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Reviewer: CautiousCaterpillar (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Ooooh, I'm so excitedd. :)
Im not reading Bella's part because I'm stuck up like that.
Can't wait to read Jacobs next little snippet. :) x
Hurry, before I pass out with excitedness! ;)
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Reviewer: silviababy (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
awesome
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Reviewer: CautiousCaterpillar (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Revelation: Bella's POV
:') Aww, Emily is so lovely. I always liked Emily. Well... since now.
The pack make me laugh. They're a bunch of baffoons. (':
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Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Questions: Bella's POV
"He instantly tensed, and an almost silent growl rumbled through his chest as his shaky hands sought out my hips. I locked my ankles behind his back as I pushed his hands away. His kiss became hungrier even as his hold on me loosened, and he half-heartedly tried to pull away. I caught his lip between my teeth, biting lightly, and in the next second I was crushed against him."
Holy Momma Lovin' Jacob!
THAT DID IT! OH, YES IT DID!
thank you ;)
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Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
:O !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
unbelievable!!! nothing?!?!?!? and he knew!?!?!
can't wait to see where this is going!
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Reviewer: futuremrslegresley (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
I am soo addicted to this story. I choked on my food reading the end of this chapter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Well, of course! It IS the best during the series! I love how cool Charlie was about Jake sleeping over! It was a nice surprise! I really thought he didn't know until that last quip! And then, for him to be okay with it...Wow!
Thanks for another awesome chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: sarahbear13od (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
ok so just finished reading this series (longest fic ive ever read.i normally dont have the time!)-I absolutely love this series!!its definitely my favourite Bella/Jake pairing ive read-you stay true to the characters and their personalities,the plot twists are original and your writing is very witty.the last part of this chapter,Charlies's line about the branch-CLASSIC!!and i love the companion pieces too,Embry's was hilarious,i was nearly crying with laughter!!
please please update soon:)
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Reviewer: lulu116 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Great story! I'm a new reader to Twilighted, and I have really been enjoying your story. I loved that last little bit about Jake taking care of the branch before he left. Well done, and keep up the good work.
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Reviewer: ImCurious (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Hey,
I just discovered the site in the last week and have checked out a few things... Wasn't overly impressed with some of the stories, although they were a bit of fun. Then I came across your story - and I am so glad I did. Breathe Again is just brilliant, follows the characters Stephenie brought to life faithfully and has a great plot, I am thoroughly enjoying myself!
I haven't reviewed yet because I have been too busy going straight from chapter to chapter, dutifully reading the one-shots (thank goodness for the warnings at the top of the chapter!). I think you're a fab writer and I can't tell you how much I am looking forward to reading this story further. In the meantime I will definitely be checking out your other pieces!
You're an absolute champ, keep it up!
Curious
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Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
AWESOME chapter! Looking forward to what Jake does in her room!
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Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
lmao! the end of that chapter was surprising & hilarious! i actually did lol, i didnt type that for fun, haha
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Reviewer: Treya (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
gasp! they are so busted. lol. I look forward to the way Jacob took that in your next installment.
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Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
I just have to say this story so far is fantastic, you have portrade jacob's character exactly how i imagined him to be, thankyou for that. and please keep up the writing you are excellent at it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
hahahaha great ending!
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Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
oh how funny! I had a feeling that charlie knew.. but then i was kinda thinking she got away with out charlie knowing.. good job with the twist. and I look forward to seeing how things keep playing out!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kicsirigo (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Hi, I'm a new reader of BA and I'm totally devoted! My mother tounge is not english but I like reading in english so please forgive me if my english is not perfect.
So I have to admit that I'm a Twilight Saga fan although I'm not really the taget of that series beeing a bit too old for it but it just hit when I saw the movie with my niece. After reading all the books in a record time I became desperate of loosing the athmosphere the books created. And than I found Twilighted.net. I was a bit confused by the wide range of stories. I didn't know which one to choose but foutunately BA was one of my first choices.
It is so cool. It's just nice to have the characters back and You are very good at expanding the side characters. I think I'm a bit Team Jacob but I still miss the Edward and the vampire part from the story. It would be cool to have a bit less hanky-panky stuff between J and B and some more twists in the story-line. I like the different POV part. It creates a lot of funny situations. You are just perfect in picturing the difference between the mind of a teenage girl and a teenage boy. It creates a lot of hilarious situations.
Keep on writing! I can't wait for the next chapter.....
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV
Holy crap that was a great chapter!
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Reviewer: beatingheartbaby (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
HAHAHA! Fantastic! Charlie is awesome! I cannot wait to read Jake's point of view as he probably heard the entire conversation and killed himself laughing! Awesome writing as always.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: smoochie (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
BUSTED! Charlie is such a cool dad.
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Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Surrender: Jacob's POV
She is such a dick tease.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Ah! It's awesome. You're writing and storyline is wonderful.
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Reviewer: MelissaIsabella (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Awesome, just awesome. I loved this chapter. Especially the end where he lets on that he knows Jake was in her room. Now that I am a parent myself, I know, looking back on the times I thought I was being "sneaky" that my mom knew every, single thing that went on with my sisters and I. *Sigh* Anyway, keep updating as soon as possible. You are a phenomenal writer and I look forward to more great chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
I must have sat there for a good five minutes, mouth hanging wide open, after Charlie left.
That was my reaction!!!! My jaw ACTUALLY dropped!
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Reviewer: LisiLisi1990 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
omg
i love charlie in your story.. i love how he is actually a part in bella's life, and not just someone she cooks for..
haha he is a lot smarter and observant than she thinks he is.. so funny i love it :D
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