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Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

more??? UPDATE ASAP!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

i look forward to seeing what happends next..  update again soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

great chapter!!! Keep up the amazing work because i cant wait to read some more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

great chapter!!! Keep up the amazing work because i cant wait to read some more!

Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

aww, Jake's always so sweet, even when he's being a (mildly)stupid(but not really :P) teenage boy! love love loved him stopping because he knew bella wasn't/isn't ready.

tell me you're going to have them wait a (big) bit longer?!



Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry---these two will not be rushing into anything too fast.  I figure some hormones and chemistry is absolutely normal for teenagers, but Bella doesn't seem to me like the type of girl who would just hop in the sack after a couple of weeks.  And as much of a typical boy as Jacob is, I don't think he'd let her make that mistake either.

Reviewer: cmcjpr (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

Love the story! I just found it last night and read the entire thing up to this point! First Fan Fic that I think I've been as obsessed with as I was with the actual books. Also, I appreciate your honesty about being bi-polar. I completely agree that people are way too cavalier about mental illness and its impacts and it should be taken much more seriously- as the life altering thing it is. I totally read to escape live you and you've made twilighted my new favorite place to come and do that. Thanks and keep it up! =0)  

Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

hurry and post the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

I love it.  When you read Bella's POV Jake seems all sweet and innocent.  Then Jake's POV, he is still sweet but holly hell he is not innocent.  Bella asks you're not ready for "that" meaning sex and Jakes all "What kind of trick question was that?  Of course I was ready for sex.  I'd been ready for it since that summer when I was twelve and Naomi Whistler ‘forgot' to wear a bra, giving Quil, Embry, and I a new purpose in life.  It was the only reason I'd even talked to girls before I got to know Bella.  I was a guy.  When wasn't I ready?"

Totally Love it, Jake is so a guy thinking.  You're the bomb!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

I am really enjoying Jake's POV in your story. Admittedly ashamed, but I skip over the Bella POV chapter because it's really hard to find anything in Jake's POV only. So... yay for you!

As for your Author's note, I agree whole heartedly that common assumptions about BPD are way off the mark, but I also think society has come a very long way in the last 10 years.

I do want to say, for anyone reading this, that thre are many many people living quite well with BPD, and you'd never ever know. It's not a death sentence, it's not always a debilatating disease or illness. So long as the person wants to maintain a normal lifestyle and stays on meds and in a doctor's care, it's quite easy to do.

All the best to you as you battle with your illness, and KEEP WRITING!!! I'm looking forward to much more of this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I think the hardest part of having BPD is simply that so many people don't "get" it.  My own father just thought I was being an emotional teenager, and even after all these years, he's convinced that the doctors are all quacks.  Personally, I think he's just scared to think that something really is wrong, and I can understand that.  Unfortunately, it wasn't so understandable when I was younger.  I am lucky, though.  My mother is unable to function at all because of her BPD, but I have managed to remain fairly "normal."  Sure, I'm a little quirky and not terribly social, but people don't realize it's an issue unless I tell them.  You're absolutely right about the meds & the doctors.  Once I decided I was just going to follow doc's orders no matter what, the illness became much more manageable. 

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Unease: Jacob's POV

 

DON'T LET JAKE IMPRINT, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  A little invested in the story, are we?  You'll just have to keep reading and see ;)

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Unease: Bella's POV

omg I was soooo excited, too

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Peace: Jacob's POV

you made me smile when you asked how lauren should die. She's awful. Maybe we should feed her to victoria. Jessica too... lol

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Curiosity: Jacob's POV

yay. I enjoy the fact that Lauren is making Bella act so jealous

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Curiosity: Bella's POV

awwww....

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Disturbance: Jacob's POV

hmmmmm....

Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

Updates to my favorite stories: a delightful ending to a wonderful day!

Just in case you didn't know...I totally stalk this story...DON'T create a FB page, because I will totally creep on it  :D

jk, but I do LOVELOVELOVE this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Oh, and I believe you're looking for this:   http://www.facebook.com/ysar1

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Disturbance: Bella's POV

hehehehe... Lauren got to her. hahaha... She's jealous... heeeheeeheee

I love this chapter

Reviewer: randigiles (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV

I love my Edds. but I'm completely cheering for Jake and Bells in this story...I HOPE THEY IMPRINT SOOOOON!



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

Her face, her neck, her arm, her side, her---no, I couldn't touch that.

Lol, that made me chuckle.

Great update. I love reading in Jake's point of view. Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was wondering if anyone was going to notice that line!

Reviewer: KateyJ1224 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV

I cant stop reading but its 12:30 at night! Wonderful story. Your vary talented!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: beatingheartbaby (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

Fantastic chapter! I love Jake! You are an amazing writer!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

Wow! This story just gets better and better...and it was already awesome!

On a side note, I have a couple of family members who are bipolar...sending cyber hugs your way! I am really enjoying escaping into Twilight with you...

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

LOVED THE NEW CHAPTER!!   JUST LOVE IT WHEN JACOB IS SEXY!!  THANKS AGAIN FOR THE  CHAPTER.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

OMG, you're killing me! You know that, right?
Paul almost made ME phase! I would have, but there were witnesses!
I am so proud of Jacob, I could just cry! Talk about will power! I know he imp....I mean...he really loves her, alot! ;)

Thanks for giving. :)
~Jen

Author's Response:

LOL!  Thank you!

Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

Another great chapter poor Jacob



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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