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Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
oh-my-god! this is getting more and more addicting!
so charlie actually came in the room at some point in the middle of the night..lol
and jakes hand found it way home with some non-accidental assistance!!! nice
im scared to hear bella's reaction when she sees the cullen paraphanelia ...
(hmmm, but on the other hand...i hope there could be a big fight with makeup sex!!) ...and scene! bwahahahaha!
hurry give us more!!! please :)
xoxo ~ hannah
Reviewer: biteme808 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
I've been MIA for a couple weeks, but with good reasons. (wedding, chaos, murder, alcohol binges, hairloss etc.... j/k about the murder...lol! ) so i didnt get to read and review this new chapt untill now...
omg! omg! omg! jacob was totally spooning bella... aaaah i luv it! i cant wait to read jpov to see what he was thinkin... *crosses fingers* let it be all that my dirty mind hopes for..pplease?
also... Whaaaat??? charlie knew? i can hardly believe he left without making a scene.. somebody musta spiked his morning coffee! yay!
ok... on to the next chapt cuz its already posted yahooooooo!
Author's Response: Hey, at least your excuses for being gone are better than mine!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
OMG, Jake's discovery was even better than Charlies in the last chapter! OMG, I'm so stunned right now. What's this going to do to Bella? I know he'll say something to her, but....WOW!
I loved it HARD!
XOXO
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
OMG! Charlie KNEW?!?! Holy smokes. I didn't see that one coming. Why didn't he just invite him to breakfast? Wow. Charlie is so super cool! :)
Loved It!
XOXO
Author's Response: I think we're gonna need a one-shot from Charlie's POV, don't you?
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
No! Every time they take one step forward, they take two steps back. Jake has got to stop jumping to conclusions about Edward -- but it sure is juicy!
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
No! Every time they take one step forward, they take two steps back. Jake has got to stop jumping to conclusions about Edward -- but it sure is juicy!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: keanniea13 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
i love this story. What happens next? Do Bella come up and catch him? Do she get mad at him for snooping please hurry up the suspense is killing me!?
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: bunnysue (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Great writing, please keep the chapters coming, I'm completely addicted, have always been team Edward but in this story, I'm not sure or dont care because I have all the confidence in your ability to tell your story authentically. I like not really kwowing what to expect next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:26 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
What a fabulous read!!! Are you SM writing under an alias? PLEASE be one of those writers that updates frequently!
Author's Response: Normally I am one of those frequent updaters... I've been writing this fic since about November, and I've taken two breaks, one for a divorce and move, and one recently because my brain & the chapter weren't getting along. But the truth is that I'm so wrapped up in my fictional world that I spend the majority of my time writing it, so updates should be more regular now.
Reviewer: ASL (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Wow. You are a talented story teller. I started reading 'Breathe Again' a couple of days back and I just finished the last chapter. Have you published any work? If not yet, I am sure you will very soon. Keep up the great work.
Good luck.
-Anitha.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I used to write a bit for publishing, but it was rather boring, and I couldn't have any fun with it. Writing has always been more of a recreational thing for me, so that's how I do it now.
Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
very good! i read this whole story in like 2 days! please update soon...
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: MJW (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!!!!! Please add some more really soon, so addicted to your story!!!! Just love Bella with Jake!!
Charlie's comment as he walked out the door put a smile on my face! And OMG, I cant believe that Jake found all the stuff under the floorboards.
Looking forward to finding out what happens next ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
This story is amazing. I wish you could write as fast as I read! Can't wait for the sequel.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: sleeplessnight (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
You say edward is coming back? the strange thing is i don't actually want him to! lol in New Moon i couldnt wait for edward to come back... but with Bella and Jacob... i honestly don't want to see edward. lol its your story and i decided to wait till it was finnished to read it... so lol i guess i have to say hello to edward now... =( ok back to reading this great fan fic...
<3 sleelpessnight
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Isabealle12 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Kay, first of all, you should know that before this story I was like, HARD-CORE team Edward...and still am...but this makes me considerably less anti-Jacob. :) Lol. (Yeah, I get that from my friend who deems herself "team Edward but pro-Jacob". Like, I NEVER EVER thought I could read (much less like) a Bella/Jacob pairing...but I have to say, I'm still kinda' holding out, hoping, (though it's a very long shot), that she will somehow still pick Edward...which then makes me feel completely heartless because that would be so wrong to do to Jacob... arg, this story makes me feel so conflicted! :((--O.o--:D Lulz.
Author's Response: Well, in that case, I'm shocked you even made it past the banner on this one! LOL! But I'm glad you did!
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Persistence: Jacob's POV
I don't want Edward to come back!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: thunderstorm (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
OMG!!!! He found the pictures! Amazing, absolutely amazing! I love how you put that in there. So fabulous! I cannot wait for the next chapter. OMG I AM SO EXCITED!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Oh, wow. How brilliant! I'd never considered that anyone would find the stuff under the floor, but I guess if Jake were around long enough, he would have. What a can of worms this is going to open! Love how Charlie found them together. He's a pretty smart guy. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
HA HAHAH AHAHA! The entire time I was reading their conversation, I thought, "He's going to go up there and find Jake, isn't he? The chapter is titled, 'Discovered', after all!" That last line was priceless. I loved it. LOL Thank you once again for the entertaining chapter. You are absolutely one of my faves on this site. Awesome job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: maxella (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
ALL THE STORY SO FAR IS EXCELLENT. IM REALLY BELIEVING THE CHARACTERS WOULD DO THAT, YOU HAVE REALLY BROUGHT MORE OF THE TWILIGHT STORY ALIVE. I DONT WONT IT TO END. PLEASE WRITE MORE.
I HAVE ALSO READ THE COMPANION STORIES THEY ARE ALSO EXELLENT.
THANK YOU FOR FILLING A GAP IN MY READING BEFORE I READ TWILIGHT SAGA FOR THE 10TH TIME. XX
Author's Response: Thank yoU!
Reviewer: ApplesnFeathers (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
EEEEEEKKKK! Of all the people to find the stuff under the floorboards! God I hope he doesn't think she's hidden that from him...but if I know you Ysar, the angst is about to hit the fan lol!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
OMG!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhhhhhh lol i'm sorry i haven't read in a while but this chapter was just beasty!!! ^^ update!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: keeleymiller (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
Oh. My. Goodness. I'm so addicted to this story. I can't wait to find out what happens when Jake and Bella discuss the floorboard stuff. I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter. Brava!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
OMG OMG AWESOME!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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