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Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Panic: Bella's POV
Tough, or not so tough decisions for Bella. Jacob is her man, in this story anyway, and I love that. There is no doubt. Deep sigh though....I feel for Jacob.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Discovered: Jacob's POV
Poor Jacob! I would hate to have found that secret stash! Bella doesn't even know its there! Maybe its better he found it first?
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Discovered: Bella's POV
Your Charlie is absolutely perfect. I love their dynamic together. You have such a real gift for portraying characters and their relationships with others. It is a joy to read.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Overwrought: Jacob's POV
This story gets more amazing with every chapter. You bring so much more detail into the pack and residents of La Push, like how Harry had a heart attack. I also love how you describe Bella and Jacob's relationship, and definitely their not-so-innocence! WOW.
Reviewer: tha_songbird (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
Hello all! Im new to twighlited and this is the first story I chose to read. First of all this is absolutely amazing. Im a true blue Edward fan but Im falling in love Jacob with every chapter. But all this amazement is falling by the way side because Im also very CONFUSED. Is the story completed?
Reviewer: Bella_Luna (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
This story is so great. Fantastic writing. Please post the next chapter soon!!! Dying to read it.
Reviewer: Bella_Luna (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
This story is so great. Fantastic writing. Please post the next chapter soon!!! Dying to read it.
Reviewer: ninjakori (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
I love this story! Can't wait for an update!!!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Overwrought: Bella's POV
You did not just end the chapter there!!! I am tempted to skip forward to pick back up where this leaves off..but then the promise of Jacob's POV in this scene is way to good to pass up.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
love it. hope you update soon.
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
I'm so happy you updated on twilighted! I have been checking on your website for a while now, and couldn't read your last chapters! What a relief to be able to read them here! The last ones were pretty intense! A great job as usual! And Jacob must have been pretty messed up not to notice Charlie coming up the stairs! I can't wait to discover Charlie's POV!
It seems you have a lot of stuff going on, but I hope you're doing well. :)
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
Just wanted to congratulate you on all of your wins in the Wolfpack Awards. Wow! Best story, best author, ect. ect. ect.! Fantastic! You are the best. I'm glad everybody else realizes it also. ;) I've read approximately 200 fan-fics since joining 6 weeks ago and without a doubt, "Breath Again" is my favorite story.
Reviewer: steph black (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
aww dude i was soo engrossed i didnt know it was the last chapter! im raging!
please please please keep it updated!
its even better than the real books and thats saying something seeing as i can never put them down!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Nuisance: Bella's POV
Somewhat relieved that Jessica won't be in the "know"- I don't trust her with a secret. But her chasing after Embry, and Embry phasing and trying to get away is hilarious.
Now, imprinting - will it be Bella and Jacob ? Of course it will be, right?????
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Quiet: Jacob's POV
This is going to be really good..Jessica and Embry....my oh my. This story is so many things, and with this new plot addition, so much fun!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Quiet: Bella's POV
I am enjoying this alternate universe where I can be completely Team Jacob - I was always so torn, this is a nice gift you have given me to indulge without any guilt. So definitely TEAM JACOB!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: tonya (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
OK, can't wait to finish the story, so please hurry up!
You have done a great job of capturing the characters and their emotions. So many of the stories have the characters moving too quickly into sexual situations and although I am anxious (did I just say that??) to read about Jacob, I like that you have made the scenerio real.
Thanks for writing...can't wait to see more posts.
Reviewer: tonya (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
OK, can't wait to finish the story, so please hurry up!
You have done a great job of capturing the characters and their emotions. So many of the stories have the characters moving too quickly into sexual situations and although I am anxious (did I just say that??) to read about Jacob, I like that you have made the scenerio real.
Thanks for writing...can't wait to see more posts.
Reviewer: tonya (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
OK, can't wait to finish the story, so please hurry up!
You have done a great job of capturing the characters and their emotions. So many of the stories have the characters moving too quickly into sexual situations and although I am anxious (did I just say that??) to read about Jacob, I like that you have made the scenerio real.
Thanks for writing...can't wait to see more posts.
Reviewer: tonya (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
OK, can't wait to finish the story, so please hurry up!
You have done a great job of capturing the characters and their emotions. So many of the stories have the characters moving too quickly into sexual situations and although I am anxious (did I just say that??) to read about Jacob, I like that you have made the scenerio real.
Thanks for writing...can't wait to see more posts.
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
I reviewed on this chapter when it came out. This is just to say I love this story. It's the first Jake and Bella story I read and fell absolutely in love with it. I think Im going to start reading it again just to remember all the good stuff about it. We miss you Ysar! Hope all is well and I can't wait for your next update. I know Im not the only one either. Another great chapter would make us do the happy dance again. Hope you come back soon!
(Oh and if I didn't say it before, congrats on your awards. Well deserved!!!)
Reviewer: Twiolic (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
I have truly enjoyed Breathe Again. You have captured the personalities of Jacob and Bella perfectly. However, I'm about as frustrated as I could possibly be. Chapter after chapter of sweet, sensuous foreplay between Jacob and Bella without any satisfaction. Get them together for heavens sake! Sadly, I think see more heartache in Jacob's future as he once again loses Bella to Edward. If so, I hope its without her virginity and not without great effort. I love Edward to death, but its Edwards turn to be heartbroken because of Jacob. New Moon and Eclipse ended badly for Jacob and I'm looking for something different.
Reviewer: seeraEJ (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
haha i feel like a toddler who wants ice-cream but whos mother refuses to buy it! next chapter! please (: pretty pretty please (:
awesome writing (: love everything (:
x
Reviewer: jacobgirl87 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
Hi again. I'm just sitting here pondering the whole imprinting thing... you know maybe all Bella needs is a new haircut and poof! love at first sight imprinting. Or Jake imprints on some mean chick then she gets hit by a bus (nope, too mean), a tree? Bella driving a bus? Then Jake would be off the hook right? Back to Bells? C'mon. Please? I can't stand to see your Jake leave her. There must be justice!!!
Love you dearly! I know you will do what's right. I trust you. Just think of the Team Jacob girls out there who need closure!
Reviewer: jacobgirl87 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
Sending you all my love and adoration! Be well and be happy. We're all waiting patiently for your next chapter.
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