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Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
So I guess Jakie isn't as crafty as I thought...dang.
Awesome chap :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: -Livi- (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
oh my God! I had absolutely forgot the hole thing about those pictures! VERY GOD!!
can´t wait for the next chapter ;D <3
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Wow! I did not see that twist coming. Jacob finds Edwards hiding spot! This can only lead tocountless questions, like will he tell Bella? Will he not trust her? The suspense!
Love it, girl!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Baby_twi (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh no no no no no!!!! Jake found the things Edward left for Bella. Wasn't seeing this coming, but I like it. I hope he's not telling Bella about this, if he doesn't want certain feelings to surfice. We know Bella likes to ponder a little to much about things and knowing that Edward left those things, will put her thinking that he must of cared if he didn't destroy the things that mattered the most to her.
Author's Response: LOL! Sounds like you're putting a lot of thought into what could happen next! Thank you!
Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
omg!!! y so short?????
Author's Response: Because I'd rather concentrate on the story development than count words.
Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Ok so I have a serious problem your updates are like christmas in the summer love it thanks again cant wait to find out about lisa?
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Sciencemom (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh my God he found the pictures and CD under the floorboards! I wonder what he'll do with it. I wonder how Charlie knew Jake was in the room...
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: norainnorainbows (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Uh oh! I smell trouble brewing! I love how you incorporated the stuff in the floor board I had almost forgotten about all of that! Love Jacobs pov as usual! Great update!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: biankajollen (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
:D
i loveeee this fanfic!
more please? :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
PLEASE PLEAS PLEASE PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER UP LIKE TODAY!!!!!! Is Jacob going to get mad? WIll Bella turn back into a zombie? Is Edward going to come back and since Jake found the stuff know that he still loves her and go back to him? Cuz I really really dont want that to happen! And if Jake imprints on anyone but Bella i will be sooo mad!!!
Author's Response: Can't do that since it isn't written yet :(
Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
ohhhh CRAP!!!! :) No stinking edward! yuck. poor jake he's gonna be so mad. :( does bella know about that stuff? Or is it hidden there like in the book? I can't wait to see what happens next. hurry please!!! :)
YOUR AWESOME by the way :) keep 'em comming :)
Author's Response: It's just like the book---Bella has no idea, and she certainly won't understand *why* it's there.
Reviewer: twilightfan0223 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
I can't wait to see what happens next! Bella is going to freak out when she sees what Jacob found.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
ha ha ha I love that CHarlie knows! That is awesome. Now we will see what happens when Bella sees the stuff. That will be crazy. He better not get to wild on her or he wont be happy later when she goes running to cole.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: never fading scars (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
hha lol omg what will jakes do???
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Wow. Didn't see that coming. Can't wait for more! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Safa (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
As much as I have become a huge Jacob fan from this story, I will be PISSED if he destroys those pictures and CD.......Pissed......LoL
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: mchurch928 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
omg....you cant leave that open for too long!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: smoochie (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
In BPOV, I assumed the title, Discovered meant she found the stuff under the floorboard, but no, she was caught sleeping with Jake. And then you manage to amaze me in JPOV by having him find the pictures and such!
Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Yeah, "Discovered" was really more about Charlie knowing Jake stayed over. It wasn't until I had Bella's chapter finished that I decided Jake needed to discover something too!
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
OOOOOMG. Wow, that caught me off guard! This chapter, was...simply amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kicsirigo (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
SMART!
Let's give them the torments of Mr. Misunderstanding and Ms. Fallacy! :D
I'm curious where the next episode will lead us!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
ooooo cant wait for next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Treya (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Wow poor Jacob! I am glad someone finally took note of that floorboard though! I am excited to see how Bella reacts to her possessions having been in arms reach this whole time.
Author's Response: She will definitely be shocked!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh wow! He found the stash! Yikes!
Good move, I think, to have him find it. Like things weren't weird enough, eh, with Charlie and all. Nice (mean, but perfect) place to stop the chapter.
Congrats on the Storyteller Award!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Haha, I was wondering if Jake would find the stuff Edward hid. Now will he tell Bella? Hmmm....
Awesome as usual! :)
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Haha, I was wondering if Jake would find the stuff Edward hid. Now will he tell Bella? Hmmm....
Awesome as usual! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
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