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Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Beautiful. They are so sweet together.

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Thank you!

Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

When I saw that you updated I think I squeed! I'm too old to be squeeing! I love this story, it has turned me to Team Jacob. Take care of yourself so you can update faster. Sorry, I'm being selfish. Now I'll go vote for you.



Author's Response:

LOL! We are never too old to squee! 

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

i LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Fabulous as always!! 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Beresme Cullen-Hale (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

love it....can't wait for the next chapter to come out. you got me addictive to your writing and it does not comfuse me I can imagine everything thats hapening as I read...thanks for your writing.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: PrincessElle18 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Bella's panic in this chapter was beautifully played out. I could actually picture her running outside scantilly clad and screaming Jacob's name.

Can't wait to see what Jake had to say to Embry.

Great Chapter!

XOXO



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Cyablo (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

God I love this story so much, I thought I was a Edward/Bella girl until I read this and now I want her to stay with Jacob lol lol

Can`t wait for the next chapter



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Thank you!

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Glad you are back!



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Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Gosh.  Poor Jake, and poor Bella.  It's just so heartbreaking, that he doesn't know what's going on, and neither does she, really.  Although, now that I think about it, it was good this happened.  It will give them a chance for some much needed Edward talking, clear the air, and let them get on with their relationship. 



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Exactly!  Despite all the talks they've had so far, they really do need to deal with the Edward issue

Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Poor Jacob. :( I hope she explains everything to him.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Another fantastic chapter!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

I'm so glad you're back!  Always take care of yourself first, please! :)

They both tend to jump to conclusions instead of communicating, don't they?  I can totally understand why though.  They're both young, insecure, and emotional.  I hope they can hurry and get on the same page soon, but I think that Jake is going to take Bella's "I'm sorry,"  only one way.  :( 

Don't just run away, Jake, stay with her!  Show her that you will never leave her!

Ok, I'm finished talking to the characters now.



Author's Response:

LOL! I'll be sure to pass your message along to them!

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

This fic really does just keep getting better and better!!! Glad to hear the attack of the compulsive rewrites is over! ;D  (I'm there myself at the moment!)

I was wondering how they would react to the objects.  This was perfect.  Loved the reaction to Charlie's revelation!!!  Great use of Seth.

Since I have to, I'll go back to faking patience for more now.  :P   Soooo glad your getting the recognition this fic deserves!!!

Thanks for writing!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: chancoltbritt (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

OH NO!!! poor Jake!! this is by far the best chapter!! I love it!! I wonder what will happen IF Edward came back? what IF Jake imprinted?? can't wait for his POV....good job!!

got me HOOK, LINE, AND SINKER!!

 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: jessaja (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

OMG!! Thanks for updating.. I loved the chapter.. can't wait to read Jacobs POV and all the others to come.. GREAT JOB!!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

thank goodness! i was starting to worry. thank you again for another wonderfull chapter! your awesome but i always say that! :)



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Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

yay awsomeness!



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Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Amazing chapter.  I wonder if Bella will tell Jake she didn't know the stuff was there or let him assume something else.  Would it even matter?  Bella is feeling guilty and Jacob may be thinking that she will never get over Edward.  This is getting complicated. 



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Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

YAY!!!! I lOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Please please please please post the next chapter very very soon!!

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Thank you!

Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

NEED MORE ... LOL  can't help myself ... UPDATE ASAP!!! Please



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Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

hooray, i totally squealed when i saw you updated, you are a fanfic rock star. Totally loved this chapter.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

What a great treat for a Monday morning! 

 

I hope they'll get to actually talk and work things out.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: dedreader (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Thank you for not abandoning this story... Have been waiting and waiting for you to come back..Love it!

Reviewer: dedreader (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Thank you for not abandoning this story... Have been waiting and waiting for you to come back..Love it!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Glad you're back!  Writing is an art more than a science, and as such relies heavily on intangibles.  YOUR intangibles are working beautifully. lol

VERY tense chapter.  Why the heck didn't Bella just tell him she hadn't a clue about that stuff? *smile* I do hope it comes out soon!  Okay, so this is fiction so it'll probably be later than sooner...

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  As far as Bella's not telling him, she's really still trying to process it all herself.  In the span of a couple of about an hour she's dealt with (1) 2nd base while unconscious (2) busted by Charlie (3) Jake acting distant (4) Edward's back? (5) Are Edward & Jake killing each other? (6) Jake's alive, but what about Edward?  (7) Ok, so that stuff has been here all along. 
If it was me, I'd be knocking back the vodka and vicodin by now.

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