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Reviewer: jazjo (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
I love this story. keep those chapters coming. I love the fact that Jacob and Bella are together and the loves scenes just make me want more. Please don't break them up when Edward comes back, these two are meant to be together.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: LightfromEJ (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
I LLOVE THE STORY!! ITS JUST AWESOME!
what will happen to jessica and embry? will he be able to make her stop stalking him?
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, Embry will work something to his advantage, causing Jessica to immediately lose interest.
Reviewer: ravenwhitlock33 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
YEAH!!!!! I THOUGHT FOR A MINUTE SETH WAS GOING TO IMPRINT ON JESSICA - BUT I LOVE THE IDEAL OF EMBRY GOING TO PROM WITH HER - WOULD MAKE A GREAT SIDE STORY - BY THE WAY LOVED DESTINED - PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE TEEN LOVE ALMOST THERE SCENE!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
awwww, he does the snea in thing like eddie! Oh i hope they go to prom, and make lauren insanely jealous!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
YAYA! I'm happy Embry gets bit in the ass! Hahhaha, poor guy...stuck with te insane chick
Author's Response: He totally deserves it, right? ;)
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
haha...wow....nice! loving the fic(and Jake!) as always...lovely job, once again!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
wow that was amazing im glad you stopped it when you did but let that little bit go i lovvvvvveed it amazing job dear
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have the feeling a lot of people were a bit disappointed, but I just can't let these two suddenly break out of character.
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS! REALLY LIKE THE SEXY JACOB! CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT ONE. THANKS AGAIN!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Edward_hes_mine (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I am a total diehard Team Edward fan. But in this story, your version, I am not leaning toward Team Jacob. I do want Edward to come back though, to compilcate things. But going on you recent hints shes going to end up with Edward. Which Im fine with. Love the story, gives me something to do when there is nothing else, and when there is things to do. Om reading this anyways. :) Please keep writing.
Author's Response: Hints? I really haven't provided any hints. But you're not alone in drawing conclusions. It seems the majority of my readers think they have it figured out.
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Oh boy! That was...um..quite delicious! Thank you for that nice little picture--can't WAIT to read it from Jacob's POV! Whew. Gotta love your knack for good descriptions...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: stylindancer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Yay, some steaminess. Jake is trying so hard not to rush her, that's sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Whew.. got steamy there for a bit... I loved it! Im glad she came clean about the slap I was afraid she was gonna try to lie about it. I say it everytime but I love this story so much!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That slap wasn't planned at all. In fact, I thought I had the chapter just about finished, but when I went back in to fine-tune it, it spun off in a whole new direction.
Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Perceptions: Bella's POV
this is great!! can't stop reading!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
:) That was great
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Damn...I hit the end...So you said something about another part? With Edward? Hopefully Bella gives him hell and stays with Jake but I have a feeling it won't end that way.
Heather
Author's Response: Yes, I have a few more chapters left in this one, and then there will be a sequel. As always, there will be several companion one-shot fics from other POVs
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Nuisance: Jacob's POV
hmmm i wonder whats up
Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Oh, conflicted emotions. I thought Jake was going to leave her there for a second, but that wouldn't have made for a very good ending now would it! A prom scene would be quite interesting, I didn't even see it going in that direction!
Wonderful as always, and glued to the site for the next installment ;)
Author's Response: Oh, it's definitely not going in that direction. Neither one of them are the dress up and dance type.
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Love it! Jacob is such a gentleman(wolf?)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Love it! Jacob is such a gentleman(wolf?)
Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Aww, that was a sweet chapter. The anticpation, of them, is killing me! Haha
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
You read AG's TLYDF article about dry humping last week right? Cuz that was a fairly hot hump. LOL!
Jake is too cute. And Bella was justified in her reaction to his saying that he wasn't good for her. At least she didn't go into full on panic mode, because I was starting to feel the panic of the eventual abandonment. But then he reassured her so sweetly. How cute! :)
I can't wait for Jake's POV. That should be pretty hot! :) And revealing to his emotions regarding being a wolf and whatnot!
:) XOXO
Author's Response: No, I haven't read that yet. I usually run about two weeks behind on following TLYDF because I'm too caught up in everything else. I'll have to check it out.
Author's Response: No, I haven't read that yet. I usually run about two weeks behind on following TLYDF because I'm too caught up in everything else. I'll have to check it out.
Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
hmm, i wonder what jake was thinking...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
oooh 0.0 i like bella and jacob moments :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Aaaawwwwwww, why did you stop?????
I am loving this story. You're good.
Author's Response: It wasn't me! It was Jake and his damn respect for Bella! LOL!
Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
Ahhhhh! i thought they were going to do it!!!!!
Fantastic!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
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