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Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
hmm, i wonder what jake was thinking...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
oooh 0.0 i like bella and jacob moments :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Aaaawwwwwww, why did you stop?????
I am loving this story. You're good.
Author's Response: It wasn't me! It was Jake and his damn respect for Bella! LOL!
Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Ahhhhh! i thought they were going to do it!!!!!
Fantastic!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
I hate Bella, she's so damn lucky! Rolling around in bed with Jake...ugh, i just hate her! ;o)
Great chappy! More lime-ade please?? lol
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
I like the way they can talk about anything. Jacob doesn't even seem to get mad when she mentions Edward but I guess we have to wait for his POV to know exactly what he was thinking.
I thought that when Harry died Sue took his place as an Elder. If it's true, she should know that her kids are werewolves, shouldn't her? And I remember that at the beginning, the first night Bella ande Jacob spent together at Sam' place, Sam didn't want Bella to know that there were more werewolves than she thought. It's good that now, Jacob's able to tell her a lot more about the pack's life.
One more thing and then I stop my rambling. It's good to see that they act like real teenagers and I have the feeling that they'll go to this prom (though I feel bad for Embry, he didn't deserve so much!). Plus, it's funny to see that now, Bella doesn't mind kissing Jacob so much or beinng in bed with him. While reading this chapter I kept remembering the first time they were alone in her bedroom, when Jacob wanted to go a lot further and Bella got mad. So much changes in such a small time!!!
Author's Response: If you're asking about Sue because you think I've overlooked that, no, I haven't. But I'd rather not give away any more details about the upcoming chapters just yet.
As for Embry, let's just say he's pretty good at getting himself out of things when he really needs to ;)
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
a good one!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Yet again another awesome chapter! I love seeing some Jake and Bells lovin lol. Can't wait for the next one!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
So, are they going to do "whatever" sometime in this story? Or does Edward come back before that can happen? Please tell me....just a hint? I don't expect a Lemon, but I'd like to atleast know if they do the deed...
Author's Response: No "whatever" will be taking place during this story. The sequel, however, will be moving up a rating.
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
unggghh, I need to find me a Jacob!
Author's Response: I know EXACTLY what you mean!
Reviewer: elsye (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Ahhh! You should update everyday! lol.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: elsye (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Ahhh! You should update everyday! lol.
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Soooo Close... but I do get it.... waiting on YOUR next UPDATE!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ssoopphhiiee (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
ooooh i liked this chapter!! finally things are heating up a bit more ... and now they just need to find a quiet place away from charlie and everyone. thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
omg!!! ur story is amazing!!!!
i no im going 2 b sorry 4 asking this but how many chapters r left????
Author's Response: I honestly don't know. A few posts back I said in the author's note that there would be at least 20 more posts (so ten chapters from each POV), but I haven't been counting since then.
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
soooooooooooo good. that was sexy stuff right there, lolz. what a tease!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: KaseyLeavitt (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
I loved the beginning of this chapter. It got my heart racing when Bella heard the tapping outside the window. Part of me was looking for a little bad vampire action, but I wasn't disappointed when it turned out to be Jake. I love how it's always Jake that stops the action. It's scary to think of how far things would have gotten if left only up to Bella :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I would imagine that if things had gone farther, Bella would have freaked out before the deed was done. I don't think she would necessarily have been mad at Jacob, but she probably would have been upset with herself. She definitely has trust and abandonment issues, and for her, having sex would have to happen once she's more comfortable with her situation.
Reviewer: viqii (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
That was..well...uhm...wow. Wow, I am speechless. All about this chapter was pretty amazing. I cannot wait to see what was going through Jacob's mind!
I'm telling you, I do not think he's a virgin, I mean...he's just so good at whatever he's doing that he could not be one!
Can't wait for more! Great as always.
Vicky.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: beatingheartbaby (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Great update!!! I love how shy Bella is talking about sex. Reminds me of myself, haha. Now I just need to find my own werewolf shapeshifter to call Jake. Yum!
Awesome writing, as always!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
yay for some lovin! Just exactly what they both needed :p
She slapped him?! Omg. lol. Poor Bella though. She's so scarred from Edward, so I totally understand her overreaction. And I love Jake. He just took her into his arms and loved her. He's so sweet...he always knows what she needs *sniff*
Can't wait for the JPOV of this.
<3 this story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
It made me miss Alice all the more.
I miss Alice too! I was so busy not missing Edward that i forgot all about precious little Alice. Now you made me miss her.
I heard it. Tapping.
I THOUGHT EDWARD CAME BACK!!!!!! I WAS TERRIFIED!! I was like "NO! Already?! It can't be!!! Get out of here you stupid vampire!!! You'll ruin everything!" I thought that Alice comment was forshadowing, lol!
I could feel each muscle in his back twitch and roll beneath my hands
This whole scene was super hott!!! *woot!* Everytime I read this story I am amazed by how accurate your representation of a newly forming teen relationship is! Physically, and emotionally. You must be fairly young (or have a good memory).
Author's Response: LOL! I didn't even think about how the tapping would freak out my readers! I guess it's inevitable, though. Since I write Bella's POV entirely in the way she sees things, with no explanation for things she doesn't notice or figure out, it only makes sense that the same thoughts would be going through everyone's heads.
And no, unfortunately I am far from young. I'm facing my 35th birthday :( However, I absolutely refuse to grow up.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Love that they're talking more. I thought it was really realistic that she'd be uncomfortable with Jake in her room at night when she'd been okay with E doing the same thing. We humans are just fickle that way!
I'm gonna go stand in the open door to my freezer now to help lower my temp back down to normal! Whoo! Very nic! Very appropriate to the story, just sucks for me, 'cause I'm wanting an OOC out-take with these two!!! :D I'm sure citrus-by-yasar is tasty and satisfying! (mwaha)
I already voted for ya in the 'Shimmers'. Good luck!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
WOO I think I need a cold shower, or a sedative or something. That was very hot, but not smut-like. Great job. :) I loved all the detail before the heavy makeout session, as well. Looking forward to reading this from Jacob's point of view!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: norainnorainbows (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
gahhhh! Give me more please! I seriously cannot get enough of this story! I can't wait to read Jake's POV for this one :) You sure do know how to keep me coming back for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
LOved this chapter! Though I hope jake keeps to his word! I'll hate it if he imprints on someone else damn it! Maybe having sex will make him imprint on bella? lol anyway I loved how bella looks for excuses to call jake its way too cute! I'm really looking forward to an update so please update asap!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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