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Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Shut Up! Charlie knew the whole time :) At first I was sad for such a short chapter but this was really good! I'm now curious of what Jacob has found in Bella's room :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
I love it! Charlie is too funny!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
I love it! Charlie is too funny!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: D_n (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
HAHAHA!! Charlie knows!!! lol! I LOVE THIS!!
This story keeps getting better and better!! :D
Congratualtions on winning best during the series!!
CAN'T WAIT FOR JACOB'S POV!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Charlie is so great!!! I started laughing so hard when he was walking out the door and telling her he knew Jake was there, lol. I think he is a really great dad...protective but reasonable :) I can't wait to hear what Jake thought of that though...i bet he was rolling with laughter! Great chapter and congrats on winning!
Author's Response: Thank you! I figure Charlie deserves some credit for recognizing that Bella's not a little kid anymore.
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
HAHAHA THE ENDING WAS GREAT HAHAHAHA !! HOW MANY MROE CHAPPYS??
Author's Response: I have no idea. I posted an A/N a while back that said how many were left, but I'm not sure how many chapters have gone up since then. I suppose I could count and subtract, but I have no desire to do even simple math ;)
Reviewer: m0ngoos3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
OMG O_O No way! Charlie can't have known that he spent the night and been THAT okay with it O_O Wow lol xD
I wonder what Jake was thinking through all of that, because we know he had to of heard all of it xD Can't wait for Jake's POV!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: Safa (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Oh Charlie....who would have ever thought he wouldn't snap!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Safa (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV
Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: amandamichigan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Ysar - Yours was the best! Congrats on winning Best During the Series!! Great chapter - Good ole Charlie's too smart for his own good.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
LOL that ending had me laughing, so good! AHA a great chapter (:
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Charlie is always my fav!!!! Awesome chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: tiggy616 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
I love that Jessica is back. She always seemed like she would be a pain in the ass!! I am trying to read slower, cuz I don't want to finish chapters before a new one is put up, but you make it so darn hard to stop reading!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
OMG!!! I would have been mortified if that had been me! Jake's probably upstairs laughing his ass off!
WFGS FTW!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
great chapter too short love the humor though keep it up thx
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Congrats!!!!!!!
And as for the chapter, it was one of the funniest to read so far. I love your Charlie so much!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
LOL!! WOW!! If my dad ever new that my boyfriend slept over I would be grounded for life. Grea story!! Keep it up and post the next chapter soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
That is hillarious! I love Charlie!!!! He is awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
I love this story, and I'm anxious to read Envy!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: AshleyCullen85 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
LOL! I love Charlie! Great Chapter! I'm always pleased!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Congrats on the award!!
I can't imagine being caught like that...well, maybe I can!! lol Repressed memories - oh my!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: meghanrd (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
LOL that is hilarious! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
I love Charlie in this chapter all nervous but determined to say what he had to and then showing how nothing got past him it was great could you imagine yhe blush that Bella had onher at that time terific this was a great I can'y wait to read it from Jakes point of veiw.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Holy crap. Holy crap. Ohmigod. hehe Wow, that was...that was a great chapter, and I loved it to bits. First spooning, then the sweet time with Charlie, then Charlie knows! *dies* Can't wait to see Jake's thoughts on that convo, cause you know he was listening.
Author's Response: Yes, he certainly was! He was snooping, too! I wonder if he'll discover anything hidden...;)
Reviewer: Frzr71186 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
LMAO!! Aw, I love Charlie. I just wanna give him a big hug. Kudos to him on keeping his cool while knowing Jacob had stayed in her room. Of course, I'm expecting Bella to give him an earful for not being more careful ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!
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