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Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Weeeee! Loved Jake's little dream at the start of the chapter- that explains a lot about his morning you-know-what. Anywho, oh man, I'm so sad Jake had to see what was under Bella's floorboard. =[ Hope he doesnt get discouraged. He deserves his time with Bella too! Well, can't wait for what happens when Bella gets back upstairs! Write more soon, please!
Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Weeeee! Loved Jake's little dream at the start of the chapter- that explains a lot about his morning you-know-what. Anywho, oh man, I'm so sad Jake had to see what was under Bella's floorboard. =[ Hope he doesnt get discouraged. He deserves his time with Bella too! Well, can't wait for what happens when Bella gets back upstairs! Write more soon, please!
Author's Response: Oh, you know he'll be discouraged, but have faith! Someone just might talk some sense into him.
Reviewer: lulu116 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Ahhh! Write more! Write More!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
ooooooooooooooooo! you're going THERE?!?!?! bit scared, but very impressed at how you're following the books!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ravenwhitlock33 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
I love Charlies's attidtude about everything... I don't know how Bella is going to react to Jacob finding her stuff. It could go either way - I'm still banking on Jacob this time - so please don't let me down. Anyway, I love this story - please continue forever...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
omg he found edwards stuff! plz update!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: passiflora (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
lol.... nice.... too bad jake didnt hear the "be safe" and "not in my house" part of the conversation....lol.... cant wait for ur next post .... jake n bella r so good together....the chemistry between them is so good.... all sparks....
Reviewer: passiflora (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
lol.... nice.... too bad jake didnt hear the "be safe" and "not in my house" part of the conversation....lol.... cant wait for ur next post .... jake n bella r so good together....the chemistry between them is so good.... all sparks....
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
I have to tell you...I gave up housework and laundry today to read your story. It is fan...tas...tic!! Please continue...I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Waldinando (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Ahhh... he found the stuff under the floor before she did!!! I knew he would eventually....
Love the story, can't wait for next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
You never disapoint! Another great chapter...I can't wait to see how Jake confronts Bella about the stuff under the floor board.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh my goodness. What is he going to say about the floor and all the things? Bella doesn't even know about them!!! AH! Next chapter pleeeease :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh man, too short! As always I want more, more, more.... Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh my gosh there's gonna be a big fight isn't there. and Bella's gonna start crying. Who will she choose when she figures out Edward still loves her? I love love love Jake's POV. ^_^
Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh my gosh there's gonna be a big fight isn't there. and Bella's gonna start crying. Who will she choose when she figures out Edward still loves her? I love love love Jake's POV. ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: amandamichigan (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
oh!!!! So happy to see a new chapter. Wow, I had a feeling that he would find Edwards things, but I didnt figure that wouldbe what he thought about it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
OMG! First, how funny was the whole snooping thing? And the undies? But the floorboard! *dies* Oh, poor, sweet Jacob. I am so not looking forward to that convo, but at the same time, I sooooo am.
Author's Response: I liked the undies part myself ;)
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
OMG! First, how funny was the whole snooping thing? And the undies? But the floorboard! *dies* Oh, poor, sweet Jacob. I am so not looking forward to that convo, but at the same time, I sooooo am.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
I'm not surprised he found the loose board but is he going to tell Bella and what will that do to her....to them?
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: irvingkr (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
This story is so good and it just keeps getting better. I can't wait to read your next post. Keep up the good writing.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Pictures, a CD, an envelope.
OMG!! The plot thickens.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jct2004 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
I love how Jacob discovered the stuff Edward hid from Bella-what a neat twist! I can't wait to see what comes next. I'm so addicted to your story--thank you for such swift updates!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: skipper35 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Is it humanly possible to upload faster? Haha. I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
holy crapper, he found the hidden stuff! i cant wait to see where this goes next
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh no, no, no Jake! Don't even think it!
He's gonna freak out isn't he?! And do something stupid? :(
Or maybe he'll just talk to her about it...
You're not gonna torture us with a fight or something, right?
*worried*
great chappie as usual...post again soooon! ;)
Author's Response: You know how I love torture...
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