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Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Very nice ending!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Mmmmm mmm that chapter takes the cake! ..
and now I can't hardly wait to eat my Frosting !!! hehehe! I'll bet jpov is gona be de-e-licious!
I'm so glad jake snuck over to bella's ...
after the last few hectic days they've had, they deserve a lil "alone time" away from Billys house of evesdropping horn-doggies ! lol :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought they needed some uninterrupted time together, too!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Holy fucking hell. Who'd've thought you could get that hot w/o smut. *fans self* Wonderful chapter, babe. Can't wait to see what's going through Jake's little mind during that chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
oh man i can't wait to hear how you have Jake rationalize stopping himself right there. It's going to be great, lol!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Draicun (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
*fans self* Hot Jacob kisses... yummy!
Soooo... Great chapter. Enjoyed that it was long! The whole Embry & Jess Prom thing is too funny! Oh, and I voted for your story :) First time I've ever done that - so you should feel really special - especially since yours was the first story I ever reviewed as well! You know, thanks to that whole Newton threat.
Nah, really I'm the one who feels special that you've chosen to share your story with us! :) Thank You!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, that one ended up being much longer than they usually are, didn't it? When I'm writing them, I don't even look at word count or anything. I just type and type until everything I want is there. It's when I submit them that the word count pops up, so I was pretty shocked when I saw how long this one ended up! And thanks so much for voting. Most of the time these awards all go to ExB fics, but I figure I should at least make a good showing!
Reviewer: Daisy-Chain (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
You're getting awfully close to 2000 reviews!
i love the dynamics of the relationship between Jake and Bella. This chapter feels like a summary or a reflection of them and what we've seen of them in all the previous chapters or something. i don't know how to explain it. But there were a few things happening, and all the relative emotions, and it all played out very nicely.
i really enjoyed that chapter.
Especially the Jessica-related gossip.
Author's Response: And to think that not so long ago I was thrilled when I hit 100 reviews! It's kind of odd how this last chapter worked out. I planned on him sneaking in and laughing about the Jessica/Embry mess, but then it just became so much more. I usually keep chapters to about half the length that this one was, but it just started building itself, and before I knew it, Jacob and Bella were covering a whole range of things!
Reviewer: AshleyCullen85 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Absolutely awesome...can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Wow. So freaking amazing. I think this chapter from Jake's POV might just kill me. :)
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
ohhh man this is gunna kill me...would you let them just have sex already!!!! Uuugghhh! LOL...prefurably in jackobs gerauge :)
Author's Response: Well, it would be some pretty boring sex considering this fic isn't rated NC-17. Plus, they've only dated for two weeks, and that's just not our Bella. But the sequel will bring college, no curfew, and an NC-17 rating, so hang in there! ;)
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
WOO! eh-hem. Great chapter (:
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
OH WOW! Cannot wait for Jake's point of view. Very steamy. Still loving Jake, he's too cute.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: vhdnet (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Loved it!! and thanks for the quick update. Poor Collin. and I thought the Jessica story was terrific. You nailed her character dead-on!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
:o
I have no words...only an unbelievably enthusiatic wolfy fan girl squeal!
Author's Response: Well, that pretty much says it all, doesn't it? Thank you!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Bella certainly does live in an AU, but she really is so entirely human there that it's sweet.
I feel bad for Jake. It's gotta be hard watching kids have to go through what he went through. But the guy does know his moves...!
Very nice.
LJ
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, he does! I do believe he's starting to figure Bella out, and it seems to be working in everyone's favor!
Reviewer: Golden_eyed_seraph (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Awesome chapter Ysar!
I have been a follower since the first chapter and I don't think I have ever commented.
I am terribly sorry about that!
To make up for it I voted for ya! :D
Good luck and keep up the good work!
Seraph
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You know, when I posted that first chapter, I was convinced it would flounder. The majority of the members on this site are so anti-Jake that I thought the summary alone would run people off. So I'm simply amazed that its gotten such a large following!
Reviewer: Sciencemom (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Give in! Give in! Ahem. I mean good girl Bella for controlling yourself... Jake is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I second that!
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
ooooooooooooooooooooooooh STEAMY!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
My breathing is heavy after that stuff! Great imagry and love that she is feeling conflicted over this. I can (barely) remember feeling that way. Your hormones push you in one direction and your brain pushes you in the opposite direction!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I kind of had to take myself back a couple of decades to get the feeling right, but it seems to have worked! Ah, to be young and horny all the time innocent again.
Reviewer: The Darkest Vampire Queen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
O.O OMG!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Intense chapter!! Can't wait to hear Jake's take on things!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Tishie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Cant wait till the next section! Please hurry! =)
Author's Response: Just posted
Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
Love this story! one of my favs.
Interested to know who imprints on who....
I know its not suppose to be said but....I miss Edward, and bella seems to be forgetting her feelings for him...not very loyal.
I have to admit though i am becoming more of a jacob fan because of this story, and part of me is wanting the sex to begin. lol.
please keep up the quick updates. im hooked and impatient!! cant wait for more!!!
P.s Thanks for your amazing story. It certainly brightens my day.
Author's Response: Bella hasn't forgotten her feelings for Edward at all--it's just not something she dwells on in every chapter. She is also still under the impression that he doesn't love her, so that's going to affect her thoughts of him.
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
i cant wait for more. this is such a good story and very well done
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
Well you stumped me too! Great job!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! Judging from reviews, it looked like the majority of my readers were jumping to all kinds of conclusions, looking for the worst (or just the most dramatic) to happen. I kept telling people not to be so quick to assume, but when it kept happening, I just decided to have some fun with it.
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