababy (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
i lluv u i luv u i luv u perfect perfect perfect love tnos story update need more soooooo goooood
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Thanks for the new chapter, I was jonesing last week!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
ok so your the best so far that I have read...thank you for your tallent and I cant wait to keep reading...your the best!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's definitely lots more to come!
Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
my reviews are far in betwwen cause i tend to let chapters build up before reading .i hate reading 1 chapter at a time. so still around 16 more chapters to go..wow long story. i do enjot this story and am interested in seeing where you take it, as i'm not in on the little spoilers..
as for the sequel i really hope you don't continue this re writting of the chapters unless it is relevant(like when they are not togther).it was in the beginning to set the stage but it gets old reading the same lines over and over again.
Author's Response: I haven't really decided how I'm going to set up the POV format for the sequel yet. I'll probably just end up doing whatever gets across whatever perspectives I feel should be included.
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
I new no one would imprint on jessica she is just way to stupid! you never dissapoint me...
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
Noooo mike newton! reched boy needs to stay with jessica they are perfect for eachother...
When is bella and jackob finaly going to have sex?? I meen come on!
Author's Response: As of the last chapter I posted, Bella and Jake have been together for just at two weeks. I seriously doubt she'd be hopping into bed with someone that fast.
Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
WE ALL LOVE YOU!!!!! more please :) i love this story :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightfan0223 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Thanks for the updates! Great writing as usual. I'm always for Edward and Bella being together but you just can't help but love Jacob. Their relationship is much closer to reality.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
cant wait for next chapter!
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
team jacob!! i am normally team edward, but for this story team jacob!
Author's Response: LOL! Welcome to the dark side!
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Unrest: Jacob's POV
fri awsum. been reading your story non stop. my first review, and all i can say is. Fantastic!
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV
lauren die?? ohhhh how wonderful I think maybe bella should have something to do with it....though knowing bella and trying to stay true to carrictor maybe she should just die by her own spite and bitterness...and something thats tottaly emmbarrising...Hmmm the possabilitys! Im sure you wont dissapoint...and edward like I said before when he comes back I dont want to see bella running back to him...jackob is way way better! keep up the great work Im tottaly into this story....
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV
I have to say that I was not a fan of bella and jackob stories in the past but I think you have wone me over...well done! and at this point I think when edward does come back im going to cry if she throws poor jackob to the curb like she did in the real searies... :( keeping my fingures crossed!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: curiouscat (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
I am in love with your writing! this is an amazing story! please don't make me wait for more. I have just read the entire thing in one day. You have completely captured the pack and jacob and bella's relationship. I am looking forward to more of them getting closer. its how I always wanted twilight to develop (no offense to SM because I LOVE twilight!). Can't wait for more. I hope Edward never comes back...
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: leebell (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Thank you Thank you for the update. I am interested to read the short from Jessica's POV can't wait.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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