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Reviewer: eyr714 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Moments: Jacob's POV
Loved It! Your awesome at this.
Reviewer: Treya (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Oh no Victoria was way too close for comfort, I feel a trap coming on....
Reviewer: MissNiki (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
your stories are absolutely incredible. ive read your whole series so far up to this point in two days. im addicted. you have amazing talent. i love your stories, they make me think about my own relationship :) so thank you for giving me another world that i can escape to when im away from my boyfriend.
i really hope you continue posting. once i figure out how to get around this site i will definitely add you as my favorite author. i was thinking about a few things and the way jacob is acting towards bella makes it seem like hes imprinted on her already but i cant quite be sure. if he hasnt then it would be really nice if thats what would happen. i love how romantic and suspensful it is. hopefully jacob and bella can actually be together without being afraid and they finally get to prove and show their love physically.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
I have a feeling things aren't going to end well for Jake and that is where Edward steps in.
Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
As always, great job!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, as usual. And i forgot to post this on the other story, but the story of Charlie's POV is wonderful!!
Reviewer: insidebellasvvan (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
i've finally caught up to you. for the longest time i couldn't seem to find time to get online to read more. i <3 your story so much. can't wait for the next installment. and for imprinting :D now, i'm headed over to "broken" i love your writing style. must get more!
Reviewer: kicsirigo (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
hm...I really like this story.
In more detailes I liked it after reading the first 55 chaps or so...but than I had to wait too much from update to update. It's a bit confusing 'cause I read and am reading some other stories from twilighted.net and it is hard to differentiate all the plots, twists and turns from the different stories.
So when I started reading this I had to reread the last few chaps to put my mind into lace :D. I know the problem is in my "computer" LOL
But after doing all the "research" I understood everything again and I fell in love with the story again.
So please, please update more often!!!Or maybe I will just wait until the story comes to its end and read it after that. If only I cloud do that :))
Have a nice day!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
I was so happy to see the update--- bouncing up and down in my ergonomic chair at work making little clappies. Yay! Love the chapter. Not so happy about Jake leaving even for a little while. I'm gonna try the auction. I'm often stifled by my ancient apple. I have a terrible time with ff. I totally voted for you on sparkle. I almost had an anurisim when I had to choose between you and another author from Team SOB.
Thanks for continuing.....even when you have other priorities.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
GREAT CHAPTER - I DO ALREADY READ BOTH OG THE STORIES!
CANT WAIT FOR JACOBS POV!
Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Confessions: Bella's POV
is Jacob and Bella ever going to make it around to thrid base
Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Good chapter...missed your writing! Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
i love it.
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
sigh of reliefe, yay for updateing! thank you
Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for all of the new chapters! I've had a permagrin on my face and it's your fault. :D I'm voting as hard as I can.
I thanked you, right?
~Jen
Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
okay, I read both of the stories you sent me too, great stories..I am looking forward to the updates...but sence I am all caught up on my homework from you, you can update again...lol! just letting you know! thnks for sending me to them!
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Great Chaper! I'll go check out those other two stories now :)
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Very good, Can't wait for jake, He is Hawt!!!!
Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
OMG! Poor Bells! At least Mike has lost some of his creeper-esque tendencies. That's a plus, anyway.
As always, <3 Jakie....<3 Ysar....:D
Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
i love checking my emails and seeing one that says beath again has been updated. you my dear just made my day! your 44 kinds of awesome! :) great job keep up the awesomeness thats your writing :)
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Thanks for keeping the story going!
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Thanks for keeping the story going!
Reviewer: norainnorainbows (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
I LOVE YOU!!!
This and the last update have been amazing! Keep up the excellent work! I missed you and this story while you were on hiatus.
Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Aw, you can't leave it there! Not with all this anticipation, lol.
I can undertand why she's leaving, but I don't think that's the smart thing for her to do. Silly Bella... Never thinking things through. Perhaps that's why we all love her. :)
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
the part about prying her fingernails off is like 1 of my worst fears, totally grossed me out, haha. i can believe the cullens havent come back yet, youre really dragging on the suspense, lolz.
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
WOOT! More Victoria/Werewolf action...and a freaking out bella of course :L I hope Bella does call Emily, she makes me aww. Great chapter (:
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