Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Breathe Again
Reviewer: LisiLisi1990 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

i like your story but i dont really like this chapter..

i mean i like the idea of jacob finding the stuff, but i think bella would have explained it earlier.. it is just plain mean to let him hurt for such a long time! she should have just told him the thruth



Author's Response:

I can see where you're coming from, but it's all happened in just a matter of seconds, and Bella's mind is reeling, too.  Where's Edward? Why did he bring my stuff back? What does this mean?  What do I want it to mean?  With all that flying through her head, she can't possibly pull off a quick and logical reaction.

Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Awesome as usual.

Loved that he came back when she asked for him.

He really loves her and puts her first *sniff*



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

OOOH wow, loved this chapter (:



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: bekkie (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

wonderful as always :) can't wait to read Jacobs POV. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 352twiddle (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Ok I saw this fic by accident during a lunch break at work and I couldn't stop till i finished reading everything you've ever written! I'm Addicted!! I am such a pure bred Jacob lover it's ridiculous and I love that you featured j/b relationship here!! I love how sweet, tortured and endearing their relationship is and I hope for this to remain a true blue TEAM JACOB FIC!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Great chapter once again. I'm so glad that went as well as it did. I'm sure things could have been a lot worse. Can't wait to read Jake's POV of this and get more insight into his head about everything. Update soon :o)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Man, I love your story, but I really wish your chapters were longer!  Right when I get into the story the chapter ends!  Anyway, I loved the chapter I'm actually really happy that Bella didn't cry or faint or something.  Can't wait for Jake's POV!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Megan39 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Your story is amazing!  You truly have a gift for writing and it is a privledge to read your work.  I'm glad you're "back on track" and am looking forward to future updates!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Beautifully written, but I expected nothing less.  My heart goes out to them both. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

All the writers disappeared and came back at around the same time... weird... anyway, glad you're back =D This is one of my favorite stories here on Twilighted and I hate logging on and seeing that it isn't updated :'( It makes me cry... This chapter was pretty cool. It seems like Jake and Bells have a lot to learn about communication :/  Will Edward come back? If he does, she'll choose Jacob, right? Gosh, I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

wow! emotional!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: beatingheartbaby (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Awesome chapter!!!!! Poor Bella and Jake. I hope it all works out for them. Fantastic writing. Take all the time you need for your next chapter if it comes out as good as this one did. Okay, that's a lie. Don't take all the time you need. But take time, just don't leave us hanging, lol. As long as you come back to us with a chapter. Anyway, awesome! Love your story, it's amazing! You are amazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Whosi-whatsi (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

ahhhh! thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you for up-dating! you're the BEST! can't wait to see Jake POV!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

I really do love this story...glad to see it's back.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Poor Jacob, I hate that he feels so insecure and scared. I hope that Bella can figure things out for herself and be the woman that he needs.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: TwilightRoxMySox (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Finally! Yay! I went on vacation and came back expecting a ton of updates to read, but none. =[ Oh well. I loved this chapter more than all the others. Jacob's emotion in this almost made me cry. Poor baby. I really hope Bella stay with Jake. More please! =]



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Treya (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

I didn't even think of Jacob taking those posssessions that way.  I feel really bad for him.  I am very glad that you updated however, I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

awesome chapter. really do hope you can post again soon. did u say you were going to bring Edwards character back eventually?



Author's Response:

Yep, Edward's gonna pop up in the sequel.  He has a few things he'd like to clear up.

Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

So glad your back this has to be one of my all time favorite stories. I really missed your updates. Keep writing you are awsome!

Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

So glad your back this has to be one of my all time favorite stories. I really missed your updates. Keep writing you are awsome!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

So glad your back this has to be one of my all time favorite stories. I really missed your updates. Keep writing you are awsome!

Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

I'll go vote for your story after this... I'm so glad your back to writing this story!  It is BY FAR my favorite :)  Great Chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

This update made my day...along with the cone of fro-yo I had earlier...

:D



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

Beautiful. They are so sweet together.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Panic: Bella's POV

When I saw that you updated I think I squeed! I'm too old to be squeeing! I love this story, it has turned me to Team Jacob. Take care of yourself so you can update faster. Sorry, I'm being selfish. Now I'll go vote for you.



Author's Response:

LOL! We are never too old to squee! 

Submit a Review




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.